七七 | 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)擴(kuò)句法

We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.

我們挨著坐了下來(lái)，但DAVID不看我。

第一句：就地取材，文字接龍

• 接：他 低下 頭。
• He lowered / dropped / hung / ducked his head.

• 接：他低下頭，然后盯著他的鞋子看。
• He ducked his head and stared at his own shoes.

• 接：他低下頭，然后搓手手。
• He lowered his head and rubbed his hands.

• 接：他低下頭，然后開(kāi)始哭。
• He lowered his head and began to sob.

• 接：他低下頭，然后忍不住哭了起來(lái)。
• He lowered his head and couldn't help sobbing.

• 接：他低下頭=他的腦袋垂下來(lái)
• His head hung down.
• His head was bowed.
• His head drooped.

• 接：他低下頭=他不想被我看到=他有意躲避我
• His eyes avoided mine.

• 接：【情緒出現(xiàn) / 浮現(xiàn)某人臉上】
• Sadness flashed across his face.
• A look of sadne crossed his face.

• 接：（DAVID不看我）很明顯，他試圖逃避我的眼神/他在猶豫是否要退出比賽
• lt was clear / obvious / apparent that he tried to avoid eye contact with me.
• lt was obvious that he was still hesitant whether he should quit now.

• 接：【我和DAVID挨著坐，他不看我】只能是我來(lái)打破沉默
• lt was l who broke the silence first. "David, I think it's not reasonable to quit right now”

• 表方位的介詞短語(yǔ)或副詞放句首
• ln front of me was his drooping head.

副詞/介詞短語(yǔ)/非謂語(yǔ)/形容詞作狀語(yǔ)

「動(dòng)作」推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展，讓故事有始有終、有邏輯

「情盛」傳遞文章主旨，讓故事傳遞價(jià)值、有意義

where / when / why / how / 無(wú)敵的with

• In front of me was his drooping head.
• He ducked his head to avoid eye contact with me.
• He lowered his head in low spirits.
• Depressed and helpless, David lowered his head.
• David lowered his head, depressed and helpless.

WITH＋非主句主語(yǔ)＋動(dòng)作（非謂語(yǔ)）

• David lowered his head with his eyes fixed on the floor.
• With his head buried, l could tell that he was sad / frustrated.
• With head down and shoulders trembling, trying hard to hide his disappointment.

• He just ducked his head and stared at his own shoes.
• His eyes deliberately avoided mine.