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A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I won second place. I had done better than I thought was possible, and I had fun doing it. The best part was that, although my teacher had given me a lot of suggestions, he didn't tell me how to do it. He knew I'd figure it out eventually. That's what I like about being an author. You can create anything you want. You can have the characters do things you know they'd never do.
I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. I wanted to thank him for having faith in me. I was only eleven, but I thought he must have believed in me. He looked up when I entered. I thought he was going to tell me how much he appreciated my effort, so I started to say the same thing. Then, without warning, he jumped from his chair and lunged at me, wrapping me in a bear hug. I think he was so excited because he finally found someone who loved writing as much as he did.