Countries with a long working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

工作時(shí)間長(zhǎng)給國(guó)家?guī)砗玫慕?jīng)濟(jì)，但也帶來負(fù)面社會(huì)影響。是否同意這種觀點(diǎn)？

用《酥酥雅思十大話題語料》快速列大綱：

整體思路：同意，長(zhǎng)工作時(shí)間帶來的影響有正有負(fù)。

正面段：

1. 許多發(fā)展中國(guó)家在最近幾十年經(jīng)歷了快速的發(fā)展furious and fast development，是因?yàn)槿藗冊(cè)敢饧影嗉狱c(diǎn)工作work overtime，

2. 人們不但得到的是更高的工資和物質(zhì)成功material success,而且使得企業(yè)在國(guó)際競(jìng)爭(zhēng)中取勝survive and earn a cutting edge in the fierce competition

3. 改革開放之后the Policy of Reform and Opening Up，來到中國(guó)的大城市看一下，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)那里全是高樓大廈、現(xiàn)代化醫(yī)院、公共交通系統(tǒng)和各種其它基建，skyscraper，?modern comprehensive hospitals，public transport system and other infrastructure constructions.?

負(fù)面段：

1． 但是忙碌的生活ever-accelerated living tempo和激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)cutthroat competition讓許多人生活在巨大的壓力huge pressure之下。

2． 像中國(guó)這樣的發(fā)展中國(guó)家的大城市，996成為常態(tài)normality，

3． 人們犧牲sacrifice了休閑娛樂time for recreational activities,陪伴家人accompany family、規(guī)律運(yùn)動(dòng)do sports regularly的時(shí)間

4． 這也讓許多人患上了與壓力相關(guān)的疾病（焦慮抑郁失眠）stress-related illnesses（anxiety，depression，insomnia）

5． （回到主題）長(zhǎng)工作時(shí)間讓社會(huì)整體更注重經(jīng)濟(jì)價(jià)值economic value和工作成果work achievements，而不是當(dāng)下人們的感受。雖然生活水平好了，但是人們卻不像以前那樣容易獲得幸福感sense of happiness

Unlike developed nations, developing countries like China usually have long working hours and the culture of working overtime. This contributes to our great economic success in a way, but of course exerts huge pressure on ordinary people.

There is no denying that the fast and furious development should be attributed to people’s joint willingness of working for more than 8 hours every day. Not only do they attain higher income and material success，but enterprises are able to survive and earn the cutting edge in fierce competitions.?（倒裝句）After the Policy of Reform and Opening Up, we can see that cities in China, especially metropolises, have experienced profound shifts社科變革?in just a few decades, which can be demonstrated by the construction of countless skyscrapers, modern comprehensive hospitals, public transport systems and other advanced infrastructures.?

On the other hand, under no circumstance can we ignore the flip side of long working time. It must be admitted that with ever-accelerated living tempo and cutthroat competitions comes huge pressure for ordinary people.?（倒裝句）Megacities in China have made 996 working schedule as their normality, which means to work 12 hours a day and 6 days a week. It is the inhuman不人道的?lifestyle that forces people to sacrifice their time to accompany families, participate in recreational activities and do regular sports.??So overburdened with workloads are today’s young people that many of them are suffering from stress-related illnesses, such as anxiety, depression and insomnia.?（倒裝句）Long working hours means the whole society lays more emphasis on economic value and work achievements, which undoubtedly improve living standards, but also make it more difficult for the public to have the sense of happiness at the moment.??

Overall, people attaching mohre importance to work does contribute to the success of their economy, but never should we turn a blind eye to the adverse consequence to ordinary people and the whole society.（倒裝句）?316words