還是那句話，多寫多改，別老想著套模版，主要問題是，有木有套模版，改卷老師真的一眼看出來，我都能看出來了，改卷老師都是高校英語老師，他們?cè)趺纯赡芸床怀鰜恚磻蛞韵聨灼魑?，大家心里有?shù)，自己目前能寫多少分的?。。?！

以下內(nèi)容來自共青團(tuán)「懂？」視頻的評(píng)論區(qū)

【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國朋友唐納德.特朗普不幸罹患了新冠肺炎(COVID-19)，他原計(jì)劃將于下個(gè)月參加美國的總統(tǒng)大選。請(qǐng)你寫一封信安慰他，80～120詞，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。

一、【高分-9分】

Dear Donald Trump：

Congratulations! I've heard you has tested positive for COIVD-19, And I'm happy to hear that. Because you can finally have a rest (in peace). Though you'll participate the US presidential election, and it's hopeless to participate it now. But I still hope u can cure it with the disinfectant fluid. To ourselves, drinking the disinfectant fluid is the best way to cure COVID-19. With quarantine and recovery, I really want bless you can get through this and stick to it with your wife with drinking the disinfectant fluid and infusion the disinfectant fluid.

? ? ? ? ? Your’s LiHua

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】抱歉只能給9分，格式存在問題，而且扣一分開頭‘Congratulations’。這安慰嚴(yán)肅的氛圍，哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈！?。。?/p>

二、【高分-7～8分】

Dear president，

I am sorry to know that you have the new crown virus. There are always many unsatisfactory things in life, but we must persevere. As long as you actively receive treatment, everything will get better. I also hope that this matter can inspire you to learn from China thousands of miles away. After the outbreak of the epidemic, China quickly took necessary measures and mobilized a large amount of material and centralized rectification work. With our joint efforts, the epidemic in China has been effectively controlled, and the people have regained their lives. As the president of the United States, I have reason to believe that you have the ability to control the epidemic in the United States. This is not only for the American people, but also for your health. After measures are taken, the epidemic will definitely be contained. I hope that after everything is over, you can come to my motherland-China to play.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這個(gè)有點(diǎn)啰嗦，字?jǐn)?shù)超了。但內(nèi)容格式很OK，是篇不錯(cuò)的應(yīng)試小作文！

三、【較好的7分】

Dear Mr. Trump,

? I'm Li Hua. Knowing that you're suffering from the COVID-19, I'm writing something to tell you how to recover from this disease.?

?First of all, you can spray the disinfectant on your lungs as you've said to me. It seems that if you spray the disinfectant on your lungs, the virus can be wiped out in a short time instead of dying of illness.（You can die from the disinfectant） Second, why not just cut off your lungs? ?As we all know, the virus infects our lungs. So if you cut off your lungs, you won't suffer from this disease, right? I hope you will recover soon.?

?If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,?

Li Hua

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】純粹套了模版，不過大家能寫成這樣就很不錯(cuò)了，作文寫的好不好，真的一眼看出來了。

四、【及格的5～6分】

Dear Donald Trump：

Oh my dear friend Trump,I'm really sorry to hear that you are ill.You have to get through it no matter what,You have to run for president next month,You can't let that damn bastard Biden win the election,Only you can make America great again,You are the only hope in America,Is the chosen man who receives the blessing of God,Get better quickly,Drink that lovely disinfectant,Inject them into your lungs,And cut your chest and irradiate your lungs with ultraviolet rays,Destroy the viruses that Emperor Sun Xiaochuan and his licking dog Sean Xiao sent to stop you，You are sure to get better,As long as you get better, you can easily beat them and win the election。Get well quickly, my friend,God bless you!?

Yours

LiHua （轉(zhuǎn)）[doge]

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，太口語化，不符合小作文的格式要求。有些語法錯(cuò)誤。