前言：我也是第一次嘗試寫六級作文，為了測測自己的底，我已經(jīng)接近零基礎(chǔ)形態(tài)（距離四級考試都已經(jīng)過了四個月）且完全不記得什么作文模板。當然，我按考試要求遵守了三十分鐘計時限時和嚴控單詞數(shù)量的要求，后者一度讓我困擾（因為我總是寫太多）。為了解決我的上述諸多問題和高效備考提升寫作，我選擇了文心一言，順便檢驗這一國產(chǎn)人工智能問答引擎的能力。 作文題： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on school violence. Your essay should include the reasons for this social problem and measures to be taken to solve it. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 我提供的限時創(chuàng)作： Nowadays, a myriad of movies and books about school bullying become popular, which reminds me of some uneasy experiences during my childhood. In all honesty, I was also a victim of this phenomenon. Therefore, I would like to demonstrate my own perspective in this issue, particularly analyzing the possible causes and feasible solutions.???????????????? Primarily, in my opinion, the lack of campus regulations is the key reason of school violence. Without the strong rules and supervisions, tragedies occurred one by one. Moreover, the deformed psychology caused by the original family is definitely responsible for school violence as well. We have witnessed numerous kids calling for care and discovered a plenty of cases on campus are parodies of parents' quarrels.???????????????? In order to overcome these serious challenges and create a safer classroom, the whole society should raise awareness. Improve the school regularity as soon as possible, so the class can be prevented from cruel hierarchy. What's more, it is certainly important to elevate the legal education both in the family and the community. After all, I sincerely hope that all the children enjoy an upbeat campus life. 文心一言的建議：

已經(jīng)超出我的預(yù)期，于是我再讓它寫一篇。

為了對比，我用GPT-4的鏡像開源網(wǎng)站，讓它根據(jù)我最初提供的我寫的作文進行修改（改后的文章似乎就高級了一些）。我直接粘貼文字： In recent times, there has been a surge in the popularity of movies and books that shed light on the issue of school bullying. This has reminded me of some unsettling experiences from my own childhood, where I too fell victim to this phenomenon. In light of this, I would like to share my perspective on this issue by analyzing its possible causes and proposing feasible solutions. In my opinion, the lack of effective campus regulations is a key factor contributing to school violence. Without strong rules and proper supervision, tragic incidents continue to occur. Additionally, the distorted psychology resulting from dysfunctional family dynamics also plays a significant role in fueling school violence. We often come across children seeking attention and witness numerous cases where conflicts between parents are mirrored in the behavior of their children on campus. To address these serious challenges and create a safer learning environment, it is crucial for society as a whole to raise awareness. Immediate steps should be taken to improve school regulations, ensuring that the classroom is free from cruel hierarchies. Furthermore, emphasis should be placed on enhancing legal education within families and communities. By doing so, we can foster a positive and harmonious campus life for all children. 確實詞匯揀選和句式結(jié)構(gòu)都“遙遙領(lǐng)先”。 那么在文章的最后，我們讓文心一言和GPT分別教一教我們?nèi)绾螌懽鬟@篇題目的六級作文吧！ ①文心一言提供的高級句式參考： There are several reasons why school violence has been a pervasive issue, including... It is imperative to take action to address school violence as it... The lack of... has contributed to the rise of school violence. School violence can have serious psychological and emotional effects on students. The whole society should collaborate to...in order to mitigate school violence. ②GPT哥的親切指導(dǎo)： 1. Introduction: - Define school violence and its impact on students and the community. - Highlight the importance of addressing this social problem. 2. Reasons for school violence: - Bullying: Discuss the role of bullying in fostering a violent environment. - Lack of communication: Explore how ineffective communication channels contribute to conflicts. - Socioeconomic factors: Analyze how poverty, inequality, or social exclusion can lead to violence. - Influence of media: Examine the impact of violent media on students' behavior. 3. Measures to solve school violence: - Promoting awareness and education: Emphasize the need for programs that educate students about empathy, conflict resolution, and respect. - Strengthening school policies: Discuss the importance of implementing strict anti-bullying policies and disciplinary measures. - Encouraging parental involvement: Highlight the role of parents in fostering a safe and supportive school environment. - Providing counseling and support services: Advocate for the availability of mental health resources to address underlying issues. Regarding advanced vocabulary and sentence structures, here are a few examples: - Advanced vocabulary: - Perpetrators, repercussions, detrimental, intervention, intervention, detrimental, exacerbate, mitigate, proactive, resilience. - Sentence structures: - Complex sentences: "While various factors contribute to school violence, it is crucial to address the root causes in order to implement effective preventive measures." - Conditional sentences: "If schools prioritize fostering a culture of empathy and respect, the likelihood of incidents of violence can be significantly reduced." - Comparative structures: "Compared to punitive measures alone, a comprehensive approach that combines education, counseling, and strict policies yields more promising results in curbing school violence." 祝大家進步，共勉，再見！