開頭:In the contemporary world,______(主題詞)hanve/has become increasingly important. it's of great necessary for____to ___.Reasons and concrete evidence to support my view point are as follows

在當(dāng)今社會，……變得越來越重要，對于某類人來說，做某事非常有必要

第二段

論點1. In the first place,there is no doubt that（???）。

首先，毫無疑問

論據(jù)1.

There is a growing consensus that,most of netizens admititted that they've spent2/3 of their time in (online )social time

有越來越多的共識，大多數(shù)人承認(rèn)他們花費了時間做某事。

論點2.

moreover,no one can deny that()

其次，沒有人能否認(rèn)（）

論據(jù)2

where there is/are(),there are().

有什么()，就有什么()

論點3

Last but not least,I firmly believe that

最后，我堅定的相信

論據(jù)3

The more,the more?

越……越

結(jié)尾:

In conclusion,If we spare no efforts to()

the future of our lives will be both hope and rosy.

總之，只要我們不遺余力去做某事，我們的生活將會是充滿希望和光明