The Most .Important Influence on Young Adults
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Directions: For this part, rou are allowed 30 minutes to write a[
composition on the topic The Most Important Infuence on Young Adults. You
should write about I20 words following the Chinese outline given below.
1.有些人認(rèn)為父母對(duì)年輕人的影響較大,也有些人認(rèn)為朋友對(duì)年輕人
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的影響較大;
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2.我的看法。
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The Most .Important Influence on Young Adults
It is universally accepted that people are under constant influence of those who play a signifi-
cant role in their life. Some hold that parents have a decisive effect on them. Others, in contrast,
maintain that friends, especially close ones, exert a more profound impact upon all walks of their
daily life.
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From my perspective, there are some truths in both arguments, and it is by no means a simple
task to rule which wins. At different stages of life we are influenced by different people. When we
are children, parents' influence is primary and decisive. It is our parents that cultivate our sense of
security and belonging as we grow up. When we reach adulthood, we are more likely to be influ-
enced by our peers and friends. It is friends who help us pursue our success in career and build up
our interpersonal relationship.