題目

模板

(看不太清楚可以看看阿瑞老師以前的作文課喲)

第一段

①先列我們的背景是什么；其次列出選擇，我的看法；第三句話，過渡句

②此次建議背現(xiàn)象解釋型(即寫法1)

第二段

①翻譯中講過一個(gè)句子，如果有三個(gè)以上的成分，前面都用逗號(hào)，最后一個(gè)要用"and"來連接?！部梢杂玫綄懽髦衼?。

②"According to experts…"相當(dāng)于我們以前寫的"Based on big data基于大數(shù)據(jù)"

③??使用諺語的時(shí)候一定要注意be動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)形式

④take an active role in 積極參與到

⑤navigate the potential pitfalls

(pitfall陷阱) 避開潛在的陷阱

全文

(第一段寫法1)As the advancement of technology, it is of great necessity for youngsters to grasp the core technique of social media. Therefore,I think we shouldn't have laws to limit the use of social media under the age of 18. The following reasons can account for my opinion.

(第一段寫法2)Nowadays the public have different opinions upon soclal media. Some think that to limit the use of social media to those who are under 18 is beneficial, while others think to have a free access is a better choice. Personally, I prefer the latter.The following reasons can account for my preference.

First and foremost, there is no doubt that social mecia allows youngsters to connect with friends and family, access information and educational resources, and even participate in social and political causes. According to experts, most of young people have admitted that they've learned 60% useful knowledge by using social media. Furthermore,it is obvious that,social media companies cannot effectively verify the age of every user, and young people may simply lie about their age to gain access to social media. Where there are people, there are lies. Last but not least, no one can deny that parents should take an active role in monitoring their children's social media use.This would help young people navigate the potential pitfalls of social media while still enjoying its benefits.

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the influence of social media on young people. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.

隨著科技的進(jìn)步，年輕人掌握社交媒體的核心技術(shù)是非常必要的。因此，我認(rèn)為我們不應(yīng)該制定法律來限制18歲以下的人使用社交媒體。以下原因可以解釋我的觀點(diǎn)。(法一)

現(xiàn)在公眾對(duì)社交媒體有不同的看法。一些人認(rèn)為限制18歲以下的人使用社交媒體是有益的，而另一些人認(rèn)為免費(fèi)使用社交媒體是更好的選擇。就我個(gè)人而言，我更喜歡后者。以下原因可以解釋我的偏好。(法二)

首先，毫無疑問，社交媒介讓年輕人與朋友和家人聯(lián)系，獲取信息和教育資源，甚至參與社會(huì)和政治事業(yè)。據(jù)專家稱，大多數(shù)年輕人承認(rèn)他們通過使用社交媒體學(xué)到60%的有用知識(shí)。此外，很明顯，社交媒體公司無法有效地驗(yàn)證每個(gè)用戶的年齡，年輕人可能會(huì)為了訪問社交媒體而謊報(bào)年齡。有人的地方就有謊言。最后但并非最不重要的是，沒有人能否認(rèn)父母應(yīng)該在監(jiān)督孩子使用社交媒體方面發(fā)揮積極作用。這將幫助年輕人在享受社交媒體帶來的好處的同時(shí)，避開社交媒體的潛在陷阱。

總之，整個(gè)社會(huì)都應(yīng)該密切關(guān)注社交媒體對(duì)年輕人的影響。只有這樣，我們才能有一個(gè)光明和充滿希望的未來。