【高中英語讀后續(xù)寫速成】“天龍八步”法：三大步，八小步速成作文
目錄：
第1部分
第2部分八步法實(shí)戰(zhàn)應(yīng)用：高考真題講解
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讀后續(xù)寫，大部分都是圍繞conflict，solution來運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)的，首先你能看懂材料，如果這一步無法完成，那這篇文章并不適合你。然后，你要找到文章到底提出什么沖突或問題。大部分文章都是這個(gè)模式：
(1)情緒：消極情緒
(2)細(xì)節(jié)：進(jìn)一步解釋描寫
(3)轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人的努力或借助外界
(4)轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
(5)失望：但是問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題
(6)新法：突然有了一個(gè)想法(一句話說明這個(gè)想法)
(7)結(jié)局：過了一段時(shí)間；事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折
(8)總結(jié)：點(diǎn)題，呼應(yīng)前文
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第1步??情緒：情緒描寫
第2步??細(xì)節(jié)：進(jìn)一步解釋描寫
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【例1】
情緒描寫∶?笑
smile brightly;laugh; beam; ?light(sth)up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing; wear a bright/broad ?smile; give sb a smile
細(xì)節(jié)描寫∶笑
看到直升飛機(jī)，Jane高興地笑了起來。
(1)At the sight of the helicopter，Jane beamed with wild ?joy.
(2)Seeing the helicopter，Jane beamed with wild ?joy.
(3)The moment she caught sight of the ?helicopter，Jane's eays/face lit up with delight.
(4)The moment she caught sight of the ?helicopter，a bright smile lit up Jane's faceleyes.
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【例2】
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情緒描寫∶哭
cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out ?crying;(one's eyes)brim with/befull of/be filled with tears
細(xì)節(jié)描寫∶哭
(1)A lump came to his throat.他哽咽欲哭。
(2)Her eyes were red from crying.她的雙眼哭得通紅。
(3)Her eyes brimmed with tears.她的眼里滿含淚水。
(4) Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her ?cheeks.眼淚沿著她的面頰流下來。
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【例3】
情緒描寫∶?害怕
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless;in(a)panic; ?in a cold sweat;be full of fear; be filled with terror;be rooted to the spot; ?freeze;run away; flee; one'sknees feel weak; (hands) sweat
細(xì)節(jié)描寫∶?害怕
我感到很害怕。
(1)I felt very ?frightened/scared/panicked.
(2) I was in (a) panic/was full of fear.
(3)I stood rooted to the spot,brimming with ?fear/filled with fear.
(4)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my ?knees felt weak.
(5)I froze with terror, too scared to move.
(6)I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my ?palms sweating.
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【例4】
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情緒描寫∶?高興激動(dòng)
v.?dance;jump/leap withjoy; feel a ?surge of happiness/delight/joyexcitement; whistle; be overcome with happiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one's ?eyes) twinkle;(one's heart) beat/pound wildly
adj.?happy; delighted; overjoyed; ?excited; thrilled; wild with joy
細(xì)節(jié)描寫∶高興激動(dòng)
當(dāng)她知道考試結(jié)果時(shí)，她興奮極了。
(1)When she knew the result of the test, she felt ?excited/thrilled.
(2) When she knew theresult of the test, her eyes ?twinkled with excitement.
(3)When sheknew the result of the test,her heart was ?pounding with wildjoy.
(4))When she knew the result of the test,a ?wildexcitement took hold of her.
(5)Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge ?of excitement.
(6)Knowing the result of the test,she was overcome ?with excitement.
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【例5】
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情緒描寫∶傷心痛苦
sad; bitter; sorrowful; feela surge of ?sadness;(sadness)surge within sb; one's heart ache; be overcome with sadness
細(xì)節(jié)描寫∶傷心痛苦她傷心不已。
(1) Sam felt extremely ?sad.
(2) A sadness came over her.
(3) Her heart ached, tears streaming down her ?cheeks.
(4) Numb with grief, she became speechless.
(5)Feeling a surge of sadness,she couldn't help ?crying bitterly.
(6) Sadness surging within her, she burst into ?tears.
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【例6】
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情緒描寫∶?生氣憤怒
felt/get angry/furious; feel a surge of ?anger/rage/fury;eyes blaze;storm out of/into/off; storm/say angrily; sth ?makes sb blood boil; sth makes sb extremely angry; clasp one's fists/teeth; speechless
細(xì)節(jié)描寫∶?生氣憤怒
Sam感到非常生氣。
(1) Sam felt very angry.
(2) Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing ?with anger.
(3) Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the ?room,slamming the door
furiously behind him.
(4) Boiling with rage,Sam shook his fist at me.
(5)Filled with fury,Sam was unable to uttera single ?word.
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第3步轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人努力或借助外界
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【例7】
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鼓起勇氣;?他人的鼓勵(lì)
pluckup/take/gather one'scourage(to do….)
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毫不猶豫
(1)sb could hardly wait ?to do sth
(2) without a second thought
(3) without even thinking
(4) without delay
(5) without hesitation
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第4步轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
【例8】
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似乎
(1) It was like doing sth
(2) ?It seemed as if/that
希望
(1) hoping that..
(2) see/feel a glimmer of hope
(3) trying hard to do sth
欣慰
(1)…..breathed asigh of relief-sighed with relief 松了—口氣
(2)(a wave of relief flooded through/washed over sb
(3)to one'srelief… 使人欣慰的/放心的是……
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第5步失望：但是問題還未解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題
【例9】
不幸的是
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(1)but bad luck for sb,.….(2), but in vain
(3),but without success(4),but no use
不知道做什么
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(1)sb did sth, wondering what to do next.(2)sb did ?sth,not knowing what to do next.
(3)sb did sth,unsure of what to do next.(4)sb was at ?a loss what to do.
(5)sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.
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第6步想法：突然有了一個(gè)想法(一句話說明這個(gè)想法)
【例10】
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某人想到?/明白/有了主意
(1)It suddenly occurred to sb that+從句-It hit sb that+從句
-lt struck sb that+從句-It ?dawned on sb that+從句
(2)(idea，thought..)occurred/came ?to sb=..came/flashed into one's mind-...crowded in one's mind
(3)one's mind began to race
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第7步??結(jié)局：過段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折
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過了一段時(shí)間
(1)not long after that,..=shortly ?afterwards,….-beforelong,….=It
didn't take long before+從句=It took some time before+從句(2) for an instant/moment
事情有了轉(zhuǎn)折
(1)To one'ssurprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it ?turned out that+從句
(2) But on second thoughts,….
(3)But what happened next was pure magic.
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第8步總結(jié)：點(diǎn)題，呼應(yīng)前文
例12
直到……才意識(shí)到
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(1)倒裝句∶Not until+時(shí)間狀語+did sb realize/notice that+
從句
(2)強(qiáng)調(diào)句∶It ?was only+時(shí)間狀語+that sb realized that+從句
還記得某人的話；還在某人的腦海中
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(1) One's words(echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
(2) One's words/voice/song lingered/whispered in ?one's mind/ head.
(3) One's head was still full of..
經(jīng)歷與教訓(xùn)
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(1)What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson sb ?taught
me/sb learned from sb!
(2)What a/an ?enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/
memorable/interesting/valuable experience sb had!
(3) Down deep in one's heat….在某人的內(nèi)心深處
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“八步法”實(shí)戰(zhàn)應(yīng)用：高考真題講解
故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子獨(dú)自離開，述路在樹林里，直升飛機(jī)來了幾次授救但沒有看見她。她感到很失望。
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閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
Oneweekend in July,?Jane?and her husband,?Tom,?had driven threehours to?camp?overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on theway an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time theyreached the?lake,?Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going tofind a better spot for us to camp" and?walked?away.
With nopath to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had?climbedto a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. Shesuddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!"she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. Asnight was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for thenight. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and herfamily. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane roseat the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere?at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to astream.?To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drankand ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it wouldlead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a?helicopter.Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to seeher from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Janetook off her?yellow?blouse, thinking that she should go to an open areaand flag them if they came back again.
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But no more helicopters cameand it was getting dark again.
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?? It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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第一段：Butno more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(但是沒有直升機(jī)來了，天又黑了。)
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讀后續(xù)寫
續(xù)寫
1.A wave of terror swept over her.
一陣恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。
1.情緒
2.Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, ?an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
她的心劇烈地跳動(dòng)著，手心冒汗，一個(gè)內(nèi)在的聲音告訴她，她必須找到一個(gè)安全的地方。
2.細(xì)節(jié)：詳述情緒
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her ?courage to feel the way.
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雖然她很累，也很害怕，但簡(jiǎn)鼓起勇氣去感受這條路。
3.轉(zhuǎn)折∶ ?個(gè)人努力
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4.Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a ?cave.
5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope. ?saying to herself."Tomorrow is another day."
4.幸運(yùn)的是，沒過多久她就找到了一個(gè)洞穴。
5.松了一口氣，她感到了一絲希望。對(duì)自己說。?“明天又是新的一天。”
轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功、希望來了。
With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her ?husband kept her company.
說完，她就去睡覺了，她丈夫在夢(mèng)里陪伴著她。
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第二段：Itwas daybreak when Jane woke up.簡(jiǎn)醒來的時(shí)候天已經(jīng)亮了。
讀后續(xù)寫
續(xù)寫
1.Hungry and disappointed, she found not any ?helicopter overhead,at a loss what to do.
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1.饑餓和失望，她發(fā)現(xiàn)頭頂上沒有任何直升機(jī)，不知所措。
再度失望(出現(xiàn)新問題)
2.It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a ?big open area first.
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3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can't ?wait to set off.
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4. After what seemed a century,such an area did come ?into sight.
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1.????? ?Her ?face brightened up.
2.她突然明白，她應(yīng)該先找一個(gè)大的空地。
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1.???? ?她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出發(fā)了。
4.好像過了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，這樣的地區(qū)確實(shí)出現(xiàn)了。
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5.她的臉變亮了。
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突然有了辦法
6. What a coincidence ?that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her.
7. Upon its landing, out ?dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart.
6.與此同時(shí)，一架直升機(jī)正朝她飛來，真是巧合。
7.她的丈夫緊緊地?fù)肀е?jiǎn)，眼淚涌上心頭。
結(jié)果解決問題，巧不成書，皆大歡喜
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8. It was at the moment ?that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.
8.就在這時(shí)，他們決定不再爭(zhēng)吵了，而是學(xué)會(huì)了妥協(xié)
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新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫萬能結(jié)尾句背誦
(一)脫險(xiǎn)類
(1) I realized how lucky I was to be rescued and how blessed I am to have such supportive friends.
我意識(shí)到能夠被營(yíng)救、能夠有這樣支持我的朋友是多么幸運(yùn)。
(2) This frightening experience taught me a valuable lesson in my life, through which I knew theimportance of ..
這次可怕的經(jīng)歷讓我學(xué)習(xí)到了人生中寶貴的一課，通過這次經(jīng)歷我認(rèn)識(shí)到.....的重要性。
(3) I will be always careful when I go outdoors. After all, safety always comes first.以后外出時(shí)我會(huì)注意安全。畢竟安全總是第一位的。
(4) After that, I obeyed the instructions seriously and never acted just following my will. It was indeed a lesson that benefited me a lot.自那之后，我很認(rèn)真地遵守指令，不再僅根據(jù)自己的意愿行動(dòng)。這次教訓(xùn)讓我受益良多。
(二)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類
1) The more you feed your mind with positive?thoughts, the more you can attract great things into your life.
你的思想越積極，你生命中就會(huì)遇到更多的好事。
(2) All of the hard work and sacrifice paid off. When you have a dream, pursue it with all of your heart.
所有的付出與艱辛都會(huì)有所回報(bào)，當(dāng)你心懷夢(mèng)想的時(shí)候，全身心地去追逐吧!
(3) A dream doesn' t become reality through?magic; it takes sweat, determination and hard work.
夢(mèng)想不是通過魔法變成現(xiàn)實(shí)的，而是通過汗水、決心和努力來實(shí)現(xiàn)的。
(4) Actually, every individual possses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.事實(shí)上，每個(gè)人都有天賦。當(dāng)你找到你的天賦時(shí)，要勇敢并且付出努力。最終你也可以創(chuàng)造奇跡。
(5) It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take fuIl advantage of it, you will stand a chance to ralize your dreams.
追逐夢(mèng)想從來為時(shí)不晚。只要你抓住每一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)并且充分利用它，你就有機(jī)會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。
(6) The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties, which we should be brave to face. As long as we don t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difculties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.
通往成功的道路不是平坦的。它是充滿困難與挑戰(zhàn)的，我們應(yīng)該勇敢面對(duì)。只要我們不放棄希望并且不遺余力地去克服困難，最終我們一定能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。
人物心理描寫情緒類
（一）?表人物喜樂??短語讀后續(xù)寫萬能模板句型整理
幾乎無法掩飾他的興奮的心情：?can hardly conceal his excitement
感覺既興奮又開心：feel a mixture of excitement and happiness
被強(qiáng)烈地吸引：?be powerfully attracted to
心情愉快：?in cheerful spirits
滿意的表情/一個(gè)令人鼓舞的表情出現(xiàn)在她的臉龐上: a satisfied look /an encouraging expression appeared on her face.
對(duì)?...?感到滿意：?be content with
對(duì)?...?很高興：?be delighted at
因?...?而高興：?be joyful over/about
高興地跳起來：?dance/jump for joy
流下幸福的淚水：?tears of happiness flowing down
使某人心情愉快：?brighten sb’s heart
使某人安心：?set one ’ s heart at rest
句子
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.?她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。
Her face lit up with pleasure.?（容光煥發(fā)）
A smile of understanding flashed across his face.?他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。
Laughter lingered around the room.?笑聲在房間里縈繞。
His eyes twinkled with pleasure.?他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。
I was pleased beyond description.?我高興得難以形容
Her smile lit up the whole room.?她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。
She wore a shining smile on her face.?她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。
She was overflowing with happiness.?她洋溢著幸福。
I was floating on air.?我高興得飄飄然。
(二)表人物悲憂消沉
強(qiáng)烈的失落感：?a strong sense of loss
陷入絕望：?fall into despair
哭泣釋放苦悶情緒：?crying gives some emotional release
減輕某人的痛苦?/?煩惱：?ease sb of his pain/trouble
因某人的死亡而痛心：?break one’ s heart over one ’ death
悲痛欲絕：?cry one ’ s heart out
懷著沉重的/?沮喪的/?憂郁的心情：?with a heavy/ sinking/ sorrowful heart
情緒低落：?be down in spirits
垂頭喪氣：?lose one ’ s spirit
意志消沉：?a broken spirit
句子
He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. ?他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. ?我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。
She burst into tears and ran out of the room.?她突然哭了起來，跑出了房間。
She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.?她掩面哭泣。
I tried to fight back tears. ?/My eyes werefilled with tears.?我努力忍住眼淚。?/??我的眼里充滿了淚水。
A frown?（皺眉）?nowstood on his face.他皺起了眉頭。
These days he was in low spirits.?這些日子他情緒低落。
（三）表人物怨怒
引起某人的不快：?arouse one’s displeasure
對(duì)某人的行為感到不滿：?be displeased at one ’ s conduct
氣得滿臉通紅：?flame with anger
愁眉苦臉：?have a worried look
對(duì)?...?表示不滿：?express/voice a complaint about
怒氣沖沖地跑出房間：?run out of the room in a burst of anger
感到尷尬的：?feel embarrassed
感到困惑的：?feel puzzled/confused
感到沮喪：?feel frustrated/depressed
感到惱怒的：?feel annoyed
感到泄氣的：?feel discouraged
句子
I was seized by anger.?我充滿了憤怒。
His anger boiled over.他的憤怒爆發(fā)了。
He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。
His voice trembled with anger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。
He gave me a look of burning anger.他憤怒地看了我一眼。
He glared at me with burning eyes .他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。
His face clouded with anger .他氣得臉色陰沉。
He sighed with disappointment. ?他失望地嘆了口氣。
（四）表人物害怕恐懼
He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他轉(zhuǎn)過身來，眼里充滿了恐懼。
Fear slowly creeps upon her.?恐懼慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她臉色蒼白地站在那里，舌頭打結(jié)。
A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear floodedover him.?他心中涌起一陣恐懼。/?恐懼淹沒了他。
She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pinsand needles.?她渾身顫抖，覺得如坐針氈。
（五）表人物感動(dòng)感激
讓我感動(dòng)的是：?I was touched to find that…
深受感動(dòng)：?It has touched me deeply to …
潸然淚下：?be moved to tears
令人非常感動(dòng)的是?:?It is very moving to …
感動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶：?feel moved with tears in one's eyes
Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感動(dòng)，我們?……
Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfeltgratitude.她熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。
With tears streaming down her face, she...?淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來，?……
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2個(gè)萬能情感句
第一個(gè)情感萬能句：?To one's +?情緒名詞，主句。
To my surprise, Tom won the first prize in theEnglish Speech Contest.?令我驚訝的是?Tom??居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。
【正態(tài)度】?amazement?驚奇?, delight?高興?, joy?高興?, satisfaction?滿足，?excitement?興奮?,
【負(fù)態(tài)度】?annoyance?煩惱?, disappointment?失望?, horror?恐怖?,shame,?羞恥? sorrow?悲傷?,
【中性態(tài)度】?puzzlement?迷惑?, regret?后悔?, relief?欣慰?, surprise /? amazement?驚訝
第二個(gè)情感萬能句：
sb. felt a great sense of +??情緒名詞?+welling up in sb ’ s heart and surging through sb.表示“某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈的?......?在內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌。”
舉例：?Sunny??感到一股強(qiáng)烈的榮譽(yù)感，在她心中升騰，奔涌。
Sunny felt a great sense of honour welling up inher heart and surging through her.
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萬能升華主旨句-成長(zhǎng)型
第一類：學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)促“改變”
It's never too late to learn. Each individual hasthe right to accept more challenges and make more?attempts.?學(xué)習(xí)永遠(yuǎn)為時(shí)不晚。每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該并且有權(quán)利去接受更多的挑戰(zhàn)，做更多的嘗試。
【分析】?individual?這里表示“個(gè)人，個(gè)體”。?make more?attempts???做更多嘗試。
第二類：發(fā)揮天賦促“改變
Actually, every individual possesses talent. Bebrave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in theend.? ?事實(shí)上，每個(gè)人都有天賦，發(fā)現(xiàn)它的時(shí)候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最終你會(huì)創(chuàng)造奇跡。
【分析】?possess???擁有。?create miracles?表示創(chuàng)造奇跡。
第三類：追逐夢(mèng)想促“改變”
?It's never too late to go for your dream. Aslong as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you willstand a chance to realize your dreams.?追夢(mèng)永遠(yuǎn)不晚。只要你抓住機(jī)會(huì)，充分利用機(jī)會(huì)，你就有機(jī)會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。
As long as we dare to dream and don't letdifficulties get in our way, anything is possible.?只要我們敢于夢(mèng)想，不被困難所阻擋，一切皆有可能。
【分析】?take full advantage of??充分利用，?? realize your dreams?表示“實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想”
第四類：克服困難促“改變”
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full ofchallenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as wedon’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, wewill surely achieve our goal (success) finally.
通往成功的路不會(huì)平坦，充滿挑戰(zhàn)和艱辛。我們要勇敢面對(duì)。只要不放棄希望并竭盡全力克服所有困難，我們最終會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的目標(biāo)（成功）。
【分析】?smooth???表示“平坦的” overcome all the difficulties???表示“克服困難”；?make every effort???表示“做出努力”；?as long as?，表示“只要”，引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。
第五類：戰(zhàn)勝恐懼促“改變”
Determination and optimism are what it takes toconquer your fear and accomplish your goal.?戰(zhàn)勝恐懼和實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)，需要決心和樂觀。
【分析】?Determination??表示“決心”；? optimism?表示“樂觀”。?conquer your fear?表示“克服你的恐懼”；?accomplish your goal?表示“完成目標(biāo)”
第六類：戰(zhàn)勝自卑促“改變”
I smiled as I eventually realized the real sourceof confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because Ihave realized it is your personality??that decides who you truly are.
我笑了，因?yàn)槲易罱K意識(shí)到了自信的真正來源?，F(xiàn)在，我為我的樣子感到驕傲，而且更快樂，因?yàn)槲乙呀?jīng)意識(shí)到，決定你真正是誰的是你的個(gè)性。
【分析】?eventually?表示“最后，終于”；?personality??表示“?個(gè)性?”。
第七類：戰(zhàn)勝消極促“改變”
Attitude is more important than facts for us. Wecannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing wecan do is hold a positive attitude.
態(tài)度對(duì)我們來說比事實(shí)更重要。我們不能改變我們的過去；我們不能改變事實(shí)。然而，我們唯一能做的就是保持積極的態(tài)度。
【分析】?Attitude?表示“態(tài)度”；?positive attitude.?就是“積極的態(tài)度”。
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萬能升華主旨句-助人型
一、助人為樂
1.Sometimes，a smallact of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有時(shí)候一個(gè)小小的善行可能足以帶來巨大的變化。
2.Sometimes small gesture of care will possiblymelt people’s loneliness.
有時(shí)候一個(gè)表達(dá)關(guān)愛的小小舉動(dòng)也可能融化人們內(nèi)心的孤單。
3.Smiles spread on their faces while the peoplepresent burst out thunderous applause.
微笑在他們的臉上綻開，在場(chǎng)的人發(fā)出雷鳴般的掌聲。
4.Helping others to realize their dreams gave memore pleasure.?幫助別人實(shí)現(xiàn)他們的夢(mèng)想讓我感覺更快樂。
5.Then he drove the car away without even sharinghis name and I have not seen him again.
然后他把車開走了，甚至沒有說出他的名字，我再也沒有見過他。
6.This kind act has a lasting influence on me.Ialways give others a helping hand if possible even so many years later.這種善意的行為對(duì)我產(chǎn)生了持久的影響。即使多年以后，我總是盡可能地幫助別人。
二、親情、友情、師生情
1.She felt warmth in the cold day，and believed there was kindness in every corner.
她在寒冷的天氣里感到了溫暖，相信每個(gè)角落都有善意。
2.Without friends，theworld would become wilder.?
沒有朋友，世界變成一片荒蕪。
3.Health is more than just your physicalwell-being.You need to have emotional needs met and that meansmaintaining family and friend relationships.
健康不僅僅是身體健康。你需要滿足情感需求，這意味著維系親情和友情。
4.He’s looking for love and he’s looking forfamily: he’s looking to be accepted and he’s looking forward to being embracedby his father.
他一直在尋找愛，尋找家庭；他渴望被接受，他期待能得到父親的擁抱。
5.If you take your friends for granted，you may not have friends for very long.
如果你把朋友視為理所當(dāng)然，那你也許不會(huì)有長(zhǎng)久的友情。
6.I was fortunate in having a good teacher. ?我很幸運(yùn)，有位好老師。
7.Honestly，I havefallen deeply in love with teaching and getting along with teenagers.
說實(shí)話，我已經(jīng)深深地愛上了教書以及和青少年相處。
8.After that，ourrelationship became closer and I was more like a friend than a teacher to them.
從那以后，我們的關(guān)系變得更親密，我對(duì)他們更像是朋友而不是老師。
三、勵(lì)志
1.The world makes way for the dreamer.世界總會(huì)給有夢(mèng)想的人開路。
2.Each man is the architect of his own fate每個(gè)人都是自己命運(yùn)的建筑師。
3.Life is full of smiles and tears.生命是充滿歡笑和淚水的。
4.He knew no such word as failure.他不知道有失敗這樣的字眼。
5.He knew if he had had little more patience hewould have succeeded earlier.
他知道如果他再耐心一點(diǎn)，他早就成功了。
6.He was delighted that it helped him realize onerequires more patience in any task being accomplished.
他很高興，這幫助他認(rèn)識(shí)到一個(gè)人在完成任何任務(wù)時(shí)都需要更多的耐心。
7.As long as you have a dream，just go for it and never give it up easily.Your dream might not come truein one or two days but it will someday.
只要你有夢(mèng)想，就去追求，不要輕易放棄。你的夢(mèng)想可能不會(huì)在一兩天內(nèi)實(shí)現(xiàn)，但總有一天會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)的。
四、人生哲理
1.It is never too late to learn.活到老，學(xué)到老。
2.Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。
3.From small beginnings come great things.偉大始于渺小。
4.Never judge people by their appearance.永遠(yuǎn)不要以貌取人。
5.Great things are done by series of small thingsbrought together.?每件大事都是由一系列小事組成的。
6.We should enjoy every moment and never escapechallenges.我們應(yīng)該享受每一刻，永遠(yuǎn)不要逃避挑戰(zhàn)。
7.You re lucky enough to be different，never change.你很幸運(yùn)能和別人不一樣，不要改變。
8. Each individual has the right to accept morechallenges and make more attempts.
每個(gè)人都有權(quán)利接受更多的挑戰(zhàn)，做出更多的嘗試。
9.Determination and optimism are what it takes toconquer your fear and accomplish Your goal.
決心和樂觀是征服你的恐懼和實(shí)現(xiàn)你的目標(biāo)所需要的。
10.Don’t take people’s concern for granted.Nomatter how much they love you,people get tired eventually.
不要把別人的關(guān)心當(dāng)成理所當(dāng)然。不管他們有多愛你，最終也會(huì)有疲憊的一天。
