【一英】讀后續(xù)寫很難？來學(xué)點(diǎn)套路與萬能句式吧~
老白 | 讀后續(xù)寫萬能句式
1??故事線S
- W：
- WHAT，WHO，WHERE，WHEN，WHY
- THEME
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：
夫妻野外徒步后爭吵，妻子獨(dú)自出行迷路森林，等待救援。
One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom，had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reachedthe lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom."'m going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow.Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place.she turnedaround, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountaintop. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried."Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farthershe walked, the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall，Jane was so tired that she had to stopfor the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to holdhim and tell him how much she loved him.
- Who：Jane，Tom
- What：Jane was lost
- Where：In a forest
- When：One weekend in July
- Why：A quarrel with Tom，her husband
- Summary
- Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end.
- Theme
- Jane learned how to control emotions and deal with conflicts.
But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _________
lt was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________
2??突破點(diǎn)T
借助段首，構(gòu)造內(nèi)容
一、But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
- Jane是如何熬過這個夜晚的?
- How did Jane feel then?
- How did Jane make it through the night?
- Did she fall asleep and what was she thinking of？
二、It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
- Jane還未獲救，今天會發(fā)生什么?
- Was Jane rescued and who rescued her?
- How was she rescued and how did she feel then?
亮點(diǎn)—刻畫細(xì)節(jié)
- 環(huán)境、語言、心理、動作描寫
- 豐富句式：非謂語，從句，倒裝，獨(dú)立主格，虛擬語氣，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，感嘆句
- 修辭豐富：比喻，夸張，擬人
一、環(huán)境描寫
萬能句式：Immediately / Suddenly / ，an absolute / a complete + n. + ruled the + 地點(diǎn)n. + and a wave of + 情緒n. + washed /swept over sb.
Immediately，an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her.
二、動作 + 心理描寫
萬能句式：Ones heart pounding fiercely and ones palm sweating，an inner voice told sb. that...（獨(dú)立主格）
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating，an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
adj. and adj. as sb. was，sb. did sth, doing sth.（非謂語）
Tired and terrified as she was,Jane struggled to her feet，trying not to have a breakdown both physically and mentally.
三、語言描寫
萬能句式：Luckily / Fortunately，it didn't take long before sb. did......
Luckily，it didn't take long before she found a cave.
萬能句式：Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of and felt as if sth. had been doing and saying，"....."
Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of hope and felt as if the cavehad been comforting her and saying, "come in，you must be exhausted!"
四、絲滑連接二段首
萬能句式：With ...., sb.did....,+非限制定從
With that，she went to sleep，in whose dream her husband kept her company.
新的一天來了
萬能句式：Judging from the_，it was evident that sb. was still trapped in___（without any help）. sb. was at a loss what to do.
Judging from the quiet surrounding，it was evident that Jane wasstill trapped in the forest without anyone coming to the rescue. Jane was at a loss what to do.
轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)出現(xiàn)
萬能句式：It suddenly dawned on sb. that sb. should do ……
It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area frst.
萬能句式：To one's great ____，
To her great joy，it didnt take her long to spot such a place and sheheard the deafening noise coming closer.
救援來了
萬能句式：Seeing / Hearing sth，sb. felt a great sense of +情緒+ welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb.
Looking up and seeing a helicopter，Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her.
求救
萬能句式：情緒 +and +情緒，sb. spared no effort to do... so as to ...
Eager and excited，she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others' attention.
基本點(diǎn)一回扣升華主題
- 感嘆句
- 強(qiáng)調(diào)句
- 夾敘夾議
- 喃喃自語
歡喜大結(jié)局
萬能句式：luckily / Fortunately / Eventually ……
Fortunately，she was noticed and brought into the helicopter. Here，she saw her husband，a man staring at her，wearing an expression of relief.
回歸主題
萬能句式：It was at the moment that sb. did not do ..... any morebut did......
It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.
萬能句式：What a valuable lesson for sb to learn!
What a valuable lesson for the couple to learn！
