議論文

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關鍵字：option choice，choose，decision

范文：

第一段

In the modern society,在現(xiàn)代社會

In the modernized world,在現(xiàn)代化世界的快速全球化

With the giant leap of technology/economy/

society,隨著科技/經濟/社會的巨大飛躍

With the rapid globalization of modern world,

隨著現(xiàn)代化世界的快速全球化

With the rapid globalization of economy,nowadays youngsters/students have different option upon graduation.(闡述問題，背景）

Some think that to find a job somewhere is beneficial,while others think to start a business of your own is a better choice.(列舉選擇)

Personally,I prefer the former/latter.(做出選擇).前者/后者

The following reasons can account for my preference.(過渡句).

第二段 論點+論據(jù)

social elites=elites in workplace=professional elites=scholars 社會精英

furthermore=additionally=moreover 其次

though=although=while=despite=in spite of ...，...

盡管...但是...

entrepreneurs 企業(yè)家（安戳破紐斯）

(論點1)First and foremost,there is no doubt that to find a job somewhere is more free.

(論據(jù)1)Based on big data,a majority of successful social elites admitted that their careers

(論點2)Furthermore,it is obvious that we can make useful friends when we have a decent job.

(論據(jù)2)Where there is /are job/work place,there is/are friends

(論點3)Last but not least,no one can deny that to find a job is easier than to start a company

(論據(jù)3)Though some people do succeed in starting a business of their own,most of entrepreneurs failed when they just start

第三段 重申觀點+提出期望

In the word,to find a job somewhere is better/more suitable than B(重申觀點)

If we spare no effors to work hard in our career,the future of our life will be promising and rosy （提出希望）

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