Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.?

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

題目解析，這是一個(gè)多大程度同意還是不同意的問題，比較好寫的是一邊倒。social problems，不僅僅是社交問題，還是社會(huì)問題，幾乎涵蓋所有問題，廣義上甚至包括經(jīng)濟(jì)問題economic problem。practical problems實(shí)際問題、實(shí)踐問題，相對(duì)而言更傾向于個(gè)人的、生活上的、操作層面的問題。這樣的話，用層次分析法的話，一層是“社會(huì)層”

我把我心里的社會(huì)層粘在這

???? follow social rule, safe community, lifestyle more sustainable, live in harmony, social progress，voluntary services, technological progress ，a socially responsible way, break the cycle of poverty, building a prosperous society， improve productivity, international cooperation, levying taxes, public service

可以摘出來一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，“使用不同語言的居民住在一起可能會(huì)造成社區(qū)的不和諧。因?yàn)椴煌谋就琳Z言往往意味著不同的文化背景和生活習(xí)慣。這正是沖突形成的原因。例如，一些國家的人認(rèn)為一邊吃飯一邊喝酒是正常的，而另一種文化傳統(tǒng)的人認(rèn)為這是非常不文明的行為。在日常生活中，他們會(huì)對(duì)彼此帶有偏見并且不會(huì)相互幫助甚至不會(huì)交流信息。這會(huì)讓一些沖突出現(xiàn)”

One social problem associated with the mentioned situation may be the community disharmony. Using different native languages is a sign of different cultural backgrounds and living habits. Cross-cultural lifestyles often lead to conflicts. For example, it is a custom to drink wine when eating, yet another cultural background population believe that drinking while eating is uncivilized behavior. Then they may have biases towards each other. In daily life, dwellers using different languages did not have passion on helping each other or even have willing to talk with each other. As a result, a series of conflicts come into existence.

接下來實(shí)際操作層面

???? money is a great motivator-earn more money, acquire some skills, earn a fortune, pour more money in, earn higher salaries, a well-educated workforce, increase their income ; low profit margin , tangible benefits 實(shí)實(shí)在在的利益

???? vital: nutritional contents, develop and maintain healthy habits, endanger their health, reduce diseases

???? safety: a sense of security, personal wealth, permanent job, find employment, afford home ownership

靈感，“生活在不同的語言環(huán)境中，會(huì)對(duì)一個(gè)人的身心健康有害。身體方面，缺少從小到大習(xí)慣的食材和物料而不能維持已經(jīng)養(yǎng)成的生活習(xí)慣，這會(huì)導(dǎo)致疾病。（這里不好舉例因?yàn)閷?shí)在是特別切題的文化差異性，比如我一天不吃面食就渾身難受，但其實(shí)是心理層面的難受）。另一個(gè)是影響心理健康。當(dāng)?shù)氐膴蕵坊顒?dòng)或電視節(jié)目必須有當(dāng)?shù)氐恼Z言背景才能獲得享受?？缥幕恼勗捴械耐嫘适卤舜撕茈y理解。最后，長期不說母語會(huì)讓你的大腦很疲累并且得不到釋放壓力的途徑。

Living in different language atmosphere for a long period can be harmful to a person's physical and psychological health. In terms of body, the shortage of ingredients for residents' traditional cuisine that people have eaten from young age cannot make a delicious dish for them. There is a saying that one man’ meat is another man’ poison. As a result, it is easy to make their stomach uncomfortable. What’s more, mental health can also be attracted by not native language environment easily. Entertainment activities or TV programs which using local language especially with some laughing point cannot appeal to migrates. Population with another language background cannot enjoy the amusement so they have limit approach to ease pressure. Finally, not speaking your mother tongue for a long time can make your brain very tired or get into bad mood.

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Migrating to a foreign countries where people speak another language has been a popular thing for a lot of people(側(cè)重點(diǎn)不是移民，而是講外語). However, I argue that this behavior many bring them a series of problems, including social and practical aspactsaspects.

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Firstly, they may have to face a serious of fanancial financialburden as they do not know what is the real worth of a certain good（第一句是觀點(diǎn)句，這個(gè)有點(diǎn)像解釋，因?yàn)闆]提language的事，可能考生想說people may have to face a seriesoffinancial problems when theycouldnot use their mother tongue. Theyalways have troublestodeeplyunderstand some native commercial rules orthe real worth ofcertainlocal material. Itisa long period of timethata newcomerhave totake.雖然強(qiáng)調(diào)句有湊字之嫌，但是豐富了語法）. (舉例for example,)at the beginning of migrating a personTheymay havesometrouble in understanding some local consumer items’introducing wordsinstructionsas they are always includingwith several technicalstrangewords, sotheyhehasveto spend more money on them.When they need burgenning, they are not able to use lacal language, while the businessmen are dare to ask a higher price than their original worth.舉一個(gè)例子就行了。該到結(jié)論了。A dweller whohas not acquired a skills of usinglocal languagefluently will have to pay a higherlife cost.

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Secondly, 想說溝通不暢，心理不舒服啊Anunfamiliartalking atmosphere can lead to an unhappy emotion.a migrate person may live an uncomfortable lives there.For example, when people chatting, the cross-culture joke can? not begotten byonenewfriends orneighbor,andboth sidesfeel uncomfortable.communication, you have to use another language with your new neighbours, In your mind ,you are a bilinguager.As a result,he or she will alway merge in an atmosphere of pressure and strangercommunacation is always short ofamusement? . 總之注意觀點(diǎn)-舉例-結(jié)論。邏輯關(guān)系詞要有

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At last,these felling不要段和段之間混淆，另一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)段中不要參雜上一段的觀點(diǎn)must have influnce other side of your body,not only in your mind,but on your physicially parts. For instances, one will have difficuilty in chooseing better foods which containing nutritiaonal contents they need. It is not good for one's health. When a person got into a disease, he may have trouble in talking about the body details with the doctor without his native language because this situationhasveto use some special words.

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In a word, I think living in a foreingn country especially with language barren is not a good chioice.