在3-5年級(jí)的創(chuàng)意寫作課上,什么是彩虹寫作法?
想要學(xué)好創(chuàng)意寫作,除了要有想象力,還要會(huì)表達(dá),因?yàn)镃reative writing is the art of using words to make things up!
什么是彩虹寫作法?在3-5年級(jí)的創(chuàng)意寫作課上,老師將圍繞“Rainbow Writing?Techniques”?彩虹寫作技巧來(lái)進(jìn)行教學(xué),讓小朋友的作品不再是干巴巴的幾行字

在彩虹寫作技巧教學(xué)法里,不同的顏色可是代表著不同的意思
紅色的字代表exciting powerful的動(dòng)詞,如:charging, dashing, jogged
紫色的字代表描述性詞匯,如:frantically, beautiful
橙色的字代表power openers,如-ly結(jié)尾的詞(suddenly, slowly, angrily),?時(shí)間的連接詞(Later that day, Meanwhile)?,表示地點(diǎn)的詞(In the distance, Under the rocks, Beyond the mountains)
藍(lán)色的字代表承接詞,如?when if, on the other hand, although, because, despite, as well as, contrary to
綠色的字代表短語(yǔ)和從句,如The young girl,?with the cunning smile, was...
那小朋友如何在寫作里運(yùn)用到彩虹寫作技巧呢?我們來(lái)看一個(gè)例子:The boy ran to the shop.
第一步,加入紅色的動(dòng)詞
The boy?sprinted?to the shop.
第二步:加入紫色的描述性詞匯:
The?hungry?boy?sprinted?to the shop.
第三步:加一個(gè)橙色的有力的開頭
All of a sudden, the?hungry?boy?sprinted?to the shop.
第四步:加一些藍(lán)色的承接
All of a sudden, the?hungry?boy?sprinted?to the shop?because he had found some money.?
第五步:加上綠色短語(yǔ)或從句
All of a sudden,?the?hungry?boy?sprinted?to the shop,?which had recently reopened,?because he had found some money.?
是不是這句話立馬變得不一樣了?這個(gè)句式的擴(kuò)展練習(xí)同樣也可以用在段落的寫作里,譬如這段:The boy went into the room. He was looking for a noise. He heard it in the cupboard. He went to look. He opened the door. It was his dog.
運(yùn)用了彩虹寫作法之后
Silently, the?young?boy?entered?the?dusty?room. Thomas,?who had recently?just turned fourteen, was?searching?frantically?for a?strange?noise. He felt?apprehensive?as?it seemed to be coming from the?old, battered?cupboard.?Reaching slowly?for the handle, he took a?deep?breath and?slowly?opened the?creaking?door. There,?in a pile of old clothes, was his?loveable?companion Lucy. Thomas was about to?scoop?up his dog?when?he saw another?strange?object?lying?behind her.
如果你希望小朋友可以通過彩虹寫作法,在場(chǎng)景描寫、人物描寫、對(duì)話設(shè)計(jì)、修辭手法、句子結(jié)構(gòu)方面有一個(gè)大大的提高,歡迎參加3-5年級(jí)創(chuàng)意寫作課。
第一課:什么是彩虹寫作法
第二課:聲音、明喻和復(fù)合句在創(chuàng)意寫作中的運(yùn)用
第三課:感情移入、擬聲詞,擬人化在創(chuàng)意寫作中的運(yùn)用
第四課:暗喻在創(chuàng)意寫作中的運(yùn)用
第五課:如何塑造故事的人物
第六課:探討整個(gè)文本步驟句子的銜接
第七課:回顧所學(xué)的寫作技巧,開始撰寫三段式的故事
第八課:故事的規(guī)劃與拓展
第九課:編輯和分享
