passage11

就在那一刻 at that very moment

awkward 令人尷尬的; 使人難堪的

指示; 命令; 吩咐 instructing （教的不一樣表述!）

every last 全部

Although it's very simple=simple as it was

all the way 一直

1.作者遇到問題——尷尬

2.為什么會(huì)出現(xiàn)這種問題

3.遇到問題時(shí)作者有什么感受和心理活動(dòng)

To tell the truth，i made every last bit of effort to catch up with the teacher’s word，but still couldn’t understand what he was instructing at all.Then all the students were required to finish a piece of work on their own.Seeing xxx ，I felt really stressed because i had no idea where to start ，also afraid of others laughing at my weakness.

1.作者的問題解決了 —有人相助

2.怎么解決的 —叫人教你怎么做

3.解決問題后的感受和心理活動(dòng)—爽

4.文章結(jié)尾突出中心 —微笑

1.He seemed to understand my awkward situation，so he turned to me and carefully explained what i should do with fluent English.With his patient guidance，i managed to finish my first Chinese painting！Simple as it was，the teacher praised my work infront of the class.I did my best not to show pleasure，but joy danced all the way to my heart（感受），for（原因） I knew this would be a wonderful beginning of a new school life，just starting with that warm and friendly smile.（扣題）

passage12學(xué)寫心理活動(dòng)

文章內(nèi)容：第一段作者的女兒撿到了一條可愛的小狗

第二段：作者大量的心理活動(dòng)，不想把狗還回去（我沒看出來）

第三段：作者心理活動(dòng)：內(nèi)心不安 有人找狗 更加不安

第四段：掩飾 狗和家人關(guān)系融洽（反襯）良心煎熬 抉擇

寫作內(nèi)容：

接著寫心理活動(dòng) 寫自己內(nèi)心的想法?。。?！!打電話時(shí) 電話沒接通時(shí) 接通電話時(shí) 掛了電話以后 等那個(gè)女人到來的過程中 門鈴響了以后 打開門

【學(xué)習(xí)寫法太厲害了】

a girl was sitting under the tree人物狀態(tài)

she(who) was reading a book 人物動(dòng)作

①a girl (who) was reading a book,was reading under the tree

②sitting under the tree was a girl (who) was reading a book

描寫時(shí)間漫長it was only less than 30 minutes before the doorbell rang,but to me it seemed to last a century.