摘要：為大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文?？脊儆H筆，用最正統(tǒng)的4段式寫作，本文主題-柱狀圖:網(wǎng)聊耗時，共188詞?？嘤谛∽魑牡目绝唫儯梢院煤醚凶x模仿。

相比較大作文，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上與市面上的小作文資料相對較少，質(zhì)量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鴨，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要圖表類范文的指導(dǎo)，所以，請看本文前考官同學(xué)的精彩演繹。

柱狀圖：網(wǎng)聊耗時，共188詞，band9.考官的四段套路：introduction+overview+2body。

話題：

The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.

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滿分范文：

The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.

Overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more popular than chatting on the Internet. However, completely different trends can be seen if we look at the specific figures for boys and girls. Boys aged between 10 and 15 clearly favour playing on games consoles over chatting online.?

According to the chart, while 85% of boys play computer games every day, only 55% chat online daily. Furthermore, the majority of boys play on their consoles for more than one hour each day, and 10% do this activity for four hours or more.

By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.（188）