一篇帝國(guó)理工計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè)個(gè)人陳述分享-5月24日
個(gè)人陳述
申請(qǐng)專業(yè)：帝國(guó)理工大學(xué)MSc Computing (Software Engineering)
Computer science, since my childhood, has been my dream major and has been motivating me to explore indefatigably. Because of my enthusiasm for it, the fierce competition and heavy workload in college become the finest nutrition to foster my studies, fortifying my expertise in computer science with practical skills of programming, algorithms, databases and of operating systems, etc. It is computer science that rewarded me with the strongest sense of accomplishment. Longing from heart for the strong atmosphere of creating in this field, moreover, I gradually realized that as a Computer Science major, I cannot merely focus on immediate professional skills; I must also contemplate how to bring creative changes to computer technology itself, which can stimulate my innovative potential further. For this cogitative purpose, I resolve to pursue more cutting-edge technology of computer science so as to consolidate my professionalism of undertaking software engineeringresearch.
計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)，從小就是我夢(mèng)寐以求的專業(yè)，一直激勵(lì)著我不懈探索。因?yàn)槲覍?duì)它的熱情，大學(xué)里激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)和繁重的工作成為培養(yǎng)我學(xué)習(xí)的最佳營(yíng)養(yǎng)，用編程、算法、數(shù)據(jù)庫和操作系統(tǒng)等實(shí)用技能加強(qiáng)我在計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)方面的專業(yè)知識(shí)。是計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)給了我最強(qiáng)烈的成就感。發(fā)自內(nèi)心地向往這一領(lǐng)域濃厚的創(chuàng)作氛圍，而且，我逐漸意識(shí)到，作為一名計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè)的學(xué)生，我不能只關(guān)注眼前的專業(yè)技能；我還必須思考如何給計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)本身帶來創(chuàng)造性的變化，這可以進(jìn)一步激發(fā)我的創(chuàng)新潛力。為此，我決心追求更前沿的計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)技術(shù)，以鞏固我從事軟件工程研究的專業(yè)精神。
（介紹學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)算機(jī)的動(dòng)機(jī)）
I have been striving to maintain a high GPA both at University of Alberta and University of British Columbia, which can be proved by my performance on Dean’s Honour List each year and the Faculty of Science International Student Scholarship. With my knowledge extending itself to such CS areas as software engineering, artificial intelligence and machine learning, I obtained my greatest harvest during study, the top-down thinking method, which guides me to learn starting from the topmost Applications, and by learning about the working principle of the previous layer, to Approach the nature of the machine. The structured sense of logic embodied in this process truly captivated me; I also used to feel deeply Appealed to artificial intelligence; however, my fantasy, namely there is an omnipotent algorithm which can reason like a human brain, broke into pieces after I studied machine learning, which told me there is no such supremetechnology and knowledge to date. Realizingthat mathematics and logic are still the fundamentals underpinning computer science, I therefore chose the philosophical course of formal language to get closer to the nature of reasoning, which enlightened me a lot in logical thinking.
在阿爾伯塔大學(xué)和不列顛哥倫比亞大學(xué)讀書時(shí)，我一直努力保持較高的平均績(jī)點(diǎn)，這可以通過我每年在院長(zhǎng)榮譽(yù)名單上的表現(xiàn)和理學(xué)院國(guó)際學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金得到證明。隨著我的知識(shí)擴(kuò)展到軟件工程、人工智能和機(jī)器學(xué)習(xí)等計(jì)算機(jī)（CS）領(lǐng)域，我在學(xué)習(xí)期間獲得了最大的收獲，即自上而下的思維方法，這種方法指導(dǎo)我從最頂層的應(yīng)用程序開始學(xué)習(xí)，并通過學(xué)習(xí)上一層的工作原理來接近機(jī)器的本質(zhì)。這一過程中所體現(xiàn)的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)感著實(shí)讓我著迷；我也曾經(jīng)對(duì)人工智能深感訴求；然而，我的幻想，即有一個(gè)萬能的算法可以像人腦一樣推理，在我學(xué)習(xí)機(jī)器學(xué)習(xí)后破碎了，這告訴我迄今為止沒有這樣至高無上的技術(shù)和知識(shí)。意識(shí)到數(shù)學(xué)和邏輯仍然是支撐計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)，因此我選擇了形式語言的哲學(xué)課程，以更接近推理的本質(zhì)，這在邏輯思維方面啟發(fā)了我很多。
（介紹自己的本科學(xué)術(shù)背景，以及自己對(duì)軟件工程、人工智能和機(jī)器學(xué)習(xí)等計(jì)算機(jī)領(lǐng)域的思考）
隨著我在計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)方面的理論基礎(chǔ)的建立，我也開始開發(fā)一系列可以實(shí)現(xiàn)不同功能的CS作品。我用Python開發(fā)的一個(gè)Pixiv scrawler，可以幫助它的用戶保存來自虛擬社區(qū)網(wǎng)站Pixiv的插圖。用Python開發(fā)的另一項(xiàng)工作是Markdown擴(kuò)展，它可以支持類似LaTeX的模板。2018年，我通過設(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)記筆記的桌面應(yīng)用，熟悉了Java的實(shí)際使用。通過使用Flask和MySQL，我于2019年2月從零開始設(shè)計(jì)并部署了一個(gè)在線討論板，并一直維護(hù)其運(yùn)行?，F(xiàn)在我正忙于用我掌握的計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)嘗試更多的創(chuàng)新和創(chuàng)造——?jiǎng)?chuàng)新和創(chuàng)造應(yīng)該是計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)的永久特征；一個(gè)合格的CS專業(yè)人員應(yīng)該是新技術(shù)的積極創(chuàng)造者和開發(fā)者。
（介紹了自己在計(jì)算機(jī)方面的開發(fā)實(shí)踐）
為了不斷完善自己的專業(yè)知識(shí)，我還選擇了職場(chǎng)實(shí)踐，并于2020年6月進(jìn)入App Annie，擔(dān)任生產(chǎn)力工程實(shí)習(xí)生。我的職責(zé)是開發(fā)和維護(hù)所有部門的DevOps工具鏈，這使我體驗(yàn)了敏捷開發(fā)的工作流程，并了解了團(tuán)隊(duì)之間的溝通模式。更重要的是，由于該部門的大量項(xiàng)目，我可以接觸到Jenkins和Docker等令我非常感興趣的技術(shù)。我解決問題的能力也得到了加強(qiáng)。通過檢查Firefox和Chrome的大量文檔，設(shè)計(jì)銷售和前端部門使用的瀏覽器擴(kuò)展，我成功地克服了關(guān)于兼容性和緩存性能的問題。由于我的努力贏得了前端開發(fā)團(tuán)隊(duì)負(fù)責(zé)人的贊揚(yáng)，我已經(jīng)下定決心在大三通過這樣的實(shí)習(xí)進(jìn)一步積累第一手工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
（敘述了自己的實(shí)習(xí)，在實(shí)習(xí)中接觸到的新技術(shù)如Jenkins和Docker，以及解決了什么問題， 如成功地克服了關(guān)于兼容性和緩存性能的問題等等）
As mentioned above, CS majors must bring innovative changes to computer science. In order for this, during graduate study, I hope to deepen my understanding of cutting-edge technologies, especially those about distributed systems and computer security; my professional and personal capabilities should be simultaneously strengthened in several aspects, including doing independent scientific research, abstracting mathematical models from practical problems, combining my knowledge and skills with real working scenarios, etc. Besides, my creative thinking should be further sharpened to help me extend or transform existing thoughts and conceive a unique and complete framework for new technologydevelopment or problem solving. As long as I am sufficiently prepared in the above aspects, plus my fortified expertise in Computer Science, I believe I will create new and feasible computer technologies to benefit people.
如上所述，計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)(CS)專業(yè)學(xué)生必須給CS帶來創(chuàng)新性的改變。為了這個(gè)，在研究生學(xué)習(xí)期間，我希望加深對(duì)前沿技術(shù)的了解，尤其是關(guān)于分布式系統(tǒng)和計(jì)算機(jī)安全的知識(shí)；我的專業(yè)能力和個(gè)人能力要在幾個(gè)方面同步加強(qiáng)，包括做獨(dú)立的科學(xué)研究，從實(shí)際問題中抽象出數(shù)學(xué)模型，將自己的知識(shí)技能與真實(shí)的工作場(chǎng)景相結(jié)合等等。此外，我的創(chuàng)造性思維應(yīng)該進(jìn)一步提高，以幫助我擴(kuò)展或轉(zhuǎn)換現(xiàn)有的想法，并為新技術(shù)開發(fā)或解決問題構(gòu)思一個(gè)獨(dú)特而完整的框架。只要我在上述方面做好充分準(zhǔn)備，再加上我在計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)方面的專業(yè)知識(shí)，我相信我會(huì)創(chuàng)造出新的可行的計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)來造福人類。
（介紹自己在研究生學(xué)習(xí)階段的目標(biāo)：加深對(duì)前沿技術(shù)的了解，尤其是關(guān)于分布式系統(tǒng)和計(jì)算機(jī)安全的知識(shí)）
When I was looking for the best platform for my graduate degree, MSc the Computing (Software Engineering) programme of Imperial College London caught my attention. On your school’s official website, I found that the research areas of the programme involve distributed algorithms and distributed corpora, which is what I would like to study in depth at the graduate level. In addition, I could also delve into artificial intelligence and machine learning. As I mentioned above, I still have a great interest in these areas, and I hope to make a breakthrough in these areas of research once I have mastered strong math and logic. Your university can provide me with the guidance of excellent professors and a wealth of academic resources, and with my undergraduate academic background, I am confident that I can contribute my share to the field of software engineering in computer science by leveraging expertise and skills acquired. I may work as a computer engineer in a large-scale computer technology company after graduation. I also hope sincerely your first-rate career service will help me further specify my long-range career planning. I am extremely eager to complete my postgraduate degree at your university and sincerely request that you give me an opportunity to do so.
當(dāng)我在為我的研究生學(xué)位尋找最佳平臺(tái)時(shí)，倫敦帝國(guó)理工學(xué)院的計(jì)算機(jī)(軟件工程)碩士課程引起了我的注意。在貴校官網(wǎng)上，我發(fā)現(xiàn)該項(xiàng)目的研究領(lǐng)域涉及分布式算法和分布式語料庫，這也是我想在研究生階段深入研究的內(nèi)容。此外，我還可以深入研究人工智能和機(jī)器學(xué)習(xí)。正如我上面提到的，我仍然對(duì)這些領(lǐng)域有很大的興趣，我希望一旦我掌握了強(qiáng)大的數(shù)學(xué)和邏輯，我可以在這些研究領(lǐng)域取得突破。貴校可以為我提供優(yōu)秀教授的指導(dǎo)和豐富的學(xué)術(shù)資源，加上我的本科學(xué)歷，我有信心通過利用所獲得的專業(yè)知識(shí)和技能，為計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)中的軟件工程領(lǐng)域貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量。
畢業(yè)后可能會(huì)在大型計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)公司做計(jì)算機(jī)工程師。我也真誠(chéng)地希望你們一流的職業(yè)服務(wù)能幫助我進(jìn)一步明確我的長(zhǎng)期職業(yè)規(guī)劃。我非?？释谫F校完成我的研究生學(xué)位，并真誠(chéng)地請(qǐng)求您給我一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)。
（陳述了自己選擇倫敦帝國(guó)理工學(xué)院的計(jì)算機(jī)(軟件工程)碩士課程的原因，以及自己未來的職業(yè)規(guī)劃）
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