英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫：行文要連貫，故事要完整，詞匯和語(yǔ)法要準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)、多樣。

二、寫作SOP

1. 閱讀文章
2. 梳理結(jié)構(gòu)

（1）確認(rèn)文段主體結(jié)構(gòu)

情緒：消極情緒

轉(zhuǎn)機(jī):事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰

失望：事情有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，但是出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題

結(jié)局：事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折

總結(jié)：點(diǎn)題、呼應(yīng)前文

環(huán)境描寫

一瞬間，一種令人窒息的……席卷了（ruled)……，一陣強(qiáng)烈的+情緒了sb

Within a split second,a complete+n+ruled the+環(huán)境+and a wave of +情緒n+swept over sb.

Within a spilt secnd,an absolute helpess ruled the space and a wave of terror swept over him.

情感描寫

sb's+心臟狂條（fiercely),手心出汗，內(nèi)心有一個(gè)堅(jiān)定聲音告訴自己要……

Ones heart pounding fiercely and ones palm sweating,thee seemed to be an inner voice telling sb firmly that

（獨(dú)立主格）

His heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, there seemed to be an inner voice telling him firmly that he had to finish the task.

語(yǔ)言描寫

宛如放下了心中的大石頭，sb感覺(jué)到了一絲+情緒，他對(duì)sb說(shuō)道

As if a heavy weight had been lifted from one's mind,he sensed a glimmer of____and saying to sb,"……"

As if a heavy weight had been liftde from his mind,he sensed a glimmer of hope and saying to me,"thank you for trusting me".

(虛擬語(yǔ)氣）

結(jié)尾

It elicked that he hurdled his fear and fulfilled his potential,and the unremiting effort was worth it.

Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass,it's about learning to dance in the rain.