雅思大作文——

討論型第一段的三種寫(xiě)法

給到三個(gè)模板，對(duì)模板的認(rèn)知，基于：

1， 模板順暢了邏輯的走向

Templates facilitate our logic move/flow

2， 我們把學(xué)術(shù)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作當(dāng)成argumentative writing，于是在第一段先讓別人說(shuō)，也就是while others,,,,然后再我們自己說(shuō)，也就是，I believe …

We take academic writing as argumentative writing .In order to “you say”, you had better make “they say ” first ,that is why we use “While others think,,,I believe” this sentence pattern.

Some people think the range of technology available to individuals today increase the gap between the rich and the poor, while others think that it has the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

最常規(guī)的寫(xiě)法，simon作文和視頻里講的：

P1

1People have different views about whether the use of technology increases the gap between the rich and the poor.

2While some people think it dose , my opinion is the opposite :NO

Some people think that there are benefits to using artificial intelligence, while others are worried about the impact of AI

Discuss both views and give your own opinion

第一句寫(xiě)話題背景

P1

1.We are already in an AI society where everyone could not escape from it.

2.Though /while some people concern about the negative impact of it , I believe that AI offers more advantages .

折中式寫(xiě)法，我認(rèn)為雙方都起到了作用

The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing.

Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health.

Discuss…

Recent discussions of obesity have successfully raised people’s attention.

A controversial issue has been whether parents or fast food industry should be blamed for .

I contend that the both two contribute to the problem .

表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的動(dòng)詞除了用I say ,I think ,I believe ,還可以用

Advocate

Argue

Assert

Emphasize

Insist