在雅思和托福這種有口語的教學(xué)中，提升口語都是非常重要的。一方面是由于我們中國學(xué)生大部分都是啞巴口語，總是講不出，另一方面，很多同學(xué)并不知道什么樣的口語內(nèi)容是合格的內(nèi)容。今天，我不談如何提升綜合口語能力，只談?wù)勎沂侨绾螏椭约旱膶W(xué)生來提升口語內(nèi)容的（以雅思part2為例）。

首先，要明確標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，什么事一篇好的part2。結(jié)合我們評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，一篇好的口語材料當(dāng)然要有好的連貫和銜接，有一些非常見詞匯，有相對豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。（這里因為我們只談內(nèi)容，所以不談流利度的問題，流利度其實(shí)才是口語的首要評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）。

而且，還要注意一點(diǎn)，你的口語材料不一定要真實(shí)，但一定要是原創(chuàng)，你可以想象考官聽到一個你隨便從網(wǎng)上扒下來，他/她一天聽了好多遍的材料的內(nèi)心感受。

接下來，我給你看看，我怎么提升學(xué)生口語的內(nèi)容。

這一篇是Describe a noisy place you have been to.

這是學(xué)生之前的版本：
An especially noisy place that I visited recently was the restaurant where my cousin held wedding.
Last years I was invited to my cousin’s wedding. In China, there are different wedding customs in different place. In our city, groom, bride and their parents will invite their own friends, kinsmen to join this celebrate to congratulate this news couple. This celebration is more like a banquet, you know just people sitting around the tables and feasting. Some distant relatives do not matter how the groom and bride look. They just talk about the taste of food. Just imaging that hundreds of people sitting in a no more than 300 square meter’s restaurant and people talk about their own business. Moreover, before the banquet, there will be some special parts. First, they will place a large loudspeaker and play the pop music of marriage theme loudly, like they want the world know that they are getting marriage. After that, they will be a wedding MC to ask some embarrassing questions to the new couple. Hundreds of people talking, loud music and laughing from MC, there will be the noisiest place that I ever been to. I prefer quiet, so I feel anxious about this ceremony. But I still happy for my cousin, since she find her true love.

看似是沒啥問題哈？

但是你注意，拋開別的不談，首先我們看看主題，是一個吵鬧的地方?。?br>然而，這篇part2的稿子里面，幾乎沒有出現(xiàn)吵鬧的形容！因此在內(nèi)容上，就是不合格的！而且這么長的東西里面，居然沒有太多固定搭配，也沒有一個idiom！
所以，在完全不改變他的內(nèi)容的情況下，我給他改成了下面這個版本：
An especially noisy place that I visited recently was the restaurant where my cousin held wedding.
Last years I was invited to my cousin’s wedding. In China, there are various wedding customs in different place. In our city, groom, bride and their parents will invite their own friends, relatives to join this celebration to congratulate the newlyweds. This celebration is more like a grand banquet, you know just people sitting around the tables and feasting. However, some distant relatives seem uninterested in the couple and instead talked about the food loudly.（第一次提到吵鬧） Just imaging that hundreds of people crammed into（固定搭配，擠進(jìn)） a restaurant that no more than 300 square meters where everyone talks about their affairs with high-pitched voice（再次提到吵鬧，高音調(diào)）, which just raised the roof（幾乎掀翻房頂，再次形容吵鬧）. Moreover, before the banquet, there will be some special events. First, a large loudspeaker is placed at the front and the ear-splitting（非常好的形容詞，形容聲音撕裂耳朵） pop music related to marriage played, like they want the world know that they are getting marriage. After that, a wedding MC asked some embarrassing questions to the new couple which brought about raucous（吵鬧） laughter from crowed. Hundreds of people chatting, loud music and laughing from MC, it is the noisiest place that I ever been to ，noise as a hornet’s nest.（像蜂巢一樣吵鬧，形容忙亂和吵鬧非常貼切） Personally, I prefer quiet environment, so I feel anxious about this ceremony. But I still happy for my cousin, as she finds her true love. And this occasion maybe the noise pollution （再次點(diǎn)題，小升華）that I am willing to accept.



所以，我的學(xué)生為什么能夠在口語中考出6.5分以上的分?jǐn)?shù)，除了我會強(qiáng)制要求他們每天發(fā)錄音和聽錄音反饋糾錯之外，還有就是他們的內(nèi)容都是原創(chuàng)，且是經(jīng)過我修改調(diào)教后的原創(chuàng)，絕對不會撞車，且充實(shí)又生動。（當(dāng)然我也失去了游戲和休息時間）最后，在考前，還會給他們最擬真地進(jìn)行?？肌?/strong>
所謂功不唐捐。像各位也能在提升口語流利度之余，打磨自己的內(nèi)容。