讀后續(xù)寫專題之動物類
救助小鳥
"Why not do a search on the Internet?”suggested Jack.We acted quickly and surfed the Internet to figure out the relevant information about the bird,such as its species and habits. Following the given advice,we put some cotton at the bottom of the box to keep it warm and placed it near the fireplace.In order to recover its energy,we gave it some food and water.The bird looked a bit more comfortable?and soon it fell asleep.Having ensured the bird was in good condition,we felt relieved.
The next day,we were glad to see the bird was well enough.It was singing and bouncing around in the rescue box.Obviously,it had regained its energy!Realizing it was fully ready for freedom,we took the box outside,placed the bird in my palm and petted it softly with mixed feelings.I held the bird up and let it go.The bird was circling above us as if to express gratitude. Jack and I looked at each other with a broad smile,feeling that we were qualified volunteer?wildlife rescuers now.
救魚
參考范文1
She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep. She tiptoed out, quietly lifted a large pot of water and ran to the opening of the tunnel.Inside was complete darkness! Scared but determined,she raced in,knelt down by the hole,and put her hand into it.The trout lashed and?they were both mad with fright.Still she managed to shove him into the pot?and raced out of the?tunnel and down the steep paths.All the way his tail was lashing against the pot.Finally,she?reached the river bank.(85words)
Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.For the first seconds the somewhat dizzy creature was still visible in the water.Then all she saw was the faint light of the moon in the?silent-flowing river.?In relief, she trotted back home,dropped down the pot,and flew through the?air?like a bird into?bed. Soon she fell asleep, satisfied and peaceful.The next morning Stephen?rushed to her, shouting that “he”was gone and asking“where"and “how”.Lifting her nose in?the air, she proudly laughed,"A fairy,I suppose?”(87 words)
參考范文 2
She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep. Unlike his indifference,the image of the trout stuck in her heart.It was as though an invisible hand had twisted her intestines and held them tight. So she sprang from her bed,groping?for a pot,and crept out of the house.?With the half-filled container,Julia rushed towards the tunnel,so swiftly that all she could see or feel was the wind whistling past her ears.Huffing and puffing,Julia bent down,gently cupped the poor creature into the pot,and belted to the river at full speed.
Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.A chink of soft moonlight hit the gurgling water,illuminating the figure of the fish. He remained for a while,as if bidding his rescuer farewell. She watched?him?vanish from sight,as relief and happiness surged through her. On her way back,Julia realized if she had gone with the flow and left everything up to the fairy,the trout couldn't have had the luxury of survival.A happy ending must be earned by the choices and?efforts we make. So never stint in offering aid to help?those in need.
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