才讀了2章，怎么感覺(jué)卷四要崩呢? 前三卷都是延時(shí)間線寫(xiě)得很流暢。卷四序章介紹學(xué)城只是埋了個(gè)伏筆，跟卷三的序章寫(xiě)龍石島完全沒(méi)法比。第1章竟然把時(shí)間線拉回科倫·葛雷喬伊剛死，而且濕發(fā)的一通裝神弄鬼寫(xiě)得也不如紅袍女好。有種很不好的感覺(jué)：卷四就是拼湊出來(lái)的。馬丁當(dāng)時(shí)就沒(méi)完全想好卷四怎么寫(xiě)，但是必須交稿了。

四兄弟：balon/euron- crow's eye/victarion- iron fleet/aeron dmphair

every word was bought with pain, but that was the way of the world; a man must fight to live.

women were made to fight their battles in the birthing bed.