六級寫作：看圖作文-公共圖書館數(shù)量的變化趨勢 （四級可做參考）

Directions: For this part, you should write an essay based on the bar chart given below. You should write no more than 210 words but no less than 150 words. Your essay should include:

??? I. The content of the graph

????II. Your opinions

背景：讀書作為一種社會風(fēng)氣正在被推廣

目的：讓學(xué)生學(xué)會描述圖表，并對圖表背后的動機(jī)成因進(jìn)行列舉，學(xué)會引用讀書、教育相關(guān)格言以及與國家政策詞匯相符，達(dá)到思維和寫作融為一體，并緊隨時事做出個人見解，完成閉環(huán)完整的協(xié)作體系。繼續(xù)使用PRICE寫作模式，讓每個環(huán)節(jié)清晰有理。

相關(guān)預(yù)測：人均圖書消費(fèi)，人均圖書保有量，圖書館注冊會員數(shù)量變化曲線。這幾個主要方向都指向同一個話題：讀書，進(jìn)步，社會。

涉及到一個趨向變化的時候，六級寫作不同于雅思寫作的地方在于，它的趨向往往和國家政策相符，描述的是正向的方向，如果能點(diǎn)題到人民國家發(fā)展的角度，就是一個正確的角度。

PRICE的思維導(dǎo)圖，可以先從圖片上把五個因素隔開，逐步分析。

參考作文：（建議比要求的字?jǐn)?shù)適度增量，以防詞窮）

? ? ? The bar chart above exhibited that over the past years public libraries in China have kept a constant rise since 2012, with over 100 new libraries erected. The total number arrived at 3,189 in 2019.

? ? ? 上圖展示了從2012年起的過去幾年間，中國公共圖書館的數(shù)量一直保持增長，幾年間新建了100多所，到了2019年總數(shù)已經(jīng)到3189所。

?????? I reckon it inspiring with various driving forces. Above all, it is an embodiment of our country’s growing emphasis on and investment in knowledge and education, also the growing importance that Chinese people are attaching to learning. Thirdly it is our increasing pursuits for food for thought（精神食糧） in the background of the fulfillment of our material demands. （物質(zhì)需求） ?

? ? ? ?我相信這十分令人振奮，背后也有多種原因。首先，是我國政府對知識與教育愈發(fā)重視和增加投資的體現(xiàn)；其次，也是中國人對學(xué)習(xí)的越發(fā)重視。其三是因?yàn)槲覀兊奈镔|(zhì)需求已經(jīng)可以溫飽，我們的追求上升到了精神食糧。

?????? For achieving our centennial missions, education is the fundamental ground. The great literati Maxim Gorky once said “Books are the ladders for human progress,” also books is an invaluable ethical and cultural wealth（精神財富） created for the whole human society. As one instrumental infrastructure（重要設(shè)施）of cultural wealth, public libraries are rudimentary and essential（根本且重要） social resources providing vital significance to the advancement of our society and nation. Making reading emerge into a mainstream（蔚然成風(fēng)） all over the society is also a key step forwarding the quality of our population. But in the face of a country with over 1.4 billion, just a bit more than 3,000 libraries for free nationwide is far from even a faction（一個零頭）. Central governments and local authorities still have a far and long way to go shouldering the lofty duty（重任） to ensure more accessibility to the ocean of knowledge. Among other things, the famous Chinese writer Bing Xin once summarized it as this: “Reading is good, enjoy reading and read good books.” In other words, not only is it important to ensure the quantity of venues（場所） and collections of books but also, in particular, their quality.

? ? ? ?百年大計，教育為本。大文學(xué)家高爾基曾經(jīng)說“書籍是人類進(jìn)步的階梯，”書籍也是為全人類創(chuàng)造的無價的精神財富。?作為社會的重要的精神文化設(shè)施，公共圖書館是重要的社會資源，對我們國家社會的進(jìn)步有著至關(guān)重要的意義。讓讀書在全社會蔚然成風(fēng)也是提高我國人口素質(zhì)的關(guān)鍵一步。但是面對著我國14億的人口總數(shù)，只有3000多所圖書館顯然連個零頭都不到。中央和地方政府仍然任重道遠(yuǎn)身負(fù)重任，確保百姓有更多的機(jī)會徜徉知識的海洋。除此之外，著名作家冰心曾經(jīng)總結(jié)一句話如下：“讀書好、好讀書、讀好書。”換句話說，不但要保證有足夠多的圖書館，而且，尤其重要的是，要保證圖書的質(zhì)量。

?????? In a nutshell, reading as a habit shall be fully invigorated and more financial aid（財政支持）shall be disbursed（分撥，財政撥款） into creating more places for the mass to share, access and delve into（探索 = probe into） the world of books of high-quality but with less efforts. We all are playing a role in making reading easier-accessible to the mass public.

? ? ? ?簡而言之（in a nutshell是雅思常見寫作總結(jié)詞匯），讀書作為一種習(xí)慣要被大力鼓勵下去，并且政府應(yīng)當(dāng)撥出更多的財政支持更多圖書館的建設(shè)工作，讓百姓有更多機(jī)會去分享、接觸和探索優(yōu)質(zhì)的書籍世界，但是花費(fèi)的精力更少。我們每個人都在為讓百姓更容易地接觸到閱讀的樂趣上，出著自己一份力。（play a role in?可以間接等同于 make an effort in）

本文部分寫作詞匯積累

1- 蔚然成風(fēng)：emerge into a mainstream

2- 精神食糧：food for thought（地道表達(dá)）

3- 無價之寶：invaluable assets

??*綠水青山就是金山銀山：Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.

4- 物質(zhì)財富：material wealth

5- 精神財富：cultural and ethical wealth（spiritual尚存爭議，暫且避免使用這個詞）

? *物質(zhì)與精神財富簡寫就是material and cultural wealth （需求就換成demands或者needs）

一些讀書與教育的格言和寫作句子：

7- 高爾基 – 書籍是人類進(jìn)步的階梯 Maxim Gorky – Books are the ladders for human progress

8- 百年大計，教育為本 – Education is the solid foundation for achieving our great centennial missions

9- 書中自有黃金屋，書中自有顏如玉 – A book holds great wealth inside.

10- 書是這世界上最高級的營養(yǎng)品 – Books are the top-notch series nourishment in this world

11- 數(shù)量和質(zhì)量：quantity and quality

12- 一個零頭：a faction

13- 有機(jī)會接觸到：have access to sth.

14- 讓人接觸得到：be accessible to sb.