①I graduated from XXX University in XXX, majoring in XXX.

②My undergraduate education was accomplished in XXX University in XXX and my major was XXX.

③I am a graduate of XXX University with a bachelor’s degree in XXX.

④I’ve finished my undergraduate education in XXX University in XXX, majoring in XXX.

4.性格特征——

①I’m a goal-oriented person, and it means that once I set a goal, I’ll strive to put it into action and never give up.

②I’m an mature and self-motivated person with a high sense of responsibility.

③I am a determined person, always willing to achieve higher goals. That's why I made up my mind to get into your prestigious university to further my study.

第二段思路：①總起：專業(yè)知識+實踐能力；+②證明專業(yè)知識過關(guān)；+③證明 實踐能力；+④其他活動和能力；+⑤興趣愛好

1.總起（我在大學期間，基礎知識扎實，并且追求學以致用）

①In the past four years, I spent most of my time studying XXX and put what I’ve learned to practice.

②During my undergraduate studies, I did my best to reconcile the demands of my major and my interests.

③During my college years, I’ve laid a solid foundation and learned to apply what I’ve learned to practice.

2.專業(yè)知識——

我績點高，如何表達？

On the one hand, I studied hard to acquire relevant professional knowledge. And I scored highly in XXX. On the other hand, I took part in some competitions/contests related to this major.

我拿過獎學金，如何表達？

①I’m a diligent student. I got scholarships twice because of my excellent academic records.

②As I put much effort into my study, I currently rank top 5 among XXX peers with a GPA of XXX. I've been awarded the national scholarship twice for my excellent academic performance.

我某幾門專業(yè)課成績高，如何表達？

I’m a hard-working student, and I managed to pass all the exams. I also got relatively high marks in some professional courses such as XXX and XXX.

我擅長某幾門專業(yè)課，如何表達？

I’ve a solid foundation in all aspects of XXX, especially in XXX, because I’ve committed large amounts of time to participating in various XXX contests.

我考過一些證書，如何表達？

①Meanwhile, I obtained the XXX qualification/certificate and passed the exam of CET-6, which is a preparation for my postgraduate study.

②I scored highly in CET-4 and CET-6, so I have excellent oral and written communication skills in English, which I believe will help me a lot in my future study and research.

3.實踐能力——

①I’m an active participant of a range of activities, such as XXX and XXX. I got the recognition award of XXX together with my classmates, which was the result of engagement in Undergraduate Innovation and Entrepreneurship Training Program. Such practical experience sharpened my professional skills and improved my problem-solving ability.

②In addition, I was the director of the XXX department of the student union. I am well equipped with leadership and organizational capabilities. I have participated in organizing school-level activities many times, such as sports meet, debate contests and graduation ceremony.

③I’m an active participant of all kinds of campus activities such as XXX and XXX. All of these events strengthen my team work spirit and develop my interpersonal skills. I also take part in some extracurricular activities to improve my professional skills. For example, I once worked as XXX and I was responsible for XXX. It largely increased my practical experience, which I believe will be beneficial to my future study.

④In addition, during the past few years, I participated in all kinds of activities related to my major. For example, I once took part in the XXX competition together with my classmates. And under the guidance of our teachers, we excelled/did well in this event and won the first/second/third prize. There is no doubt that such activities help improve my team work spirit and increase my practical ability.

⑤In XXX, I was very lucky to be a volunteer of XXX. At that time, I finished all the tasks assigned by my teacher with high quality. When I was in trouble, I communicated with my teachers promptly and put forward my own methods to solve the problem in time. And ultimately I got everyone’s approval and got the title of outstanding volunteer.

⑥On top of that, the internship experience of studying in XXX has extremely aroused my interest in my major. It enriched my perspective of XXX and broadened my academic horizons.

4.工作經(jīng)歷——

有正式工作，該怎么說？

①After graduation, I work as a XXX in XXX. During my working period, I devote my time and energy to XXX. In the past few years, my professional ability and experience have been greatly improved and I constantly receive recognition from my colleagues as well as my leaders.

只有過實習經(jīng)歷，怎么說？

②I was in charge of XXX while in XXX and my daily tasks were XXX. My performance was quite exceptional and I was voted as advanced new employee for my progress in XXX department.

5.興趣愛好——

①Well, in my spare time, I like watching movies and sports. From time to time, I like reading books to improve my XXX ability such as XXX written by XXX and some books about basic knowledge of XXX.

②I am open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of life, music, and study. In my spare time, I have broad interest like many other youngsters. I love XXX, especially XXX.

第三段思路：結(jié)尾（表達不足+表達愿望+表示感謝）

1.表達不足——

These days I come to realize that there is much room for improvement on my professional ability and I feel an urgent need to enhance myself and pursue further study.

But when I finished my study, I realized that what I have learned is not enough. I learned a lot during the past few years. But gradually, I realize it is far from enough enough.

I don’t like the way that we only learn something when we need it in work. It’s kind of passive and inappropriate. I’m more of a person who wanna take the initiative and equip myself for work.

Through studying professional knowledge and reading books involving XXX, I find myself gradually obsessed with the charm of this major and would like to make some contributions in this field. But I realize that what I've learned was not enough for this target.

跨考生：

I learned a lot during the past four years. But I came to realize that 原專業(yè) is just not suitable for me.

I found myself attracted by 跨考專業(yè), and I’m thirsty for some basic knowledge of 跨考專業(yè). And in preparation for this exam, I gained a better understanding of this research field.

But that’s far from enough.

2.表達愿望——

表達愿望：

①I come to realize that there is much room for improvement on my professional ability and I felt an urgent need to enhance myself. So I really hope that I can get the chance to study in XXX University and lay a solid foundation for my future career.

②So I really hope that I can get the chance to further my study in XXX. University and if possible, I will continue to obtain a doctor degree.

③I would like to further my study, so I choose to continue my interest with a master’s degree.

④Therefore, I prefer to pursue further education. XXX University is my dreamland and it has always been my dream to become a member of it.

⑤Therefore, I sincerely hope that I can get the chance to study in your prestigious university and become part of this big family. And I’ll try my best to adapt to the new life here and devote myself to the study of XXX.

⑥That’s why I’m standing here, seizing this opportunity for self-development. And I really hope to get into XXX University to further my study.

⑦In the future, I hope to follow a career in XXX, and I would like to pursue further study in this research field. I hope that I can have the opportunity to obtain a systematic postgraduate training at XXX University.

⑧If I’m lucky enough to be a student of your prestigious university, I will try my best to develop my abilities in related aspects and try to be a qualified postgraduate.

⑨As is well-known, XXX University is an outstanding college with perfect academic atmosphere and highly qualified faculty. So I really hope that I can get the chance to study in your prestigious university and lay a solid foundation for my future career.

⑩I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. Of course, if I’m given a chance to study XXX at this famous University, I will spare no effort to have a good command of this major.

3.表示感謝——

①That’s all. Thank you for your time.

②I’d highly appreciate your favorable consideration of my application.