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七七 | 動(dòng)作描寫思路和頭部動(dòng)作

1??動(dòng)作一拆三
男孩跳入湖中:
- 詞窮版:The boy jumped into the lake.
- 三連版:The boy rushed to the lake, took off his clothes and jumped into the water.
Mac上了車:
- 詞窮版:Mac got in the car.
- 三連版:Mac jumped off the bicycle, dashed into the car and closed the door.
我拿起書讀:
- 詞窮版:I took a book to read.
- 三連版:l immediately ran into my bedroom, found a chair to sit down and grabbed a book to read, with my hands slightly shaking.
2??精準(zhǔn)的動(dòng)詞
頭部動(dòng)作
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強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作(從短到長(zhǎng))
glance:掃視
- He glanced at his watch.:他看了一下手表。
watch:觀看、注視
- She watched the kids playing in the yard.:她看著孩子們?cè)谠鹤永锿妗?/li>
gaze:凝視
- She gazed at him in amazement.:她驚異地注視著他。
stare:盯著看
- l stared blankly at the paper in front of me.:我茫然地看著面前這張紙。
peer:費(fèi)力地看、盯著
- He peered closely at the photograph.:他聚精會(huì)神地端詳著相片。
look into one's eyes:直視某人
- I looked into his eyes and said,:“...我看著他的眼睛,說(shuō)到...
強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作(帶有情感)
怒視:glare
- The old woman glared at him.:那個(gè)老婦人怒視著他。
眨眼:blink
- When I told him the news he didn't even blink.:我把那個(gè)消息告訴他時(shí),他眼都沒眨一下。(否定形式表示“毫不意外”)
強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)果
瞥見:glimpse
- She glimpsed a group of people standing on the bank of a river.:她瞥見一群人站在河岸上。
發(fā)現(xiàn),注意到:find
notice
- He noticed him standing silently over by the window.:他注意到他默默地站在窗旁。
spot
- l finally spotted my friend in the crowd.:我終于在人群中看見了我的朋友。
discover
- On arriving home I discovered they had gone.:我一到家就發(fā)現(xiàn)他們已經(jīng)離開了。
認(rèn)出:recognize
- l recognized him as soon as he came in the room.:他一進(jìn)屋我就認(rèn)出了他。
動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)名詞,短句變長(zhǎng)句
At the sight of the police officers, they ran off.:一看見那些警官,他們便逃跑了。
She caught sight of a car in the distance.:她瞥見遠(yuǎn)處有一輛車。
We lost sight of him in the crowd.:我們?cè)谌巳豪?span id="s0sssss00s" class="ql-color-#ee230d">看不見他了。
He caught a glimpse of her in the crowd.:他一眼瞥見她在人群里。
One morning, I cast a glance at the headlines of the newspaper.:一天早上,我瞥了一眼報(bào)紙上的大字標(biāo)題。
She threw me a quick, frightened glance.:她迅速而驚恐地看了我一眼。
He cast her an admiring glance.:他向她投去欽佩的且光。
哭
sob:抽噎;啜泣
- She began to sob again, burying her face in the pillow.:她又開始抽噎,把臉埋在枕頭里。
weep:哭泣,流淚
- She started to weep uncontrollably.:她不由自主地哭了起來(lái)。
《淚水的一生》
抑制淚水:sb. hold back one's tears
淚水打轉(zhuǎn):tears roll in one's eyes
眼眶濕潤(rùn):eyes are wet
視線模糊:tears blur one's vision
熱淚盈眶:tears well up
盈滿淚水:eyes are flooded with tears
快要哭了:sb. be close to tears
突然爆哭:sb. burst into tears / burst out crying
眼淚流下:tears run / stream / roll down one's cheeks
悲痛欲絕:sb. weep one's eyes out / cry one's heart out
擦去淚水:sb. wipe the tears from one's eyes
giggle:咯咯笑
- The girls giggled at the joke.:女孩子們讓這笑話逗得咯咯笑。
chuckle:輕聲地笑
- The banker chuckled and said, "Of course not.":銀行家輕聲笑了,說(shuō)道,“當(dāng)然不。”
grin:露齒笑;咧嘴笑
- They grinned with delight when they heard our news.:他們得知我們的消息時(shí)高興得直咧著嘴笑。
- He was grinning from ear to ear.:他笑得合不攏嘴。
beam:笑容滿面;眉開眼笑
- He beamed at the journalists.:他笑容滿面地面對(duì)記者。
- The children's faces beamed with happy smiles.:孩子們的臉上充溢著幸福的笑容。
snicker:竊笑
smirk:得意地笑
sneer:冷笑
mock:嗤笑
擠出笑容:force a smile
- She forced a smile and told me not to worry about her.:她勉強(qiáng)地?cái)D出一絲笑容,告訴我不要擔(dān)心她。
掛著笑容:wear a big smile on one's face
- She wore a shining smile on her face.她臉上掛著燦爛的笑容。
滿臉笑容:be all smiles
- Tom was all smiles when he heard the news.聽到這消息,湯姆滿面笑容。
突然大笑:burst out laughing / burst into laughter
- She couldn't help bursting out laughing.:她忍不住大笑起來(lái)。
- Seeing the funny picture, the whole class burst into laughter.:看到這張有趣的照片,全班同學(xué)都突然大笑起來(lái)。
從入口到吃完
嘗:taste
- He tasted the liquid medicine first before she drank it.:在她喝藥之前,他先嘗了一下。
咬:bite / take a bite
- He took another bite of the apple.:他又咬了一口蘋果。
嚼:chew
- One girl was chewing gum.:一個(gè)女孩在嚼口香糖。
- Rosa chewed on her lip and stared at the floor.:羅莎咬著嘴唇,眼睛盯著地板。
啃:nibble / take a nibble
- We each took a nibble.:我們每人吃了一小口。
- We sat drinking wine and nibbling olives.:我們坐在那兒,喝著葡萄酒嚼著橄欖
大聲咀嚼:munch
- Luke munched the chicken sandwiches.:盧克大聲嚼著雞肉三明治。
吞:swallow
- Polly took a bite of the apple, chewed, and swallowed.:波莉咬了一口那個(gè)蘋果,嚼了嚼吞了下去。
狼吞虎咽
devour
- A medium-sized dog will devour at least one can of food plus biscuits per day.:一只中等大小的狗每天至少要干掉一罐食物外加餅干。
wolf down
- That boy seized the food and wolf down it.:那男孩子一把抓過食物,狼吞虎咽般地吃了下去。
bolt down
- I like to think back to high school, when I could bolt down three or four burgers and a pile of French fries.:我喜歡回想高中時(shí),那時(shí)我可以一氣吞下三四個(gè)漢堡和一大堆炸薯?xiàng)l。
cram down
- l managed to cram down a few mouthfuls of food.:我好歹狼吞虎咽地吃了幾口東西。
抬頭:raise
- He didn't even raise his head when I drove by.:我開車過去,他連頭都沒有抬。
點(diǎn)頭:nod
- "Are you okay?" I asked. She nodded and smiled.:“你還好吧?”我問道。她點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭笑了。
搖頭:shake
- She shook her head in disbelief.:她不相信地?fù)u搖頭。
撓頭:scratch
- He scratched his head and looked thoughtful.:他撓著頭顯出一副深思的樣子。
轉(zhuǎn)頭:turn
- Meer folded his arms over his chest and turned his head away.:米爾把雙臂交疊在胸前,扭開頭去。
傾斜:tilt
- His wife tilted his head to the side and inspected the wound.:他的妻子把他的頭側(cè)向一邊,然后檢查傷口。
各種低頭
lower
- He was so nervous that he lowered his head and loosened his tie.:他很緊張,以至于他低下頭把領(lǐng)結(jié)解開了。
drop
- Embarrassed, the little boy dropped his head.:小男孩困窘地低下了頭。
duck
- Hearing the footsteps, he ducked his head in the grass.:一聽到腳步聲,他馬上低下頭,藏在草叢中。
hang
- The boy hung (down) his head in shame when he was caught cheating.:這個(gè)男孩作弊被抓獲時(shí)羞愧地抵下了頭。