長難句怎么寫？

重點部分筆記

環(huán)境 動作 情感

時間/地點/過渡，sb., with sth. in one's hand, doing B, did A,doing C,feeling/looking…

動作

Sb.did A,did B and did c. 流暢三連

Sb.did A, doing B and doing C.

Doing B and C, sb. did A. 同時發(fā)生

(先/因)Having done A, sb. did B and C(后/果).

Sb did A and B, doing C(果).

After/Before doing A, sb. did B to do C(目的).

右先有后，有因有果

加情感

excited/thrilled(興奮的) joyful/overjoyed(快樂的，欣喜若狂的)

amazed(驚訝的 ) delighted(高興的) satisfied (滿足的)

sacred(害怕的) worried(擔(dān)心的) ashamed(羞愧的) nervous(緊張的)depressed(沮喪的)

Depressed and helpless,the princess cried out。原因/伴隨

He finally found his way into the forest, exhausted but excited.結(jié)果

He brought back the princess, feeling proud and excited.伴隨

加個buff/工具

with sth. in one's hand

with sth. on one's head

with the help of sb.

with a smile on his/her face

He climbed over the hill with a sword in his hand.

He, with the help of an elf(精靈), saved the princess.

加過渡

(情緒)To one's surprise/delight/relief,…

Hopefully,/Obviously,/Of course,…

To our surprise, he brought back the princess.

表“時間、用時”

馬上：in no time,immediately

那一刻： at that moment/time when/ while/a

早/中/晚：early in the morning, in the late afternoon, the next/following morning

表“先后”

然后：(and) then, after that

不久：after a while, soon afterwards, shortly after, before long

最終：at last, in the end, finally, eventually

狀語串燒

只要是狀語，在三個位置上，都符合語法要求。如：

①With a sword in his hand, the soldier entered the forest.

② The soldier, with a sword in his hand, entered the forest.

③ The soldier entered the forest with a sword in his hand.

筆記只整理了重點部分?？赡苡胁蝗陀姓`的地方，歡迎大家指正。??