What Is Your Greatest Accomplishment?(英語口語萬能模板) 你最大的成就是什么?
STAR法則:
(S) Situation - Describe the situation and the context in which the event took place.
(T) Task - Talk about the tasks you had to complete (i.e. your challenge or responsibility).
(A) Action - Explain the actions you took to address the above-mentioned challenges or responsibilities.
(R) Results - Explain the kind of results you achieved. When describing the outcome, if possible, mention numbers and quantifiable facts
star法則 :
(S)情況-描述事件發(fā)生的情況和背景。
(T)任務(wù)-談?wù)撃惚仨毻瓿傻娜蝿?wù)(即你的挑戰(zhàn)或責(zé)任)。
(A)行動(dòng)-解釋您為應(yīng)對(duì)上述挑戰(zhàn)或責(zé)任所采取的行動(dòng)。
(R)結(jié)果-解釋你所取得的結(jié)果。在描述結(jié)果時(shí),如果可能的話,要提到數(shù)字和可量化的事實(shí)
Situation - “Well, as a recent graduate of ... University, I think my greatest achievement was what I managed to accomplish during my time there. My scholarship only covered half of the tuition, and my family was unable to support me financially.?
情況——“嗯,作為一個(gè)剛畢業(yè)的……我認(rèn)為我最大的成就是我在那里所取得的成就。我的獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金只支付了一半的學(xué)費(fèi),而我的家人也無法在經(jīng)濟(jì)上養(yǎng)活我
Task - “So, I learned early on that I had to manage my time down to the hour in order to be efficient and on top of everything.”
任務(wù)——“所以,我很早就學(xué)會(huì)了,我必須把時(shí)間管理到一個(gè)小時(shí),以便保持高效和最高的一切。”
Action - “I worked in every summer and winter vacation. Through hard work and dedication, I managed to balance studying, working part-time, and even volunteering to gain some experience. It was tiring at times, but I scheduled pretty much everything I had to do in my personal calendar. This way, I never missed a deadline, assignment or any other responsibility.”
行動(dòng)——“我每年的暑假和寒假都在工作。通過努力工作和奉獻(xiàn),我成功地平衡了學(xué)習(xí),兼職工作,甚至志愿獲得一些經(jīng)驗(yàn)。有時(shí)會(huì)很累,但我把所有要做的事情都安排在我的個(gè)人日程上。這樣一來,我就從來沒有錯(cuò)過過最后期限、任務(wù)或任何其他責(zé)任?!?/p>
Results - “In the end, I graduated with a GPA of 3.8 +成就, and also interned as the university social media assistant during my last 2 semesters. There, I also learned a lot about marketing, how to communicate with our followers, and managed to organize the biggest university event where up to 500 students showed up.”
結(jié)果:“最后,我畢業(yè)時(shí)的平均績(jī)點(diǎn)為3.8+成就,并在最后兩個(gè)學(xué)期擔(dān)任了大學(xué)社交媒體助理。在那里,我也學(xué)到了很多關(guān)于市場(chǎng)營銷的知識(shí),如何與我們的追隨者交流,并設(shè)法組織了一場(chǎng)最大的大學(xué)活動(dòng),有多達(dá)500名學(xué)生到場(chǎng)?!?/p>
EXAMPLE 1:
Situation: My greatest achievement was in a previous role where I was working as part of a team on the launch of a new company product.?
Task: We wanted to make the product launch as successful as possible.
Action: So we started out by brainstorming different ideas about how we could launch the product before presenting them to our manager for approval. After he gave us the go ahead to launch the product, we worked tirelessly to push it out to as many people as possible.
Result:? My task was to create the social media posts during the product launch, and these proved to be a huge success. Once the product launch was finished my manager informed us that we, as a team, had managed to surpass all previous product launches in terms of sales!
例子1:
情況:我最大的成就是在之前的一個(gè)職位上,我作為一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)的一員,在發(fā)布一個(gè)新的公司產(chǎn)品。
任務(wù):我們希望讓產(chǎn)品的發(fā)布取得盡可能的成功。
行動(dòng):所以我們先進(jìn)行不同的頭腦風(fēng)暴,在提交給我們的經(jīng)理批準(zhǔn)之前,關(guān)于如何推出產(chǎn)品的想法。在他允許我們推出這個(gè)產(chǎn)品后,我們不知疲倦地把它推廣給盡可能多的人。
結(jié)果:我的任務(wù)是在產(chǎn)品發(fā)布期間創(chuàng)建社交媒體上的帖子,這些帖子獲得了巨大的成功。在產(chǎn)品發(fā)布完成后,我的經(jīng)理告訴我們,作為一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì),我們已經(jīng)設(shè)法在銷售方面超過了之前所有的產(chǎn)品發(fā)布
EXAMPLE 2:
Situation and Task: My greatest achievement was working in my last role where I managed to help the company win an important sales contract.?
Action: ?I was part of a three-person team and our job was to put together the company proposal, and then deliver it to our manager who would submit it for tender. We worked really hard for two weeks to get the information and the proposal together, and we made sure it was as cost effective and efficient as possible.
Result: ?A week after my manager submitted our proposal, we received the news that we had won the sales contract! It was great team effort, and something I am still very proud of today.
示例2:
情況和任務(wù):我最大的成就是在我的最后一個(gè)職位上工作,我設(shè)法幫助公司贏得了一份重要的銷售合同。
行動(dòng):我是一個(gè)三人團(tuán)隊(duì)的一員,我們的工作是把公司的提案整理起來,然后交給我們的經(jīng)理,由經(jīng)理提交投標(biāo)。我們花了兩周的時(shí)間來收集信息和提案,并確保它盡可能地具有成本效益。
結(jié)果:在我的經(jīng)理提交了我們的提案一周后,我們收到了我們贏得了銷售合同的消息!這是一個(gè)偉大的團(tuán)隊(duì)努力,我今天仍然感到非常自豪