高考「讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)」太難？2步10句搞定！

2023-11-20 20:57 作者:薩霞 0人讀過(guò) | 我要投稿

七七 | 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)——如何“編寫(xiě)”中文情節(jié)

1??續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)快速構(gòu)思方法

支點(diǎn)① 承接首段首句

就地取材，文字接龍

我們挨著坐了下來(lái)，David不看我。

幾周后，當(dāng)我?guī)缀跬洷荣惖臅r(shí)候，傳來(lái)了消息。

支點(diǎn)② 銜接第二段首句

就地取材，反向推導(dǎo)

頒獎(jiǎng)典禮后，我去了老師的辦公室。

前面銜接：我參加頒獎(jiǎng)典禮，心想，我待會(huì)兒去找我的恩師!
At the award presentation, l accepted the award certificate. At that moment, l couldn't help thinking of my teacher.

我看著David和其他選手一起走在起跑線上。

前面銜接：他起身，從我身邊站起來(lái)，準(zhǔn)備上場(chǎng)。
Then he stood up, giving me a determined look. / He was no longer hesitant and got up to the starting line.

支點(diǎn)③ 承接第二段首句

就地取材，文字接龍

頒獎(jiǎng)典禮后，我去了老師的辦公室。

接：拿著獎(jiǎng)懷，走進(jìn)辦公室。
With the trophy in hand, l entered the office. / l presented the award certificate to my teacher.

我看著David和其他選手一起走向起跑線。

接：David利其他選手各就各位，一聲令下，開(kāi)跑!
Then the race began. All the runners shot out like arrows.! The moment the starting gun rang, all the students rushed out.

2023讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

⑦從那以后，我愛(ài)上了寫(xiě)作 / 我成為了一名優(yōu)秀的作家。

That was when l fell in love with writing.

⑧這一切都?xì)w功于我的老師給我的自信和鼓勵(lì)

/每次遇到團(tuán)雅我都會(huì)想起曾經(jīng)相信我、鼓舞我的恩師

l was grateful to him for his inspiration and encouragement.

2022讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

⑦我見(jiàn)證了David超越自我，取得打破了自己記錄的成績(jī)

lt turned out that he achieved his best record ever.

⑧我相信他這次的經(jīng)歷足以讓他去面對(duì)未來(lái)一切困難

⑧我發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)老師能帶給學(xué)生的力量不容小覷

With the power to conquer himself, he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future.