原文回顧：

Directions: Suppose you have taken part in a career planning seminar: Write an account of the seminar and summarize what you have learned from it. You will have 30 minutes for this task and should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

這篇文章以后的結(jié)構(gòu)在工作上真的會很有用，是一種類似于報告你上司的文體結(jié)構(gòu)。但是不同的是，報告上司的文體結(jié)構(gòu)，基本上忽略全部過程，而寫作往往再添加一些細節(jié)。

內(nèi)容解析：根據(jù)課題，其內(nèi)容分成兩大部分。

1-?簡述自己參加了這次career planning seminar

2-?總結(jié)一下自己的收獲what you have learned from it

往往在工作匯報中，涉及一次活動包括時間地點人物，主要事件和收獲結(jié)果。

以下是一張思維導圖，構(gòu)成這篇寫作的脈絡，其中實線是給出來的部分，虛線是要填入的。

如果只跟隨這兩個梗概，顯然內(nèi)容不夠。

如果使用PRICE模型，就可以讓文章豐滿甚至豐富有余。

P =?phenomenon?現(xiàn)象，現(xiàn)象也就是環(huán)境的大背景，引起這次會議的背景。建議10%字數(shù)

R =?reason?為什么你會參加這次會議，15%字數(shù)

I =?insight?洞見，我對這次會議的深刻感觸?→?才會有我的收獲，35%字數(shù)

C =?consequence?結(jié)果，也就是我的收獲，30%字數(shù)

E =?envisioning?展望，以后你對這種活動還有什么計想法？10%字數(shù)

小貼士：練筆建議，寫的時候稍微多些一點，不爆格就行。不要怕多寫，總比少好。

網(wǎng)絡參考版，短版本：

　Recently I attended a career planning seminar. This seminar mainly discussed the importance of career planning and told us as college students how to plan our careers.

Through this career planning seminar, I realized that it's essential to have a career plan, because it helps us make effective career decisions and respond timely to new opportunities, and keeps us focused on our career goals. Besides, I also got some essential career planning strategies. I understood that I can set short-term goals and long-term goals for my career, and by achieving those realistic, achievable, time-bound short-terms goals can I realize my long-term dream step by step. From this career planning seminar, I really gained a lot and began to think about my future and my life seriously.

個人練筆版，長版本，PRICE寫作模式

An Account and Summary of a Career Planning Seminar

??? ????It is prevalent with worries today to see a student struggling in the job market, foggy about?what he needs and what he can. A clearer planning for job therefore is in great need. Universities are striving to (1) help students on their career skills.

????????當今很經(jīng)常看到令人擔憂的事情：學生在就業(yè)市場上掙扎，對自己需要什么，能做什么一頭霧水。因此清晰的職業(yè)規(guī)劃十分必要。大學正在盡力幫助學生提高自己的職業(yè)能力。

? ? ????Last Wednesday, our campus organized a seminar on career planning. I attended it with the purpose for (2)?a better pay. There were full of junior, senior and postgrad students (3) eager for a job with high wages but were at a loss for?(4) their job planning. In the seminar, the tutor provided a clear landscape better matching our personalities with career skill tests in various dimensions. We were asked to fill out questionnaires, take quizzes and finish mini projects that would examine our abilities to cope?with (5) difficult people.

????????上周三，我們學校組織了一場職業(yè)規(guī)劃講座。帶著想多賺點錢的目的，我參加了這場講座。會上坐滿了大三、大四和研究生同學，他們都是渴望著高工資的工作卻也對自己的職業(yè)規(guī)劃十分迷茫。講座上，導師為我們提供了一個清晰的規(guī)劃，讓我們的性格和工作從多維度上更加匹配。我們被要求填寫問卷、做小測試和完成那些考驗我們與難相處的人應對能力的小項目。

????????Personally, I think it a seminar well worth participating, as I reaped the benefits from (6) its clear perspectives to my part-time job choice and goal setting strategies. Furthermore, I learned how to truly grow up in a job and an efficient way of keeping track of my progress step by step. Now I am working as a part-time job shop clerk, following their instructions and reaped a lot more than just getting paid from my managers. Finally, not only did I better lever the balance between life and study, but also improved my problem-solving and time management skills. Worth saying, I am not just the one who reaped the benefits, those who attended all highly praised the seminar for its invaluable assets?to their career planning. I advise that students should participate in this seminar at least once a semester for a better understanding of their own capabilities and demands.?

????????個人認為，這是一場十分值得參加的講座，因為我從其中收獲到了清晰的兼職工作選擇的觀點，和設定目標的策略。此外，我還學會了如何在工作中真正地成長，以及學到了一種有效的，逐步的記錄自己工作進度的方法?，F(xiàn)在我的工作是一名兼職的店員，我按著他們的指導，學到了很多，得到的也并不僅僅是經(jīng)理們發(fā)給我的工資。最后，我不但更好地平衡工作學習，我也提高了我解決問題和時間管理的能力。值得一說的而是，我不是唯一認為這次講座很棒的人，所有參加了講座的人都高度贊揚了這次講座，因為它為他們的職業(yè)規(guī)劃提供了寶貴的財富。我建議學生們至少每學期參加一次這樣的會議，為了以后更好地了解自己的需求和能力。

????????It is never too early to plan your future. I also suggest that more seminars should be offered to students as this will greatly boost students' competitiveness in the fierce job market.

????????規(guī)劃自己的人生要趁早。我也建議學校多開設這樣的課程，因為這樣能讓學生在當今競爭激烈的就業(yè)市場中，提高他們的競爭力。

1- strive to do sth. = try hard to do sth. / bring out one's best to do sth. / try as much as one can to do sth.?盡力做某事

2-?with the purpose for sth. / with the purpose of doing sth.?抱著……的目的

????例句：Li Hua?came to school late?on?the first day of the semester with the?purpose of getting away with not handing in his vacation homework.

????李華新學期開學第一天遲到，是因為他抱著不交假期作業(yè)還想躲過懲罰的目的。（get away with + doing?壞事 =?做了壞事躲過懲罰）

3- junior student?大三學生；senior student?大四學生。

????freshman?大一學生；sophomore?大二學生；?postgrad student?研究生

4- be at a loss for sth.?對某件事不知所措，對某件事一片迷茫

????Many young people, especially those who just finished college, are at a loss for their future.?許多年輕人，尤其是剛畢業(yè)的大學生，通常對自己的未來一片迷茫。

5- cope with：應對難題，應對棘手的情況

????You have to learn skills to cope with difficult people and things at work.?你必須學會一些在工作中應對難相處的人和難做的事情的能力。

6- reap the benefits from?從……中獲得好處

句型：

I suggest / advise / recommend that sb.?(should) ....?我建議……，虛擬語氣句型。

比如：天很黑了，我建議Jenny早點回家。

It is very dark now, I suggest that Jenny go home early.?

這里go不適用三單，因為should在起作用，但是這種句型should多為省略。

too ... to ...?太……而不能

It is never too old to learn.?活到老學到老，什么時候?qū)W習都不晚。

The house was too expensive to buy.?這個房子太貴了，買不起。

It is never too early to plan your life.?規(guī)劃你的人生要趁早。