摘要：為大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文?？脊儆H筆，用最正統(tǒng)的4段式寫作，本文主題-流程圖：水循環(huán)，共156詞?？嘤谛∽魑牡目绝唫儯梢院煤醚凶x模仿。

相比較雅思大作文，網絡上與市面上的小作文資料相對較少，質量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鴨，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要圖表類范文的指導，所以，請看本文前考官同學的精彩演繹。最難題型之一流程圖：水循環(huán)，共156詞，band 9

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話題：

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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范文

The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to air to land during the natural process known as the water cycle.

Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates, falls as rain, and eventually runs back into the oceans again.

Beginning at the evaporation stage, we can see that 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapour condenses to form clouds. At the second stage, labelled ‘precipitation’ on the diagram, water falls as rain or snow.

At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakes or return to the oceans via ‘surface runoff’. Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the impervious layer of the earth. Salt water intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.(156 words, band 9)