翰思老師分享出國(guó)留學(xué)高分tips——關(guān)于essay寫作中Summary and respond完成方法，希望可以幫到同學(xué)們。

很多留學(xué)生在essay寫作中對(duì)于Summary and respond完成度不高，總體得分也就不會(huì)高。

The basic structure of this essay:

·Paragraph1:Summary，Including the title,author’s name,date of the original essay.

注意：不要出現(xiàn)細(xì)節(jié)、自己的觀點(diǎn)以及其他的引用。

·Paragraph2:Body paragraph1包括3個(gè)部分：過(guò)渡句，3個(gè)thesis statements

一、過(guò)渡句用來(lái)銜接上文的summary，引出下面的respond。大多是以一句話概括現(xiàn)狀或問(wèn)題。 二、3個(gè)thesis不能僅僅是自己闡釋3個(gè)自己的觀點(diǎn)，而要表達(dá)出對(duì)文中作者3個(gè)具體觀念的支持、反對(duì)或一部分支持一部分反對(duì)（點(diǎn)名作者姓名）。

·Paragraph3:Body paragraph2：Point2

·Paragraph4:Body paragraph3：Point3

當(dāng)同學(xué)們?cè)趯懨恳粋€(gè)point的時(shí)候，在表明自身觀點(diǎn)后引用文獻(xiàn)（quote or paraphrase）去驗(yàn)證自身觀點(diǎn)的正確性(provide evidence and supports)，通常開頭topic sentence結(jié)尾對(duì)整段的argument有個(gè)總結(jié)，使每一段body更為完整。

·Paragraph5:Conclusion。主要包括重申自己的觀點(diǎn)加原文作者的觀點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)升華你選擇的文章的主旨，但不要加入新的觀點(diǎn)。

以下是一位同學(xué)的體悟：

Hello everyone,I am Katherine,I will say something about my ENG class.
My professor is Gina Roach,she is so organized that she taught many formats of writing,which can help me to summary and respond much easier than before.For instance,I remembered that in her first class she told us the way of writing summary.
First you should get some useful information to support your essay,such as the writer’s name,when the author began to write,and the structure of the passage.By the way,the structure of passage,I mean if you find a main idea from the whole passage,you also need to conclude the structure of it.For example,the passage defines something,explains something or something else.And then you will find some reasons which are expressed or supported by the writer.These reasons will become your example illustration that you should conclude them in your own sentences and write in your summary.Besides,don’t forget to add some conjunctions.They will make your essay look comfortable.
For response,maybe different teachers have different ways to teach.And you also have all kinds of ideas from passages.After all,response is that you can express your own points and show your feelings.I don’t want to say many skills about how to write it.However,I can give some parts from my professor which may help you.Response are divided into three parts.These are analytic response,evaluative response and interpretive response.They will play different rolls in the response,you need to learn and have your own points of these.All in all,though I am tired after ENG,I can learn a lot of?http://things.In?addition,I show my best respect to my ENG class.

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