大學(xué)四級(jí)范文30篇
范例一
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 現(xiàn)在大學(xué)校園里,遲到、早退、曠課是常見(jiàn)的現(xiàn)象
2. 保證學(xué)生的出勤率對(duì)大學(xué)教育的重要性
3. 作為一個(gè)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做
Attend Your Classes Regularly
Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.
In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.
Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it.
點(diǎn)評(píng):2008年元月三日,中山大學(xué)博士發(fā)帖稱遭導(dǎo)師虐待;2008年元月四日,中國(guó)政法大學(xué)爆“楊帆門(mén)”事件;近幾年,中小學(xué)老師或打?qū)W生或猥褻學(xué)生、體罰學(xué)生等各類(lèi)新聞不斷曝光,進(jìn)而引發(fā)了師生關(guān)系的大討論。本范例題為四級(jí)考試傳統(tǒng)的問(wèn)題解決型的寫(xiě)作,與校園生活密切相關(guān)。
范例二
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 學(xué)生給老師打分已經(jīng)普遍
2. 人們對(duì)其持不同態(tài)度
3. 我的看法
Students’ Rating of Their Teachers
Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness..
This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers’ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students’ rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers’ colleagues.
I think students’ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance. Instead of rating the teachers’ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, and to report on such things as a teacher’s ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students’ interest in the subject.
點(diǎn)評(píng):越來(lái)越多的高校采取讓學(xué)生給老師打分的形式來(lái)了解教學(xué)反饋,并以此作為促進(jìn)教學(xué)質(zhì)量的有效手段。對(duì)此做法,管理部門(mén)及教學(xué)雙方褒貶不一,看法迥異。本范例題為校園生活熱議話題,值得關(guān)注。
范例三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 宿舍生活有時(shí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)不和諧的情況;
2. 一個(gè)和諧宿舍生活的必要性;
3. 如何創(chuàng)造和諧的宿舍生活。
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.
As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.
There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends.
In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.
點(diǎn)評(píng):“和諧”成為我們當(dāng)今社會(huì)詞頻概率最高用詞,就社會(huì)而言,倡導(dǎo)建立和諧社會(huì);就家庭而言,提倡建設(shè)和諧家庭;就校園來(lái)講,則要建立和諧校園;和諧兩字似乎無(wú)所不在,大學(xué)生宿舍生活同樣需要和諧。本范例題與四級(jí)考試熱點(diǎn)密切相關(guān),又為典型的校園生活主題,值得關(guān)注。
范例四
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Brief Introduction to the University. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:
假設(shè)你是一名學(xué)生志愿者,要給來(lái)你們學(xué)校參觀的外國(guó)朋友介紹學(xué)校情況。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括學(xué)校歷史、規(guī)模、教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀以及未來(lái)目標(biāo)等。
A Brief Introduction to the University
Distinguished guests,
Welcome to our university. Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the school.
Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city’s earliest universities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students. In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life.
Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development. Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge. Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.
Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university. Thank you.
點(diǎn)評(píng):近幾年,隨著我國(guó)順利加入世貿(mào)組織以及經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化步伐的加快,許多國(guó)內(nèi)高校紛紛與國(guó)外大學(xué)合作辦學(xué),教育走向國(guó)際化成為人們關(guān)注的熱點(diǎn),也是大學(xué)生門(mén)比較關(guān)心的熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題。本范例題為熱議校園生活話題,與2004年旅游景點(diǎn)介紹2006年考查的名校校園開(kāi)放如出一轍。
范例五
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a friend who will come to your city to see you. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
假設(shè)你是李明, 你的一個(gè)朋友張偉準(zhǔn)備到你所在的城市來(lái)旅游,但你有事不能接待。寫(xiě)封信給他,解釋你不能接待的原因,并說(shuō)明你所做的安排。
A Letter to a Friend
Dear Zhang Wei,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation.
However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news. I’m planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit. All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference. More importantly, I’m lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference. I really can’t miss it.
I understand that it’ll be your first time to this city and I’m your only friend here. I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room. He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city. Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!
Yours,
Li Ming
點(diǎn)評(píng):本范例題與2001年6月考查的A Letter to a Schoolmate 類(lèi)似,所不同是寫(xiě)作提示有所不同,2001年6月作文題是寫(xiě)信對(duì)校友來(lái)度假表示歡迎并在信中提出建議和注意事項(xiàng),而本范例題是對(duì)朋友來(lái)訪不能接待,同時(shí)在信中說(shuō)明原因及具體安排,內(nèi)容不一,但話題相仿,寫(xiě)作思路相似,值得關(guān)注。
范例六
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)獨(dú)自生活
2. 另一些認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)與別人同住
3. 你的看法
Living alone or Living with Roommates
Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory. Opinions are divided over the matter.
Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others. They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.
But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own. With several students sharing the same room, each person’s experiences can be greatly enriched. They can learn a lot from talking to one another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.
As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent an?apartment outside the campus.
點(diǎn)評(píng):本文與校園生活密切相關(guān),也是近年來(lái)出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象,人們對(duì)此的看法各異,2003年后,四級(jí)作文考查加大了學(xué)校生活類(lèi)題目的考查,因?yàn)檫@類(lèi)題材不存在地域的差異,不同地域的同學(xué)都有話可說(shuō)。本范例題即為校園生活類(lèi)話題,與剛考完的四級(jí)作文話題類(lèi)似,符合命題者出題思路,值得引起重視。
范例七
Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones .You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1. 描述上圖所示的手機(jī)用戶數(shù)的變化情況
2. 出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因
3. 對(duì)此現(xiàn)象作出評(píng)價(jià)
Cell Phones
As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.
There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.
The wide use of cell phones has made them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life. The functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.
點(diǎn)評(píng):隨著我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展,人民的生活水平不斷改善,通訊業(yè)的日新月異的發(fā)展,使得手機(jī)使用普及化,成為人們?nèi)粘I畹谋匦杵?,?duì)此的利弊人們看法各異。本范例題為熱點(diǎn)話題,同樣是年輕人較熟悉和經(jīng)常討論的話題,值得關(guān)注。
范例八
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic
Advertisement. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 廣告的作用
2. 廣告的形式多樣
3. 廣告的夸張性
Advertisement
Advertisements are forcing their way into people’s lives. People refer to advertisements in their daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are usually manufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every product is advertised in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.
There are many ways to advertise and ‘a(chǎn)ds’ come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience. Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms..
However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim to such advertising. Millions of people?have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them。
點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一篇說(shuō)明文,用說(shuō)明的表達(dá)方式來(lái)解說(shuō)事物,闡明事理。寫(xiě)好說(shuō)明文,不僅要抓住特征,注意條理,而且要巧妙運(yùn)用說(shuō)明方法,像下定義、舉例子、作比較、分類(lèi)別、列數(shù)字、打比方等
范例九
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus. You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
假設(shè)你是李明,請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封信給校長(zhǎng),建議改善本校體育設(shè)施狀況,內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及體育設(shè)施對(duì)大學(xué)生的重要性,對(duì)目前學(xué)校體育設(shè)施的狀況可以表?yè)P(yáng),可以提出批評(píng)建議,也可以兼而有之。
A Letter to the President of the University
Dear Mr. President,
I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities on campus. I have noticed that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.
As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people. If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.
My proposal is to build a new sports area. It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind. It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year round. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.
Thank you for your reading this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
點(diǎn)評(píng):本范例題仿真度頗高,為校園生活話題,與在校大學(xué)生日常生活密切相關(guān),是最近幾年側(cè)重考查的題材。2002年1月考查了就本校食堂狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信.
范例十
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Blog. You should write at least 120 words based on the chart and outline given below:
下圖是2007年1-10月中國(guó)博客服務(wù)人均月度有效瀏覽時(shí)間及增長(zhǎng)率,描述變化,說(shuō)明原因。
Blog
This histogram shows the number of people using blog services from January to October in 2007. From it we can see that the number of users increased monthly from January to August, except February. After two peak months, July and August, the number dropped slightly in September, while in October it picked up again.
Possible reasons for these changes are first, in February Chinese people celebrated the most important festival——Chinese New Year. This means more people spent more time with their families and friends, and therefore they didn’t have as much time for surfing online. Secondly, college students are the main users of blog services. While in July and August,they had summer holidays, which enabled them to have more spare time reading and writing blogs. Thirdly, with improvements of blog services and the influence of some “star bloggers”, most of whom are celebrities, blogs are becoming an important way for people to express themselves and communicate with others. So more and more people are starting to use these services, which help explain the overall increase shown here.
點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一篇圖表題。 可以看出,整體呈增長(zhǎng)趨勢(shì)。但是,二月和九月有所下降。所以,分析的時(shí)候要照顧各個(gè)方面。www.mfyyw.com整理
范例十一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 近幾年出現(xiàn)了大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象
2. 產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因(如大學(xué)生追求的目標(biāo)過(guò)高,專(zhuān)業(yè)不對(duì)口等)
3. 如何解決這一問(wèn)題(改變就業(yè)觀念,大學(xué)生再培訓(xùn)等)
College Students’ Job Hunting
In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?
There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.
Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains. They should be down-to–earth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.
點(diǎn)評(píng):本范例題為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題。近年來(lái)大學(xué)生就業(yè)難日益成為各級(jí)政府及社會(huì)各方面關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn),媒體也廣泛報(bào)道了大學(xué)生就業(yè)形勢(shì)嚴(yán)峻,呼吁全社會(huì)共同努力;此外,該范例題也與大學(xué)生就業(yè)密切相關(guān),也是四級(jí)作文選題重點(diǎn)之一。
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范例十二
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of traffic jam. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1.在現(xiàn)代社會(huì),城市交通問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重
2.城市交通問(wèn)題的表現(xiàn)以及對(duì)人們生活的影響
3.解決的方法與措施
Traffic Jam
There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the vexing problem. How to solve the headache?.
The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus systems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can create a system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.
點(diǎn)評(píng):交通話題一直是四級(jí)作文命題話題之一。1990年6月考查過(guò)How to solve the problem of Heavy Traffic,1994年1月考題 The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller也與交通有關(guān),近年來(lái),隨著私家車(chē)的日益增多,城市交通擁堵凸顯,出行難越來(lái)越成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。
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范例十三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Environmental Protection. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 全球變暖對(duì)地球環(huán)境造成了很大影響
2. 引起全球變暖的原因
3. 我們需要采取的措施
Environmental Protection
No one,regardless of race, religion or nationality, can deny that the world we live in is becoming increasingly intolerable because of the effects of global warming. According to many experts, even greater impacts are still on the way.
There are numerous causes for this problem. On one hand, human-related emissions of carbon into the atmosphere is causing, and will in the future cause, significant global warming according to the theory. On the other hand, the lack of knowledge about the importance of protecting environment hinders the solving of the problem.
It is urgent that immediate and effective actions should be taken right away. First, more trees need to be planted to help improve and beautify the environment. Besides, stricter laws concerning global warming and irresponsible use of fuel resources have to be put into effect and achieved good results. In a word, there is a long way to go before we can take a comfortable world for granted again .
點(diǎn)評(píng):環(huán)境問(wèn)題也是四級(jí)作文命題重點(diǎn)話題之一。大學(xué)英語(yǔ)(Q吧)四級(jí)考試曾經(jīng)考過(guò)Make our Cities Greener.近年來(lái),全球氣候異常,造成許多自然災(zāi)害的頻繁,保護(hù)環(huán)境刻不容緩,已成為全社會(huì)乃至全人類(lèi)共同關(guān)注的熱點(diǎn)。
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范例十四
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
Credit Cards. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 越來(lái)越多的人使用信用卡, 信用卡有哪些好處
2. 信用卡的弊端
3. 你自己的觀點(diǎn)
Credit Cards
Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China. Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as “plastic money”, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to “buy now, pay later”, and many see this as an advantage.
But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people.
However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people’s lives. They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.
點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一篇議論文, 關(guān)于信用卡的利弊??梢苑殖扇糠郑?第一部分,信用卡的好處,比如說(shuō)應(yīng)急等;第二部分,信用卡的一些弊端,比如說(shuō)鼓勵(lì)一些無(wú)用的消費(fèi);第三部分:你自己的觀點(diǎn),理性使用。
范例十五
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Pet Raising . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人喜歡養(yǎng)動(dòng)物作為寵物。
2. 有些人反對(duì)圈養(yǎng)動(dòng)物作為寵物。
3. 你的觀點(diǎn)。
Pet Raising
Nowadays, with the improvement of the people’s living standard, some people form a habit of raising small or domestic animals as pets. Some raise small dogs or cats as their pets while others raise various birds or fishes as their pets.
However, some people object to the idea of raising animals as pets. To them, animals have their own right to live a natural life like human beings. On the other hand, the way people raise animals as pets have a negative influence on the surroundings ,for example, dogs’ chasing people on the street and so on. What’s more, some animals will transmit some diseases.
In my opinion, I do not like the idea to raise animals as?pets. We should not deprive them of their natural right. In this way, we will live in a peaceful world in harmony with the other living creatures.
范例十六
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How People Spend Their Holidays. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the table and the outline given below:
1、 根據(jù)上表,簡(jiǎn)要描述1990年、1995年、2000年某城市人們度假方式的情況及其變化;
2、 請(qǐng)說(shuō)明發(fā)生這些變化的原因;
3、 得出結(jié)論。
How People Spend Their Holidays
As is clearly shown in the table that there was a dramatic change in the way people spent their holidays between 1990 and 2000. Especially, in 1990, 63% of people spent their holidays at home, while the figure decreased considerably to 24% in 2000. There are three reasons for this phenomenon.
To begin with, with the development of market-oriented economy, people earn by far more money than they used to, making it possible for them to afford traveling expenses. In addition, people realize the importance of getting well-informed about the outside world in this modern era to develop their potential. For example, a traveller may encounter or talk with someone of a different cultural background so as to broaden his vision. Last but not least, by traveling outside, people are close to nature, which is not only beneficial to both their health and peace of mind. In short, more and more people take the occasion of holiday to travel outside and relax themselves.
As far as I am concerned, I prefer to go traveling instead of staying at home during holidays. On the one hand, I love meeting different people and take in some fresh ideas. On the other hand, it is agreed that the world is becoming a global village. No one could confine himself within his small circle of families or relatives. In brief, I have benefited a lot and will benefit more from traveling during the holidays.
點(diǎn)評(píng):該篇作文屬圖表作文,命題思路與四級(jí)真題圖表作文一致,仿真度高。本范例題關(guān)于人們旅游度假方式的變化,也是社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題,2006年1月就考過(guò)名校校園該不該成為旅游景點(diǎn)話題;2004年6月也是關(guān)于旅游景點(diǎn)的介紹。
范例十七
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Social Practice.You should write at least120words following the outline below in Chinese.
a) 社會(huì)實(shí)踐的作用
b) 可能產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題
c) 提出建議
Social Practice
Social practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges. Students are asked to enter society and get some idea of it. Surely social practice has many advantages. Firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some valuable social experience, which will be useful to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work, thus knowing themselves more clearly. Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.
However, some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies. And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future studies.
In order to carry out social practice smoothly, students should first know its objective. They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement, so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.
點(diǎn)評(píng):本篇文章屬于解釋性說(shuō)明文。就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)要求大學(xué)生具有豐富的社會(huì)實(shí)踐,才能適應(yīng)就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng),所以現(xiàn)在在校大學(xué)生參與社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)頻繁,但如何處理好學(xué)業(yè)和社會(huì)實(shí)踐的關(guān)系成為人們關(guān)注的話題。本范例題與大學(xué)生生活密切相關(guān),也是四級(jí)作文關(guān)注的重要話題。
范例十七
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Social Practice.You should write at least120words following the outline below in Chinese.
a) 社會(huì)實(shí)踐的作用
b) 可能產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題
c) 提出建議
Social Practice
Social practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges. St tudents are asked to enter society and get some idea of it. Surely social practice has many advantages. Firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some valuable social experience, which will be useful to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work, thus knowing themselves more clearly. Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.
However, some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies. And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future studies.
In order to carry out social practice smoothly, students should first know its objective. They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement, so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.
點(diǎn)評(píng):本篇文章屬于解釋性說(shuō)明文。就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)要求大學(xué)生具有豐富的社會(huì)實(shí)踐,才能適應(yīng)就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng),所以現(xiàn)在在校大學(xué)生參與社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)頻繁,但如何處理好學(xué)業(yè)和社會(huì)實(shí)踐的關(guān)系成為人們關(guān)注的話題。本范例題與大學(xué)生生活密切相關(guān),也是四級(jí)作文關(guān)注的重要話題
范例十八
Directions:
1. 上圖所示為我國(guó)吸毒者年齡分布情況,請(qǐng)描述其變化
2. 請(qǐng)說(shuō)明發(fā)生這些變化的原因
3. 這一變化對(duì)社會(huì)和個(gè)人的影響
As can be seen from the graph, there have been sharp changes in the age distribution of drug addicts. To be concrete, the teenage addicts only made up 10 percent of all the drugsters in 1982 while the ratio rose up to 65 in 2002.
The causes for them are not hard to find. First , teenagers’ fearless curiosity about everything new has led some of them into this marsh. Second, many of the young addicts turned for the first time to drugs for escape either from their failure in the national entrance exams or from their parents’ breakup. And above all, our education in the harmfulness of drugs has been far from adequate to build teenagers’ sound resistance to drugs. To sum up, the causes mentioned above must call for more of our concern, and effective measures should be taken to check the trend.
Obviously the drastic change will exert great impact on individuals and the whole society.
For one thing, drug-taking does great damage to the health of drug users.. For another, some drug users commit robbery or even murder their parents and relatives to get money to buy drugs, which poses a great threat to the social security and the social stability. Therefore, it is high time we did something to put an end to this trend.
點(diǎn)評(píng):該范例題為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題,四級(jí)考試命題作文??碱}材。本文屬于圖表作文的寫(xiě)作。根據(jù)四級(jí)圖表作文命題規(guī)律,第一段文章描述了圖表中所反映的我國(guó)吸毒者年齡的分布最近二十年的變化情況,;第二段說(shuō)明了產(chǎn)生這種變化的原因;最后一段陳述了吸毒無(wú)論是對(duì)個(gè)人的身體健康和社會(huì)的安全和穩(wěn)定都構(gòu)成了巨大的威脅,呼吁全社會(huì)共同努力消除這種不良現(xiàn)象。
范例十九
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 心理健康問(wèn)題往往是導(dǎo)致疾病的原因
2. 分析人們產(chǎn)生心理健康問(wèn)題的原因(可從失業(yè)、壓力過(guò)重、缺乏支持、缺乏人際交往能力等方面分析)
3. 你認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)如何保持心理健康
How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?
One in four people will experience some kind of mental problem in the course of a year. When you fail to manage these problems, they are likely to cause various mental illnesses.
The cause of mental health problems often vary a lot from one case to another. In today’s society, a good number of people are suffering from heavy pressure. Others lack communication skills. In addition, a lot of people are ignorant of psychological knowledge about how to keep mentally fit.
There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy. Firstly, find the real cause of your mental health problem and see whether you can do something about it. Secondly, learn to relax yourself and take exercises to release the pressure. Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk to your partner or friend about your problem, or seek support and advice form a psychological consultant
點(diǎn)評(píng):據(jù)報(bào)道北京高校100多萬(wàn)名在校大學(xué)生中,已經(jīng)有14名自殺身亡。而去年全年,北京自殺死亡的學(xué)生為19人。社會(huì)對(duì)于大學(xué)生心理健康問(wèn)題越來(lái)越關(guān)注,如何保持心理健康成為社會(huì)關(guān)注話題。本范例題與校園生活聯(lián)系緊密,是四級(jí)考試關(guān)注度較高的話題,值得重視。
范例二十
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composi-tion on the topic Aid Education in China.You should write at least 120 words f-ollowing the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 每年,高校許多大學(xué)生受到鼓舞去貧困地區(qū)支教。
2. 支教活動(dòng)的意義。
3. 我的看法。
Aid Education in China
Each year, college students, encouraged to aid students in the poverty-stricken areas, volunteer themselves in poor villages for a year and try to improve education in poor areas.
Aid-education has been beneficial in two aspects. On the one hand, college volunteers are really devoted to the cause. They have opened the eyes of students in underdeveloped regions to the outside world by bringing them new knowledge and thoughts. As a result, they are extremely well-received by the children there. On the other hand, college students have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions. ????They are enjoying the appreciation and no-distance friendship from the children. What’s more, they are greatly inspired by the moving and tireless spirit of the children.
In my opinion, China’s educational development can’t be isolated from each individual and we college students should take the lead in response to the appeal for offering aid to children in poor areas.
范例二十一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 現(xiàn)在某些高校校園禁止車(chē)輛駛?cè)耄?/p>
2. 這種規(guī)定的考慮,
3. 談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>
Should cars be allowed into College Campus?
With the rapid development of our national economy, private cars have become in large number; of course, quite a few cars are heavily driven into College Campus.
In a significant way, these cars do not take up students’ places for study, but actually affect their daily life and study-- for instance, this crowd of cars may make noise and emit filthy gas to choke us to death. And the campus is jammed with lines of cars and seems to be parking lot instead of an academic institute. So cars have been strictly prohibited into many College Campuses. It seems that this is not convenience to some persons, indeed, but this is for the sake of our safety. Thus when someone enjoys convenience from modern tools, don't forget that it is dangerous to the students in the College Campus. Therefore, I agree that cars are not allowed into College Campus.
By and large, with the price of cars falling significantly, cars will enter average families, and most Chinese will enjoy a luxurious lifestyle in their life. However, they are still prohibited to drive their cars into College Campus, which , I think, is a hard truth in the eyes of most people.
點(diǎn)評(píng):隨著人們物質(zhì)生活的提高,私家車(chē)發(fā)展迅猛,越來(lái)越多的私家車(chē)停放在校園,由此產(chǎn)生了一些問(wèn)題,如空間被占、噪音污染、環(huán)境污染等,為此許多學(xué)校禁止車(chē)輛駛?cè)胄@,本范例題與2006年1月名校校園是否對(duì)外開(kāi)放相仿,值得關(guān)注。
范例二十二
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : Information Security. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 信息安全問(wèn)題日益重要
2. 信息安全事故可能導(dǎo)致的危害
3. 如何做到信息安全
Information Security
The human beings are stepping into the information society. The information industry develops very rapidly, so do the hackers, trick-playing teens, exploring children, fraudsters, and serious white-collar criminals. Thus, information security becomes an impending important issue.
In case of information breach, the victims-----government department, an organization or an institution, or a company will inevitably suffer great or small loss. Government may be threatened with national security. Companies may lose opportunities to develop new projects. And the public’s and users’ confidence will be damaged.
Then how to deal with this issue? Technology is only a partial solution to information security. What’s more important is that organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information security to its staff. However, since no system can ever be 100 percent secure, a prevention-only approach to information security management is not enough. Companies and organizations should adopt a dual approach to information security management by combing prevention and detection techniques.
點(diǎn)評(píng):隨著我們步入信息社會(huì)和計(jì)算機(jī)應(yīng)用的普及,利用計(jì)算機(jī)犯罪案件不斷上升,信息安全事故頻繁發(fā)生,媒體也不時(shí)有大量相關(guān)報(bào)道,如何保護(hù)信息安全成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn),本范例題為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn),值得關(guān)注。
范例二十三
Directions: Suppose you were Li Ming. You want to apply for a job as a personal secretary to the General Manager of a trading company. Write a letter to the Human Resources Department of the company . You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below.
1. 簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己并說(shuō)明應(yīng)征該職位
2. 告知公司為什么對(duì)此感興趣
3. 簡(jiǎn)述你為何是合適人選
An Application Letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Ming, a would-be graduate from Ninjing University. My major is English. Through the job advertisement, I have learned that you are hunting a qualified individual for a personal secretary to the General Manager of your esteemed company. I am fully convinced that I am the right person for the job.
I realize that my future boss is extremely busy. However, it is exactly the challenge of my prospective position that attracts me. I am sure that my honesty, carefulness,patience,expertise , commitment and extensive knowledge will produce an excellent job performance.
Next month, I am going to graduate from the English Department of Nanjing University, and I have over two years of secretarial experience. I have enclosed the details of my academic record, skills, and language abilities. Thank you for your time in considering my application.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
點(diǎn)評(píng):本文屬于書(shū)信體應(yīng)用文,要求寫(xiě)一封求職信。找工作是四級(jí)命題作文關(guān)注的話題之一,2001年1月和1995年6月都考查了求職面試的話題,本范例題要求寫(xiě)一封求職信,既與求職話題相關(guān),又是書(shū)信體作文,符合四級(jí)作文命題思路和考查重點(diǎn)。
范例二十四
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: No pains,no gains You should write at least120 words following the outline below in Chinese.
1. 為什么說(shuō)“不勞就無(wú)獲”
2. 試舉例說(shuō)明
No pains, no gains
Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb “ No pains, no gains.” It means that nothing can be gained without painstaking efforts and that no knowledge or skill can be acquired without sweat or toil.
You don’t have to look very far too prove the truth of the proverb. Darwin’s great discovery was not the work of a moment but was preceded by years of patient, arduous observation. Mozart was not an accomplished pianist at the age of eight as the result of watching countless hours of TV. Nor did Edison make himself the greatest inventor in the modern world by spending his spare time on going to parties or bars. His words “Genius is 99 percent perspiration and one percent inspiration ,reveals the secret of thousands of successful men and women. All accomplishments and success come from sustained endeavor.
Although it is an old saying,“ no pains no gains” has its profound and realistic significance in our college studies. To acquire knowledge in a particular field and to attain any academic goals, great exertion and persistent effort are undoubtedly required because we all know that “No pains, no gains.”
點(diǎn)評(píng):該范例題與四級(jí)1997年1月作文命題類(lèi)似,屬于論證道理性的解釋性說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作,已有多年未考,值得關(guān)注。根據(jù)此類(lèi)作文命題規(guī)律,第一段對(duì)這一格言所蘊(yùn)涵的意義做了解釋和界定。第二段舉例說(shuō)明了其哲理性;最后一段說(shuō)明它的現(xiàn)實(shí)意義,重述主題。
范例二十五
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Lectures or Discussions. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 一些學(xué)生贊成講座式教學(xué)
2. 另一些學(xué)生偏愛(ài)討論式教學(xué)
3. 你的看法
Lectures and Discussions
There is a heated debate over the role of lectures and discussions in the classroom. Some people believe that lectures can help students learn more quickly. In contrast, others hold that discussions can stimulate students to learn by themselves.
Those who hold the first opinion suggest that students attend more lectures. In their view, by giving lectures teachers help students master the knowledge they’ve accumulated over years of study and research. However, others think that in a discussion, the teacher usually guides the students instead of dominating them. They argue that to get involved in a discussion, students have to develop their ability to analyze problems independently.
In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea. First of all, either method has its disadvantages. Furthermore, each student has his or her preference. Thirdly, lectures ate preferable to discussions in the teaching of science subjects, and on the contrary, discussions are preferable to lectures in studying the humanities. Therefore, we should adopt different teaching methods according to different subjects.
點(diǎn)評(píng):2007年12月考查了大學(xué)生選修課話題,再次證明四級(jí)作文命題自2003年以后側(cè)重于校園生活話題,該范例與校園生活聯(lián)系緊密,為四級(jí)作文命題經(jīng)常關(guān)注的話題。本文屬于對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)加作者態(tài)度型的議論文寫(xiě)作。
范例二十五
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Lectures or Discussions. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 一些學(xué)生贊成講座式教學(xué)
2. 另一些學(xué)生偏愛(ài)討論式教學(xué)
3. 你的看法
Lectures and Discussions
There is a heated debate over the role of lectures and discussions in the classroom. Some people believe that lectures can help students learn more quuickly. In contrast, others hold that discussions can stimulate students to learn by themselves.
Those who hold the first opinion suggest that students attend more lectures. In their view, by giving lectures teachers help students master the knowledge they’ve accumulated over years of study and research. However, others think that in a discussion, the teacher usually guides the students instead of dominating them. They argue that to get involved in a discussion, students have to develop their ability to analyze problems independently.
In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea. First of all, either method has its disadvantages. Furthermore, each student has his or her preference. Thirdly, lectures ate preferable to discussions in the teaching of science subjects, and on the contrary, discussions are preferable to lectures in studying the humanities. Therefore, we should adopt different teaching methods according to different subjects.
點(diǎn)評(píng):2007年12月考查了大學(xué)生選修課話題,再次證明四級(jí)作文命題自2003年以后側(cè)重于校園生活話題,該范例與校園生活聯(lián)系緊密,為四級(jí)作文命題經(jīng)常關(guān)注的話題。本文屬于對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)加作者態(tài)度型的議論文寫(xiě)作。
范例二十六
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: My View on Online Education.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
1. 目前網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育形成熱潮
2. 你認(rèn)為這股熱潮形成的原因
3. 你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育的評(píng)價(jià)
My View on Online Education.
Being online is no longer something new or fresh in our life. To some extent, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends far away. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education.
Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the Internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with fantastic speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society, many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.
Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Best of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.
點(diǎn)評(píng):英特網(wǎng)的迅速發(fā)展改變了人們的生活和學(xué)習(xí)、工作方式,現(xiàn)代生活節(jié)奏快、工作忙導(dǎo)致人們沒(méi)時(shí)間全日制的學(xué)習(xí),網(wǎng)絡(luò)和遠(yuǎn)程教育正好滿足了人們的學(xué)習(xí)需要,許多大學(xué)生利用因特網(wǎng)學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí),它成為傳統(tǒng)教學(xué)的有益補(bǔ)充。本范例題貼近時(shí)代,也與大學(xué)生校園生活相關(guān),值得重視。
范例二十七
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China You should write at least120 words following the outline below in Chinese.
1. 中國(guó)的污染的現(xiàn)狀
2. 造成污染的原因
3. 解決的辦法
Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China
It is reported that ten big cities in China are being ranked among the top twenty cities with the highest pollution index in the world. This means it is high time we did something to bring the situation under control.
Many factors are contributing to the deteriorating situation: industrial wastes pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers; a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets; the widespread use of plastic bags etc.
To my view, stiffer laws and regulations must be implemented to check pollution. Industries that release wastes without permission should be heavily fined. Cars should be equipped to minimize the exhaust they release into the air. And the use of plastic bags and disposable meal boxes should be banned. What’s more, the media should play an important role in implanting a sense of environmental consciousness into people’s mind.
If everybody works toward a common goal of making the environment better, we can create a cleaner and lovelier world for us and for the coming generation.
點(diǎn)評(píng):該范例題為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題,也是四級(jí)命題作文經(jīng)常關(guān)注的環(huán)境問(wèn)題,值得引起重視。本文屬于解釋性說(shuō)明文的寫(xiě)作,主題是“污染”。
范例二十八
For this part, you are required to write a composition about 120 words on the topic: Changes in People’s Daily Expenses. Your composition should be written on the following table and Chinese given below.
1. 描述圖表中人們每天開(kāi)支變化情況
2. 請(qǐng)說(shuō)明發(fā)生這些變化的原因
3. 結(jié)合圖表對(duì)未來(lái)作出合理的范例
Changes in People’s Daily Expenses.
What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the people’s daily expenses from 1995 to 1999. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9% and 7% . The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another .
There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased income resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food. Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expense. Another one is the changes in life style. When food presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time . As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation increases year after year.
From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that people’s living standards have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction .
點(diǎn)評(píng):該范例題屬于圖表作文寫(xiě)作,與社會(huì)生活密切相關(guān),與1991年6月份四級(jí)考試人們飲食結(jié)構(gòu)的變化圖表作文寫(xiě)作類(lèi)似。根據(jù)四級(jí)圖表作文命題規(guī)律,第一段描述人們1995到1999年日常開(kāi)支所發(fā)生的巨大變化;第二段分析產(chǎn)生變化的原因;最后一段依據(jù)圖表所示變化作出了合乎邏輯的范例。文章緊扣主題,條理清楚,語(yǔ)言連貫,表述準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范,結(jié)論合理。
范例二十九
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about an opening speech. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 表明你的身份和事件
2. 對(duì)到場(chǎng)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)老師的支持予以感謝并闡述體育運(yùn)動(dòng)所帶給大家的好處
3. 宣布運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)開(kāi)幕并預(yù)祝此次運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)取得成功.
An Opening Speech
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Good morning! I am Oscar, the spokesman of the Students’ Union. On behalf of the Students’ Union, the main organizer of today’s sports meeting, I welcome you all to the beautiful stadium. After two months’ preparation, our annual sports meeting is held on schedule.
Thanks to the support and help from our school leaders and teachers. Though they have many school responsibilities, they have taken time off to take part in our sports activities. Let’s give them a big hand. Through sports, we can not only develop our physical prowess, but also promote social and emotional skills, and even intellectual skills, which will matter in our future lives substantially. So hope everybody here cherish this opportunity and enjoy it.
At last, best wishes for the success of the sports meeting and best wishes for the good results of our athletes. It is my pleasure to announce the open of the sports meeting. Thank you and good luck!
點(diǎn)評(píng):本范例題是一篇開(kāi)幕詞,與2005年1月競(jìng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席演說(shuō)詞相仿,運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)也是在校大學(xué)生校園生活必不可少的一部分,是在校生比較熟悉的話題,有話可說(shuō),便于發(fā)揮。
范例三十
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Choosing an Occupation. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 選擇職業(yè)是一個(gè)人要面對(duì)的眾多難題之一。
2. 需要花時(shí)間去選擇職業(yè)。
3. 選擇職業(yè)時(shí)可以向多人尋求建議和幫助。
Choosing an Occupation
One of the most important problems a young person faces is deciding what to do. There are some people, of course, who from the time they are six years old “know” that they want to be doctors or pilots or fire fighters, but the majority of us do not get around to making a decision about an occupation or career until somebody or something forces us to face the problem.
Choosing an occupation takes time, and there are a lot of things you have to think about as you try to decide what you would like to do. You may find that you will have to take special courses to qualify for a particular kind of work, or you may find out that you will need to get actual work experience to gain enough knowledge to qualify for a particular job.
Fortunately, there are a lot of people you can turn to for advice and help in making your decision. At most schools, there are teachers who are professionally qualified to give you detailed information about job qualifications. And you can talk over your ideas with family members and friends who are always ready to listen and to offer suggestions.
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