diary 2023.9.4
a few days ago,typhoon came to our city,the local coverage report that a car was overwhelm by a tree on running in shenzhen,presumably someone in this car has deathed,I remenber acute typhoon has happend in 2017 that the best acute typhoon in past 50 years,Zhuhai is serious city by typhoon destory.most trees beside road was down,and many cars were crushed by big trees,most windows were brokoned by typhoon.
after GPT correction
"A few days ago, typhoon (A typhoon) came to our city. (Add a comma after "city") The local coverage report that (change "coverage report that" to "news reported that") a car was overwhelm (overwhelmed) by a tree on running in (while driving in) Shenzhen. Presumably someone in this car has deathed (Presumably, someone in this car died). I remenber (remember) acute typhoon has happend (that an intense typhoon happened) in 2017 that the best acute typhoon in past 50 years (which was the most severe typhoon in the past 50 years). Zhuhai is serious city by typhoon destory (Zhuhai was severely affected by typhoon destruction). most trees beside road was down (most trees along the road were knocked down), and many cars were crushed by big trees. most windows were brokoned by typhoon (most windows were broken by the typhoon)."