之前的分享有提到基于AI的雅思托?？谠囆≈帧岸嗾f”，不少小伙伴發(fā)來消息說，不知道有沒有雅思的作文批改AI工具，畢竟網(wǎng)上99元的外教批改不僅貴，而且有時(shí)還是沒搞明白。

今天給大家?guī)淼氖恰靶”娷浖闭搲系囊晃淮罄?strong>X@johann.GPT帶來的基于GPT-4的免費(fèi)作文批改工具IELTS9，其目的就是用GPT-4來批改作文和評(píng)分，有針對(duì)性微調(diào)，體驗(yàn)效果真不錯(cuò)。

使用工具的方式很簡(jiǎn)單，直接在瀏覽器中輸入www.ielts9.me即開即用，只需要輸入作文題目和作文內(nèi)容，就能獲得針對(duì)句子的點(diǎn)評(píng)，整篇作文的評(píng)分。

除了整體評(píng)分，還有幾項(xiàng)：

• 任務(wù)完成情況評(píng)分

• 連貫性和凝聚力評(píng)分

• 詞匯資源評(píng)分

• 語(yǔ)法范圍和準(zhǔn)確性評(píng)分

這里我們以知乎上最熱的雅思真題為例，來測(cè)試一下IETLS9的批改效果，我們選擇的題目如下：

With the rapid development of communication technology, such as smartphones, tablets, and other mobile devices, some people think the disadvantages outweigh its advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

我們同樣選擇知乎上評(píng)分最高的作文例文作為測(cè)試文章，具體內(nèi)容如下：

The availability of new technologies to the average citizen in the form of consumer electronics brings with it both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, though these devices are convenient, their use is a negative overall given the impact on mental health.

Proponents of phones and tablets can point to the all but limitless functionality they provide. It is possible, just by owning a small, affordable device that fits in your pocket, to instantly capture video, take photos, send emails, check social media, make phone calls, watch movies, listen to music, play games and use a wide variety of productivity applications. There is no arguing with the near miraculous achievements found in smartphones and tablets. Used properly, these save time and widen the possible outlets for self-expression and creativity. An amateur film-maker, for example, can shoot and edit digital video directly on their phone, add in sound effects and post it easily to a website like YouTube.

Nonetheless, the potential of phones is hindered by their corrosive effect. It is almost impossible to use a phone as a tool to enhance creativity and productivity because it is also home to applications designed to prey on the weaknesses of the human psyche. Companies like Facebook tap into a natural human desire for affirmation and trigger addictive dopamine bursts as rewards for posting selfies. Those not addicted to social media, may find themselves wasting hours playing videogames, receiving roughly the same chemical incentive. Over time, users become dependent on unhealthy habits that humans have not had time to evolve counters for and the ostensible convenience of these handheld devices becomes an excuse, rather than a reason, to own one.

In conclusion, phones and tablets open up new possibilities but their abuse has led to a generation of dependent users. It is up to individuals, not organisation and governments, to limit their screen time to preserve their mental well-being.

將兩者輸入IETLS9中，看看其會(huì)給出怎樣的評(píng)分呢？

其結(jié)果出乎意料，竟然出錯(cuò)了！

小結(jié)

已經(jīng)給開發(fā)者留言了，從產(chǎn)品的demo來看其還是十分有吸引力的，難度是在gpt-4的調(diào)用上，所以要能暢快地玩還需要一些時(shí)間，不過IETLS9這個(gè)工具還是可以先收藏著的。