a) ?開(kāi)頭段：

???問(wèn)候+自我介紹+寫(xiě)信背景+寫(xiě)信目的

???十種書(shū)信：申請(qǐng)、建議、感謝、道歉、告知、邀請(qǐng)、求助、咨詢(xún)、祝賀、投訴

b) ?中間段

??主題句--第一,....第二,....第三,.....

c) ?結(jié)尾段

???補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明

???客套話(huà)（寫(xiě)幾句，看字?jǐn)?shù)）

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開(kāi)頭段：

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1、問(wèn)候。

How is everything going?

?2、自我介紹。

????由于我們?cè)诳紙?chǎng)上的身份幾乎每年都是李華，李華的個(gè)人情況是可以由自己設(shè)定。如：

I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old boy studying in...senior high school.

I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old boy who is crazy about...

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3、寫(xiě)信背景。

??I have learned that you are interested in....

4、寫(xiě)信目的。

最常見(jiàn)的書(shū)信/電郵的“寫(xiě)信目的”的最佳表達(dá)：

自薦信：Now,I am writing to apply for the valuable job/position.

感謝信：Now,I am writing to show/express my deep gratitude to you.

邀請(qǐng)信：Now,I am writing to invite you to...（as our guest/judge/instructor）.

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建議信：Now,I am writing to give you a hand/some suggestions that may help you.

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求助信：Now,I am writing to ask you for help/to do me a favor.

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道歉信：Now,I am writing to show/express my sincere apology to you.

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告知信/通知：Now,I am writing to tell you about the events.

Having learned that you are interested in....,I’m writing to...

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中間段：過(guò)渡詞：“首先、其次、然后.....”

{分兩點(diǎn)解釋主題}

主題句.For one thing,拓展句一.For another,拓展句二.

主題句.On the one hand,拓展句一.On the other hand,拓展句二.

{分三點(diǎn)解釋主題}

主題句.First and foremost,拓展句一.Additionally,拓展句二.Last but （certainly ）not the least,拓展句三.

{分四點(diǎn)解釋主題}

主題句.To begin with,拓展句一.Besides,拓展句二.What's more,拓展句三.Finally,拓展句四.

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結(jié)尾段

???補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明

???客套話(huà)（寫(xiě)幾句，看字?jǐn)?shù)）

????我希望

????我相信

????做決定

????請(qǐng)回信

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Hopefully,sb.would do sth

I have the confidence that......

Please drop me a line to let me know your decision.

I am looking forward to your earlist reply.

表達(dá)感謝：

I would appreciate it if you could.....

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I would appreciate it if you could accept my suggestions.

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I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.

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I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology.

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I would appreciate it if you could offer me the job.

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Dear Li Xiaolei,

???????Having known that you have been addicted to smoking and are determinded to give it up,I would like to offer some useful suggestions.

???????To begin with,I suggest you drink water when you really want a cigarette,which will reduce the need to have something in your mouth.In addition,I think it would be of great benefit if you take a few moments to relax,starting by breathing deeply and lifting your arms out to the side and over your head.Last but not the least,developing new interests,such as walking,biking,jogging,swimming or taking a gymnastic class, is also a good choice.

????????I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial.

Yours,

Sun Hao

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Dear Li Xiaolei,

???????Having known that you have been addicted to smoking and are determinded to give it up,I would like to offer some useful suggestions.

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????????I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial.

Yours,

Sun Hao

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????????To begin with,I suggest you drink water when you really want a cigarette,which will reduce the need to have something in your mouth.In addition,I think it would be of great benefit if you take a few moments to relax,starting by breathing deeply and lifting your arms out to the side and over your head.Last but not the least,developing new interests,such as walking,biking,jogging,swimming or taking a gymnastic class, is also a good choice.

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Dear Mr.Brown,

???????I’ve learned that you need an editor for the ”Music & Arts” section. I ‘m writing to apply for the valuable position.The following are my advantages.

??????Firstly, not only am I fond of and skilled at writing in English, but also I am a big fan of the school newspaper. Secondly, I often listen to different styles of music and have a taste for many of them,which I think will be good for this section.Besides,my mother’s work in the local gallery often allows me to be exposed to some great art works.

???????If given the opportunity,I’ll be more than delighted to work for it and be devoted to the job.Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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通知

Poster

??????In order to improve our English, we are going to organize an English party.

??????As scheduled, the English party will be held from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm next Friday in the school’s new gym. By then you will enjoy various performances, such as English stories,songs,poems,short plays and so on, which will be not only interesting but also meaningful. What’s more, our foreign teacher Nora and her family will be invited to take part in our party, who are expected to give us wonderful performances!

???????Those who are interested in the party are welcome. That’s sure to be a lot of fun! Don’t miss it!

The Students’ Union

Mar 5th 2015

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??????In order to improve our English, we are going to organize an English party.

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??????Those who are interested in the party are welcome. That’s sure to be a lot of fun! Don’t miss it!

The Students’ Union

Mar 5th 2015

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????????As scheduled, the English party will be held from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm next Friday in the school’s new gym. By then you will enjoy various performances, such as English stories,songs,poems,short plays and so on, which will be not only interesting but also meaningful. What’s more, our foreign teacher Nora and her family will be invited to take part in our party, who are expected to give us wonderful performances!

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Hello everyone,/Dear friends,

???????I’m Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager who is currently studying in Hongxing Middle school. It’s really an honour to be here,sharing this moment with everyone about my hometown.

???????Located in the middle of Shanxi,Taiyuan is also known as the Dragon City.People here enjoy the pleasant climate,which is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.Besides,there are lots of historical and cultural places to have fun,such as Jinci Temple and Mengshan Mountain which attracts lots of tourists every year.In the past few years,great changes have taken place in Taiyuan.With more and more bridges,roads,overpasses and high-rise buildings built, it is taking on a new look.It’s time for us high school students to make contributions to our hometown.Let’s make it a more fascinating city.

???????That’s all.Thank you for your attention/listening.

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Hello everyone,/Dear friends,

???????I’m Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager who is currently studying in Hongxing Middle school. It’s really an honour to be here,sharing this moment with everyone about my hometown.

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?????????Located in the middle of Shanxi,Taiyuan is also known as the Dragon City.People here enjoy the pleasant climate,which is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.Besides,there are lots of historical and cultural places to have fun,such as Jinci Temple and Mengshan Mountain which attracts lots of tourists every year.

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In the past few years,great changes have taken place in Taiyuan.With more and more bridges,roads,overpasses and high-rise buildings built, it is taking on a new look.It’s time for us high school students to make contributions to our hometown.Let’s make it a more fascinating city.

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???????That’s all.Thank you for your attention/listening.

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假如你叫李華，進(jìn)入新學(xué)校已有兩個(gè)月了，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封電子郵件告知你的筆友Peter有關(guān)新學(xué)校的一些情況。

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參考詞匯：1.be located in ?2.head teacher ???????????

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學(xué)校

在xx市中部

老師

共有200人，班主任教英語(yǔ)

班級(jí)

高一（3）班：40名學(xué)生，其中23名男生

學(xué)習(xí)

同學(xué)們熱愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)

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Dear Peter,

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?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,

?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Li Hua

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Dear Peter,

??????How is everything going?It has been two years since I came to my new school.The school is amazing and I’m writing to introduce it to you.

??????The school is located in the middle of Taiyuan with 200 teachers in it.Our head teacher, who teaches us English, is kind to us but strict and serious about her work.I am in class 3,grade 1.There are forty students in our class,including twenty-three boys.Everyone loves study and is hard-working.

??????What about your new school? I would appreciate it if you could give me a description of your school.I’m looking forward to your reply. ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Li Hua

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?????How is everything going?It has been two years since I came to my new school.The school is amazing and I’m writing to introduce it to you.

??????The school is located in the middle of Taiyuan with 200 teachers in it.Our head teacher, who teaches us English, is kind to us but strict and serious about her work.I am in class 3,grade 1.There are forty students in our class,including twenty-three boys.Everyone loves study and is hard-working.

?????What about your new school? I would appreciate it if you could give me a description of your school.I’m looking forward to your reply.

強(qiáng)調(diào)句

It is/was.....that....

你的無(wú)私幫助使我在學(xué)習(xí)中取得了進(jìn)步。

Your selfless help makes me make progress in my study.

It was because your selfless help that I made progress in my study.

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您一直鼓勵(lì)我自信，這對(duì)贏得競(jìng)賽起了關(guān)鍵的作用。

Your encouragement inspired me to be confident,and that played a key role in winning the competition.

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It was your encouragement that inspired me to be confident,which played a key role in winning the competition.

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您不僅糾正我發(fā)音中的錯(cuò)誤，而且向我推薦精彩的英語(yǔ)演講視頻。

You not only corrected the mistakes in my pronunciation,but you also recommended wonderful English speech vedios for me.

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Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation,but you also recommended wonderful English speech vedios for me.

倒裝句

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Only in this way will we succeed.

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Only with your help will we make progress.

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