題目(屬于觀點選擇型)

第一段

①"allocating the same…"從題目搬下來即可

②第一段：背景→做出選擇→過渡句“一些原因可以解釋我的偏好?！?/p>

第二段

①注意??It is obvious that…(不加逗號)

②while/ even though/ though 盡管

③be essential for 對……成功很重要

④community and belonging

集體感和歸屬感

第三段

全文

Nowadays students have different options upon funds in university.(闡述問題，背景) Some think that allocating the same amount of money to sport as library is beneficial, while others think a higher allocation of funds to libraries is a better choice.(列舉選擇)Personally, I prefer the former. The following reasons can account for my preference.

First and foremost, there is no doubt that regular exercise can help students manage stress, boost their energy levels, and improve their overall well-being. According to experts, most of young people have admitted that they've spent 60% spare time in doing sports. Furthermore, it is obvious that sports activities provide students with valuable opportunities to develop important life skills such as leadership, teamwork, and communication.Where there is sport, there are opportunities for development. Last but not least, no one can deny that equal funding for sports and libraries can promote a balanced academic and social environment in universities. While libraries are essential for academic success, sports activities provide students with a sense of community and belonging.

In a word, the whole school should pay close attention to sports activities on campus. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.

現(xiàn)在學生在大學的資金有不同的選擇。一些人認為把同樣多的錢分配給體育和圖書館是有益的，而另一些人認為把更多的資金分配給圖書館是更好的選擇。就我個人而言，我更喜歡前者。以下原因可以解釋我的偏好。

首先，毫無疑問，定期鍛煉可以幫助學生管理壓力，提高他們的能量水平(→即“讓他們更有活力一點”)，以及提高他們的整體健康水平。據(jù)專家稱，大多數(shù)年輕人承認他們把60%的業(yè)余時間花在了運動上。此外，很明顯，體育活動為學生提供了寶貴的機會來發(fā)展重要的生活技能，如領導能力、團隊合作能力和溝通能力。哪里有體育，哪里就有發(fā)展的機會。最后但并非最不重要的是，沒有人能否認，對體育和圖書館的平等資助可以促進大學的學術和社會環(huán)境的平衡。雖然圖書館對學業(yè)成功至關重要，但體育活動能給學生提供集體感和歸屬感。

總之，整個學校都應該密切關注校園體育活動。只有這樣，我們才能有一個光明和充滿希望的未來