Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets very bad examples for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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觀點(diǎn)1.?glamorous/extravagant/luxuriouslifestyle→money-oriented mentality，?→not?accompany their loved ones,?

論證：material success→work overtime?工作話題

論證：stress-related illnesses, like anxiety, depression and insomnia.?

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觀點(diǎn)2.?think in a more superficial and shallow?way

slaves/victims of materialism and consumerism

論證：?sports car?like?Ferrari,?penthouse,?luxury handbag→otherwise, they would feel frustrated.

論證：?cosmetic surgeries,?shortcut to success→get fortune overnight

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When looking at those celebrities and new influencers online網(wǎng)紅, we can see that they are usually known for their?extravagant奢華的、奢靡的?and?glamorouslifestyle but not any achievements or contributions to the society. As these people are often deemed as role models for young generations, they may exert?more?negativeinfluence.?

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Frist of all, the luxurious life奢侈生活?those celebrities?are proud of?is actually?propagating傳播?the?money-oriented value金錢為導(dǎo)向的價值觀?throughout the society.?It is no rare to see?young people, especially?those living in megacities?all focus on pursuing?material success物質(zhì)成功?by?working?long hours on a daily?basis,?sacrificing?time to accompany their loved ones and even?ignoring?time to eat meals.?However, the result is not always?equivalent?to?their hard work.?So?overburdened with?all types of?workloads?are today’s youngsters?thatmany of them?are vulnerable to and suffering from stress-related illnesses與壓力相關(guān)的疾病,?like anxiety, depression and insomnia.

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Furthermore,?young people?growing up in a money-worship society拜金社會?are more likely to think in a?superficial粗淺?and shallow淺薄?way rather than?an?independent and critical mode.?People may assume that?only by owning sports cars跑車, luxury brands奢侈品牌and penthouses豪華公寓?can they really be happy and be considered?successful;?otherwise, they would feel?unconfident?and frustrated.?Young girls today believe?that?cosmetic surgeries整形手術(shù)?are the?shortcut捷徑?to?a more?successful and glamorous life.?All they think about is to earn a fortune overnight一夜暴富?instead of learning and developing step by step.?

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So from what has been analyzed above,?I am convinced?that?in most cases?celebrities?（only famous for their wealth）?exert adverse influence on young people and the whole society.?

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