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1??新手訓(xùn)練營

Tip1 ：現(xiàn)在or過去

①... There were two reasonsfor the decision. One was that l was amazed at the factthat a sick person could feel much better after seeing a doctor. And the other was that l wanted to help peoplein need...

②... In my opinion, students can benefit a lot from doingsome housework. Firstly, doing housework is helpful forus to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents moretime to do what they like and it improves the family relationship.

Tip2 ：現(xiàn)在or過去

… After that l poured oil into apan and turned on the stove. l waited patiently until the oilwas hot. Then l put the tomatoes and the beaten eggsinto the pan together. "Not that way, " my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right It didn't turn out as l had wished...

... In the cafe, customers will enjoy themselves in the historical environment what iscreated for them.

... If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books...

Tip3 ：并列結(jié)構(gòu)

1. l also water the flowers in the yard and tidy up my own bedroom whenever necessary.
2. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while l have to eat an apple.
3. Many students say they will talk to their friends or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other.

Tip4：離個大譜

1. After that l poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove.
2. During my last winter holiday, I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I found a big change there... Last winter when l went there again, they had a big separate house toraise dozens of chickens.

秘籍1：通讀全文、先易后難！

關(guān)注時態(tài)&指代一致性、并列結(jié)構(gòu)、明顯邏輯錯誤

2??短改十宗罪

一宗罪之名詞：數(shù)與格

1. l always assist my parents in doing the dishes after meals.
2. Luckily, l will go home in two weeks for summer vacation.
3. My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family.
4. lf we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books.
5. When l was little, Friday night was our family game night.

可數(shù)名詞單復(fù)轉(zhuǎn)換；不可數(shù)名詞去s；名詞所有格

?？疾豢蓴?shù)名詞

• advice：建議
• baggage：行李
• luggage：行率
• equipment：設(shè)備
• furniture：家具
• homework：作業(yè)
• information：信息
• knowledge：知識
• news：新聞
• traffic：交通

二宗罪之動詞作謂語

1. As a kid, l loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times l asked to watch them, my parents would not to let me.
2. Still l was unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.

四種謂語形式要牢記

• 實義動詞
• 系動詞
• 情態(tài)動詞 + 動詞原形
• 助動詞 + 動詞原形

1. Actually, l started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but l have long been out of practice.
2. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are used for cooking.
3. One of the questions is: Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results.

時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致，一個都不能少！

二宗罪之動詞作非謂語

1. Now my dream is to open a cafe.
2. My mom told me how to prepare it.
3. lf l succeed in managing one, I will open more.
4. Their answers also show that they dislike talking to others.
5. All the football players on the playground cheered loudly, saying that l had a talent for football.
6. l like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to...

三種基本形式：介詞+doing；動詞+to do/doing；ed表被動

三宗罪之形容詞作表語

1. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
2. l felt happy that their life had improved.
3. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so cool.
4. In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in ...
5. One was that l was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel ...

主系表結(jié)構(gòu)：-ed人，-ing事

系動詞知多少

描述穩(wěn)定狀態(tài)

• be（am / is / are）

描述感官

• look，taste，smell，sound，feel
• “…起來”

描述變化

• grow，go，get，become，turn
• 3gbt

描述持續(xù)狀態(tài)

• keep，remain，stay

表示“證明”

• prove

表示“好像”

• seem，appear

四宗罪之形副作修飾

形容詞+名詞

I. 副詞+動詞

II. 副詞+句子

Ⅲ. 副詞+形容詞

IV. 副詞+副詞

1. Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself.
2. l enjoyed studying different kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and ...
3. In my opinion, when in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust most.
4. l stopped the ball and kicked it hard back to the playground.

牢記形副修飾“套餐”；關(guān)注詞性

四宗罪之形副原/比較/最高級

1. l was afraid to speak in front of a larger group of people.
2. l was so much nervous that l could hardly tell which direction was left.

原級、比較級、最高級勿混淆！

五宗罪之冠詞a/an/the

1. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and a unique style.
2. ... it takes them about an/one hour and a half to go to work every day.
3. As a kid, l loved to watch cartoons, but ...
4. l still remember how hard the/my first day was.
5. Suddenly a football fell just in front of me and almost hit me.
6. Then l put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together.

明辨泛指和特指，避免錯用、漏用和多用

a還是an

看似用an不用an

• a unit
• a uniform
• a university
• a European
• a one-way trip
• a usual / useful / useless +n.

該用an時就用an

• an apple
• an hour
• an island
• an old man
• an orange
• an easy question

六宗罪之代詞用法與指代

1. Mr. and Mrs.Zhang both work in our school.
2. ... they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and other animals.
3. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China.
4. Only a few choose to deal with the problems on their own.

基本用法（人稱/物主/反身/不定代詞）；指代對象不一致

your還是yours

Your：形容詞性物主代詞

• 在句中用作定語
• 不可單獨使用
• 心須與名詞 / 動名詞一起使用

Yours：名詞性物主代詞

• 在句中可用作主語、賓語、表語
• 可單獨使用
• 后面不能再接名詞

your+名詞=yours

• This is your book.
• This book is yours.

七宗罪之靈活的介詞

1. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot from doing some housework.
2. They have also bought for some gardening tools.
3. It was a relief and l came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of on the road.

介詞錯用 / （不及物動詞后）漏用 / （及物動詞）多用

八宗罪之并列連詞

1. Suddenly a football fell just in front of me and almost hit me.
2. ln order to make sure all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.
3. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but l have long been out of practice.

送分FANBOYS先搞定：for / and / nor / but / or / yet / so

八宗罪之從屬連詞

1. They also had a small pond where they raised fish.【或者which前加in】
2. Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy.

3.l waited patiently until the oil was hot.

優(yōu)先級：定從、狀從、名從

九宗罪之?dāng)?shù)詞基 / 序數(shù)

1. In the summer holiday following my eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons.
2. Then, when l was in the fifth grade, I wanted to be a teacher because l ...

基數(shù)詞、序數(shù)詞的轉(zhuǎn)換

最后的救贖之固定搭配

1. What's more, doing housework can be a form of mental relaxation from study.
2. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes ...
3. To everyone's surprise, the ball went into the net.
4. Some of us were confident and eager to take part in the class activity

2??進階大禮包

秘籍2：逐句突破，考點匹配

實詞：名動形副

虛詞：冠代介連

3??口訣斬滿貫

時代并列和邏輯

明顯錯誤先掃除

動詞形，名格數(shù)

注意修飾形和副

兩類連詞常?？?/p>

冠詞介詞勤光顧

代詞留心性數(shù)格

基序固搭需關(guān)注

解題三步走

A：先易后難

• 時態(tài)&指代一致性
• 并列結(jié)構(gòu)
• 明顯邏輯錯誤

B：逐句突破

• 名動形副
• 冠代介連

C：查漏補缺

• 考點排查
• 知識點積累

交學(xué)費啦

1. First l cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside.
2. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by selling the fish.
3. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help.

turn to sb. for help：向某人尋求幫助