task 1 /task 2 same important

提分

use reference phrase to introduce the body paragraphs

reference phrase

in terms of 依據(jù)

regarding 參見

regarding to X F/W

eg:

in terms of the figure for men

regarding the figure for woman

1.use the reference as the subject

eg: The figure for men

2.just use the time periods or relationships between them

in 2010........ ,11 years later........

3. more than one chart

just divide by chart

in terms of the bar graph

regarding the line chart

you are the guide ,and need clearer the path for 考官，the better your coherence and cohesion score