7/10?O?? 教育

Education of?youngpeople?is highly prioritized in many countries.

However ,educatingadults?who cannot write or read is even more important and governmentsshould?spend more money?on this.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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單邊?

不同意

必須承認(rèn)， 教育成人 有好處

然而 ，更應(yīng)該投資教育年輕人

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同意

必須承認(rèn) ?教年輕人有好處

然而，更應(yīng)該教成人??

Despite it being consideredby some，that educating?illiterate adults?is more worthy?than educating young people, I?tend to?oppose thisopinion?and my own personal evaluation will be presented.

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Indeed,?there areseveral benefits?in terms of?training adults who have not been to schools.

觀點(diǎn)

One is that?it is a?social well farethat will boost?the overall literacy level in the whole society.

Why??解釋原因

As?an increasingnumber of jobs are replacing by robots, educated labor force will better?cater for?the job marketand this technological era.

Not only can they find jobseasily, but also they can provide better education to their kids?once?they areliterate.

舉例

It is reported that kids from poor home schooling environment are more likely to drop out of schools and commit crimes compared to those whose parents can?either?teach by themselves?or?offer better education access?to their kids.

As a result,?the educationlevel of citizens is not a matter of individual, but has?ripple effect?in a largerscale.

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Nevertheless, it is theyoung generation that are the major force of the future and therefore should beinvested on education.

In contrast with?adults, theyare?innovative and vibrant who aspire to?change the world.

In this digital age wheretechnology is largely popularized, young people have the power and expertise to?generate breakthroughs?in every aspect of our life.

舉例

Take the founder of Facebook to illustrate.

Mark?used to?receive top quality education in Harvard ,and?this?equipped him to be an exceptional coding professional in creating a global platform ,connecting people online.

Followed this vivid instance, numerous productive young entrepreneurs?have appeared, who are revolutionizing?the future of the world.

反證

Had these young talents not?educated, they would not have?created cutting edge technology, which have boosted the well beings of humans.

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In closing,?while?governments can?subsidize?adults oneducation, it is vital to?allocate more financial resources?on youngpeople.

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