篇一

第一段

1.work out 替換 physical exercise

2.第一句話點(diǎn)題；第二句話提出看法(即和題目是一樣的，非常重要，重要在哪，作用是什么。第二段就寫這些內(nèi)容。)

第二段

3.第二段，六句話，三個(gè)論點(diǎn)＋三個(gè)論據(jù)

4.have a great networking 有一個(gè)良好的人脈

想不到"networking人脈"這個(gè)單詞可以用"make quality friends 交有質(zhì)量的朋友 "

quality n./adj. (此處為adj.)

networking 人脈

5.doing sports 替換 physical exercise

6.vigor 活力

7.nothing but a choice 不過是一種選擇

第三段＋全文

9.最后一段，提出觀點(diǎn)，提出希望

總結(jié)

With the advancement of education, physical exercise is of extremely importance in achieving success at college. It is of great necessity for us college student to work out regularly. The following reasons can account for my opinion.

First and foremost,there is no doubt that physical exercise can help us maintain health both mentally and physically. Based on big data, most successful student elites have admitted that they work out at least once a week. Furthermore, no one can deny that working out can help us have a great networking(make quality friends).Where there is sport,there is communication. Last but not least, I firmly believe that doing sports can add vigor to our lives. Although we are not professional athletes, a healthy life style is nothing but a choice.

In a word, physical exercise plays an important role in college life. If we spare no efforts to be healthy via exercising,the future of our study and careers will be both promising and rosy.

隨著教育的進(jìn)步，體育鍛煉對(duì)于在大學(xué)取得成功是極其重要的。對(duì)于我們大學(xué)生來說，定期鍛煉是非常必要的。以下原因可以解釋我的觀點(diǎn)。

首先，毫無疑問，體育鍛煉可以幫助我們保持身心健康。根據(jù)大數(shù)據(jù)顯示，大多數(shù)成功的學(xué)生精英都承認(rèn)他們每周至少鍛煉一次。此外，沒有人可以否認(rèn)，鍛煉可以幫助我們有一個(gè)良好的人脈(結(jié)交高質(zhì)量的朋友)。哪里有運(yùn)動(dòng)，哪里就有交流。最后但并非最不重要的，我堅(jiān)信做運(yùn)動(dòng)可以為我們的生活增添活力。雖然我們不是職業(yè)運(yùn)動(dòng)員，但健康的生活方式不過是一種選擇。

總之，體育鍛煉在大學(xué)生活中扮演著重要的角色。如果我們不遺余力地通過鍛煉來保持健康，我們的學(xué)習(xí)和職業(yè)的未來將會(huì)變得既有前途又有希望。