本文選擇的這篇范文是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的simon推薦13個句子，4段的范文。我附上我粗糙寫的每段大致內(nèi)容和每個句子的作用，大家可以先看這篇范文，再看看能不能根據(jù)我列出來的寫一篇和他差不多的作文。學(xué)習(xí)范文主要有四點(diǎn)：作文布局、觀點(diǎn)、詞匯、句子結(jié)構(gòu)。

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

第一段（2句）：介紹+觀點(diǎn) 離開學(xué)校以后，青少年面臨著找工作或者繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)的艱難選擇。（狀語從句和 指代）（介紹）?

When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education.?

雖然離開學(xué)校后直接直接找工作有一些好處，我認(rèn)為還是去學(xué)校更好。（讓步 狀語從句）（觀點(diǎn)）?

while there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.?

第二段（5句）：主旨句+兩個觀點(diǎn)及其解釋?

離開學(xué)校后馬上工作的選擇之所以吸引人有幾個原因（The option to）(主旨 句)?

The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons.?

許多年輕人想要盡早掙錢?這樣，他們能更獨(dú)立，并且能負(fù)擔(dān)自己的房子或者 開始一個家庭(觀點(diǎn)一+解釋)?

Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible.In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family.?

關(guān)于他們的事業(yè)，決定找工作的而不是繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)的年輕人也許能成長更快(In terms of/ rather than) ? 他們有機(jī)會獲得真實(shí)的經(jīng)歷并且學(xué)習(xí)到和他們選擇的 職業(yè)相關(guān)的實(shí)用技巧? 這也許會導(dǎo)致升職和一個成功的事業(yè)(觀點(diǎn)二+解釋+進(jìn) 一步解釋)

?In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly.They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.?

第三段（5句）：主旨句+兩個理由和解釋?

然而，我認(rèn)為學(xué)生繼續(xù)他們的學(xué)業(yè)更有利（it is adj to do sth）（主旨句）?

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.?

首先，許多職業(yè)都需要資格證書?比如，沒有相應(yīng)的證書是不可能成為醫(yī)生、 老師或者律師的? 于是，大學(xué)畢業(yè)生能獲得更多的工作機(jī)會，并且他們大概率 會比擁有更少資質(zhì)的人獲得更多的薪水。（觀點(diǎn)一+舉例+解釋）?

Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, 1 it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than whose with fewer qualifications.?

第二，求職市場的競爭十分激烈，有時候甚至幾百個人應(yīng)聘一個公司的的一個 崗位?沒有大學(xué)資質(zhì)的年輕人將不能競爭。（觀點(diǎn)二現(xiàn)象+解釋）?

Secondely, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.

?第四段：總結(jié) 基于以上原因，對我來說學(xué)生如果繼續(xù)他們的學(xué)業(yè)將會在事業(yè)上更為成功。?

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.