1.?????with the rapid development of （education，society，technology，culture）???隨著什么的快速發(fā)展，it is of great necessity for _sb.__ to_ sth.__;(對于什么來說去做什么事是很重要的)

2.?????過渡句：The following solution can account for this phenomenon/issue.(以下解決方案可以表面這一現(xiàn)象、問題)

第二段

1.?????First and foremost(首先且最重要的),there?is no doubt that（毫無疑問的是） ____論點___.

2.?????論據(jù)：????Based on a most recent survey(基于一項最近的調(diào)查)，it is revealed that(據(jù)調(diào)查現(xiàn)實)a majority of successful social elites admit that prefer (大部分社會精英都承認他們都喜歡)___doing sth._

3.?????論點2：Furthermore (進一步),it is obvious that it is beneficial for__to ___(很明顯的是做什么事是對某人有好處的)

4.?????論據(jù)2：萬能諺語（有志者事竟成）

Where there is a will, there is a way.

5.?????論點3：Last but not least,no one can deny that?(最后并且重要的是沒人可以否認)，it is high time that (是時候做什么了)————

6.?????論據(jù)：on in this way ,can we _____(只有這樣我們才可以)

第三段

1.?????重申觀點

In ?a word,it is clear that we ______(總之，我們應(yīng)該)

If we try our utmost to _____,the future of our life will be both promising and rosy.(如果我們盡我們最大努力去……,那么我們生活的為了充滿前途和光明)