這里是韶夏，本來考完試就想上傳的，硬是拖到了現(xiàn)在（出成績前）www

可以算是有點偏題的續(xù)寫（據(jù)我們英語老師所說），但我覺得這樣的劇情不錯，于是就順著我的腦洞寫下去了。最后是個不合格的分，但我也舒爽了，結果還是要重寫一次的hahahaha這里放出來的是我原來的腦洞，因為不想千篇一律而產(chǎn)生的。

Jennifer took up her phone and looked at the? screen.To her disappointment，it was her? ? ? mom's.She answered it and her mom asked? ? her to be careful outsides.Disheartened by the phone,she agreed.After ending the communica-tion,Jennifer put on the red summer dress and went to the?café where they would meet.With? ?time passing,she felt bored and took out the? ?photos of them.When she was immersed in? ? ?the happy times,her phone rang again.? ? ? ? ? ? ? Reluctantly removing her attention from the photos,she glanced through the number jumping on the screen.It was a series of strange numbers.She hesitantly answered it and it was a mature woman voice with a little familarity.It said she had arrived.

Just then,someone was coming towards Jennifer.Got suck into a wirlpool of the familarity,Jennifer didn't notice the person.All of the sudden,a hand appered in her sight.Raising her head abruptly,before herself was a familiar face.As tears filled her eyes,the words beside the photo blurred.The two best friends hugged tightly together after five years.When she was about to talk of the old times,she found Yui Fay was disappearing.Apart from that,everything around her faded out.She tried to grasp something but only the air.

She woke up.

It was just a dream.

In fact,She had lost Yui Fay.

其實本應到這里就結束的，但我怕英語老師看不懂就最后加了一句“They had not talked for over two years because Yui Fay had died from disease two years ago.”其實不加會更好的，有一種戛然而止的感覺（霧

我寫著個結局的原因是，我覺得那么好的一對朋友，她們是不可能因為工作繁忙而不去和對方交流聊天，所以我為了改正這個，我就把實的寫成了虛的。而且這個風格與原文會符合一些，因為原文開頭是一句話為一段，有一種詭異的感覺吧，我當初是這么想的。

老師給的范文是Yui Fay出現(xiàn)了，帶著Jennifer穿著那件紅色沙灘裙再去了Barcelona.

后來老師找我面批，她說我一開始寫得挺好的，結果看著看著陡然一個大轉彎，猝不及防，不太符合正能量原則。（其實何為正能量原則？我覺得人物死亡并不違背這個三大原則之一啊）

最后的最后（出成績后），我英語考得太差了。。。與我平時成績有很大差距，可能心態(tài)挺重要的吧，，我考試一直處于興奮狀態(tài)，嘮嗑嘮嗑。。。就醬吧。