升華寫法

1.兒子，女兒態(tài)度轉變

• 【萬能】It was at that moment that my son realized the meaning of sharing.
• Now, my son is no longer the one he used to be.Every time he is willing to share things with me, I was overwhelmed with joy for his change.

2.傳遞善意（做公益）(pay the kindness forward)

• 【萬能】Only when we pay the kindness forward can our world become a more harmonious one.
• From then on, I have been making every endeavor(努力) to offer a helping hand to those in need, paying the kindness forward.
• The sight of the children's satisfied looks fueled my determination to continue my voluntary work for them.

3.善有善報

• It finally dawned(開始清楚) on me that kindness will be definitely repaid with kindness.
• 【諺語】A kind act will be well rewarded. /No good deed ever goes unrewarded.

4.堅持不懈、夢想

• Only with determination and perseverance can we fulfill our dream.
• From that day on, I bear in mind that perseverance can help us conquer any difficulty in the way.
• Perseverance is what is takes to accomplish your goal.

5.一個物品所帶來的意義

• This cup that my mom gave me was not only a Christmas gift, but also served as a lesson of/that ...
• I still keep that cup, as it reminds me of the unforgettable day and the meaning of ...

6.同學關系

• 嘲笑同學后來覺得自己不對
• Those who had laughed at Tom eventually realized that everyone should be treated equally.
• 同學間比賽分組出現(xiàn)隔閡（23GD二模）
• I finally knew that we achieved something more significant than the prize — a lifelong friendship and the spirit of cooperation.
• Though we didn't win the prize, we were still overwhelmed with delight because we knew friendship is of greater importance than the victory itself.