當(dāng)你認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備了2個(gè)素材以后，并形成自己的模式模板以后，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)再準(zhǔn)備新素材的時(shí)候，模式，句型，好的形容詞都會(huì)不自然的跑出來。

Describe a book that you enjoyed reading because youhave to think a lot 劍14-

素材還可以適用于題目:描述電影，電影角色，

大家看了我這篇稿子可以自行改成電影版的稿子，用自己最喜歡的電影/書創(chuàng)作自己的素材。
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?我的開場(chǎng)套話，談背景

?I am a book worm who is addicted into various books especially novels .（定從或者which 非限制定從解釋）

As to the styles ,ranging from scientific fiction to romance to detective ,either of them if fine with me as long as the plot intrigues . ?Books just feed /nurture me in a spiritual way. I would saya human being who does not read is someone losing his soul, what a pity. (標(biāo)志套話，沒有話題的。。。就是沒有。。的什么)

過度到話題和自己的關(guān)系

套話，很巧，我最近讀了一本書，自己很喜歡

Recently ,I just finished the book <the Fight Club> and there is a movie adapted according to this original book acted by 布拉德皮特. Well, it is such a stunning movie that I just could not helping findingthe novel version to go deeper into the writers’ world.

講話題細(xì)節(jié)，這個(gè)書講什么，我為何被吸引

The book is not simply about the physical fight club but about a guy who splits another personality in his dream and thus acts the life the wake one dreams of.? At the beginning of the book(銜接) he is an ordinary office worker like everyone of us , a little coward and dominated by the materialized world. The way he gets stimulated is by consuming . However , he suffers from insomnia and during which he creats another personality who is defiant and brave to resolve to break down the world and construct a new one.?

So in general it is an ironic and sarcastic masterpiece against the consumism .

The reason why it is so involving lies in the writing style by expressing with simple and short though heart beating sentences , sometimes he even repeats one sentence couple times, which imposes a powerful effects towards audience

I bet everyone would have some feeling of being trapped in this modern world and this book just offers us a vent through which we could ?breath some fresh air and ?release our anxieties and exhaustion.