詭秘外國網(wǎng)友評論節(jié)選意譯 - 【945】
【945章(不死者-213章)故事的尾聲】
Magicduckcommander
This is how a story should be! Now i have troubles reading the junk...
這就是一個故事該有的樣子!現(xiàn)在我再也沒辦法去讀其他那些垃圾了……
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(回復樓上)reverof
At least you're just reading
I translate webnovels to Arabic and after I started translating it most of the others became so boring and hard to translate
至少你還可以直接讀
我還要把webnovel上的英文翻譯成阿拉伯文,在我開始翻譯之后,絕大多數(shù)其他的書都開始變得如此索然無味,難以翻譯
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(回復一樓)Jmitch1
I literally can't find any other good novels.
我是確確實實完全找不出比這本書更好的書了。
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(回復一樓)Archipelago
Since LOTM, my preference in novel become highly strict. If I don't like the story, I quit it midway. So I can relate with you hahaha
自從詭秘之主之后,我對小說的的口味變得特別挑剔了。如果我不喜歡這個故事,我就會中途直接棄書。所以我和你有同感,哈哈哈哈
Tukang_Sampah
Ince Zangwill had arranged a lot of people's story for his own purpose.
And now, he died because of a story (Play) arranged by Klein
I'd say that's a Poetic Justice
因斯·贊格威爾之前出于私欲,強行安排了很多人的人生。現(xiàn)在,他因為克萊恩給他安排的故事而死去。
我得說這的確是一種詩意的正義【一飲一啄,自有天命】
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(回復樓上)BurntCabbage
Ince Zangwill's story is a poorly written fanfic about his horribly self-centered path to godhood riddled with grammatical errors and crappy plot holes. Klein's story is a beautifully crafted masterpiece with amazing world-building and authentic character development authored by the great Cuttlefish That Loves Diving.
因斯·贊格威爾的故事是部寫得奇爛無比的龍傲天同人,全篇都是他那惡心的,自我中心的成神之路,中間充滿了各種語法錯誤和蹩腳的情節(jié)漏洞。克萊恩的故事則是一部精美的杰作,有著驚人的世界觀構架和真實的人物成長,由偉大的愛潛水的烏賊撰寫。
Ozwin
I thought I would be much happier with Ince’s death and Klein’s advancement, but... oh Madam Daly... but right now my heart is occupied with Madam Daly.
我本來以為看到因斯死掉還有克萊恩晉級我會更開心一點的,但現(xiàn)在……啊,戴莉女士……但現(xiàn)在我的心里只有戴莉女士。
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Alessan
Klein’s ritual is so difficult. All Roselle has to do was find a deserted area. That guy was truly the protagonist of his era.
克萊恩的儀式也太難了。羅賽爾要做的事情就只有找個沙漠地區(qū)進行儀式。那個家伙真的是他那個時代的主角。
Aby55:
Wow! Now Klein is a real god. I wonder how powerful he will be with the Grey Fog! A little confused if Captain's spirit showed up or what
哇哦!現(xiàn)在克萊恩是一名真正的神了。不知道他現(xiàn)在有了灰霧會變得有多強!不過我沒太搞懂最后是隊長的靈魂出現(xiàn)了還是咋的
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(回復樓上)Alessan
It was just Klein using his Faceless powers to transform.
I really wonder what item is hidden up there too!
那只是克萊恩用他無面人的能力變的。
我也想知道那些魔藥材料到底是藏在哪里的!
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Randompasserby
Read this chapter again while listening to Shostakovich's Second Waltz.
Then picture Klein performing as "Dunn Smith" and "Daly Simone" dancing their ill-fated dance as a final tribute while Leonard watches.
The regret, longing and tragic fulfilment of the two lovers and the ones left behind, even after a successful vengeance.
....now excuse me while I go back snivelling in the corner again with a box of tissues. Care to join? ??????????
一邊聽著肖斯塔科維奇的《第二圓舞曲》,又把這一章重讀了一遍。
然后我腦海中浮現(xiàn)了克萊恩扮演著“鄧恩·史密斯”,在倫納德旁觀之下與“戴莉·西蒙妮”跳起象征著他們坎坷多艱的命運的最后一支舞,作為最后的紀念的場景。
兩個戀人分離,被獨自留在世上的那個人,與伴侶間滿溢的悔恨、期盼與最后悲劇的發(fā)生,即使在成功復仇之后,還是如此。
……現(xiàn)在請原諒我,我又要拿上一盒紙巾去角落繼續(xù)哭一哭了。有人想要加入我嗎?
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Alessan
Wow! Adam even provided help at a key moment! He likely wanted to repay the favor of Klein holding 0-08 back while he fought Ouroboros at the beginning. If Ince escaped with the Quill he wouldn’t be able to advance to godhood yet (unknown whether this is his second or third Sequence 1 characteristic). A Sequence 1 Author likely appreciates a good end to a story too.
If anything the favor Klein inadvertently provided is likely much more valuable than what Adam did in return. Perhaps ‘He’ will provide something help in the future? Perhaps will we witness the ascension of a new Sequence 0 True God soon?
哇哦!亞當竟然在關鍵時刻幫了克萊恩!他很有可能是想要報答克萊恩在他開場和烏洛琉斯戰(zhàn)斗時拖住0-08的恩情。如果因斯帶著羽毛筆逃脫了,他就沒有辦法成神了(不知道這是他的第二個還是第三個序列1特性)。一個序列1作家很有可能也是喜歡給故事一個大團圓結局的。
克萊恩在無意中給他提供的幫助可能比亞當給的這些回報更有價值。也許“祂”還會在未來提供一些幫助呢?也許我們馬上就能見證一名新的序列0真神的成神時刻了?
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(回復樓上)lindatan90
Should be the opposite. Adam is the one doing the favor for Klein here. He has a lot of demigods under Him that can help Him to hold back the weakened quill and Ince. But none of them was here means that He is aware of Klein and left the stage clear for Klein's performance of vengeance and advancement deliberately.
應該恰好相反。在這里亞當才是那個幫了克萊恩大忙的人。他手下有那么多能出手幫他拖住虛弱的羽毛筆和因斯的半神。但這些人一個都沒出現(xiàn),這意味著他知道克萊恩和他要做的事,并且給他留出了能進行復仇演出和晉級的舞臺。
DeadmanWhisperer
"This shot is for Captain"
I got goosebumps after read it and Madam Daly is my first crush in this novel ??????. The death of Madam Daly is the most beautiful I ever seen and the way Klein changed to Dunn is the most heart-warming way to ease Madam Daly death. Not to mention when Klein appeared infront of Leonard with his real face make the my hand sweat, with outstanding pale faced ince zangwill saw klein, Oh god.. this novel is so epic!
“這一槍,是隊長的?!?/p>
我看到這里之后起了一身的雞皮疙瘩,還有戴莉女士,這是我在這本書里第一個喜歡上的角色……戴莉女士的死是我見過描寫得最美好的死法了,還有克萊恩變成鄧恩的方式,簡直是緩解戴莉女士的死亡帶來的痛苦的最暖心的方式了。更不用說克萊恩還是用他的真容出現(xiàn)在倫納德面前的,我手心都出汗了,而因斯·贊格威爾看到克萊恩時,那令人爽翻的蒼白的表情……哦,天啊……這本小說真的太神了!
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burntpotato
Just when I thought no other volume could top Vol 1...
正當我以為沒有任何一卷能比第一卷更厲害了的時候……
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Tetractys
Farewell, Madam Daly! ??????
再見了,戴莉女士!
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burntpotato
*shot for mam daly, Leonard and everyone *
Me: Sobs
*shot for Klein*
Me: crying
*shot for Captain*
Me: wailing
*這一槍是給戴莉女士/倫納德/所有人的*
我:抽泣
*這一槍,是我自己的*
我:開始哭
*這一槍,是隊長的*
我:嚎啕大哭
?Dr2cool3
Ahh this is what I wanted what a satisfying end
啊啊,這正是我想要的,多么令人滿足的結尾
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burntpotato
We won but at what cost...? ( ′?_?)
Spectacular end. Just brilliant.
我們贏了,但代價是什么呢……?( ′?_?)
無比壯麗的結局。真的太精彩了。
burntpotato
Vote all your stones for this book guys. Let's make this Rank 1 T^T
大家,把你所有的月票都投給這本書。讓我們把它頂?shù)降谝幻蒚^T
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sexyvera
This is one of the saddest chapter of this novel for me... It takes you back to the first chapters... ??????
對我來說這是我讀過這本書最悲傷的章節(jié)之一……讓你感覺又想回去讀第一章……
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Courtaud
I love this story so much! You don't have to make your punches bend reality and create universes and random stuff to make a good story.
我好喜歡這本書!不需要描寫什么一拳扭曲現(xiàn)實或者一掌創(chuàng)造宇宙之類的東西,也能寫出一個精彩的好故事。
Shtriya
Damn this novel has raised my standards once again . I was already in trouble reading other novel . Now i think i might not be able to read other novel with interest .
Klein's ritual was almost impossible .
該死的,這本小說又提高了我對網(wǎng)文的標準。我已經(jīng)很難再讀其他的書了。現(xiàn)在我覺得我可能已經(jīng)不會對其他小說提起任何興趣了。
克萊恩的儀式簡直是不可能完成的任務。
UnrivaledSolicitor
Demigod....From a no-name muggle to a Demigod in little over a year.....But hot dayum. What a hell of a performance. With one of Klein’s biggest goal accomplished, he’s nearing The Fool’s public debut.
Also, Audrey, Alger, and Derrick (Maybe Emlyn) usually are only a step or so behind Klein. Throw in Cattelya and the Tarot Club will have a minimum of 3 Demigods by years end, which probably jumps up to 6 by this time next year. Slowly, but surely, the Tarot Club is becoming a true powerhouse.
半神……從一個名不見經(jīng)傳的麻瓜,到一個半神,只用了一年多一點的時間……但這也太臥槽了吧。這個表演真的太厲害了??巳R恩目前最大的目標之一已經(jīng)完成,愚者的公開亮相之日已經(jīng)不遠了。
而且,奧黛麗,阿爾杰,還有戴里克(也許還有埃姆林)通常只比克萊恩落后一兩步左右。去掉嘉德麗雅,塔羅會年底就會有至少三名半神了,這個數(shù)字明年這個時候可能就要躍升為6個。塔羅會正緩慢而又堅定的成為真正的一方大能。
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(回復樓上)Alessan
A step behind? Not at all. Only Cattleya is close to advancing. Audrey Alger and Emlyn aren’t even Sequence 5 yet and Audrey doesn’t even the formula let alone the ingredients. Only Alger is close since he has the formula but not only is he nowhere close to completing the difficult acting of Sequence 5 he doesn’t have the ingredients needed to advance. Almost all the Sailor Pathway ingredients have already been found and obtained by the Church of Storms as well. It will be very difficult for him and he has the simplest path.
As for the others, even if having demigod members like Klein and Cattleya babysit them in managing to find the ingredients they need (very difficult but not impossible) they have almost no way of obtaining the formulas. Every formula Sequence 4 and above is on tight lockdown. The Saints of their respective churches or organizations don’t know them and they are tightly kept in the hands of angels completely out of reach. The contributions they need to acquire are monstrous not to mentioned needing to prove absolute loyalty to their respective organization. It’s completely unlike Klein who got absurdly lucky and found his respective Pathway’s Angel in a predicament and in need of help.
Besides Cattleya it wouldn’t surprise me at all if the Tarot Club has no other demigods even two years from now. Especially as Alger mentioned he wanted to obtain his potion through the Church after accumulating contribution and drinking his Sequence 6 and 5 potions again. The Sanguine don’t trust Emlyn, Audrey has no contribution her Sequence is still quite low, Derrick has no way to obtain the formula and will have to rely on Klein to complete it for him and Fors is still only Sequence 7. Not everyone can be a freak like Klein either and frequently tangle with demigods just to increase the speed of his acting.
落后一兩步?完全不覺得。只有嘉德麗雅快要晉升了。奧黛麗阿爾杰還有埃姆林甚至連序列5都不是,奧黛麗甚至連配方都沒有,別說材料了。只有阿爾杰是接近序列5的,因為他已經(jīng)有配方了,但他不止還沒完成序列5的高難度扮演,也缺乏晉級需要的材料。幾乎所有的航海家途徑材料都已經(jīng)被風暴教會找出來控制住了。對他來說,想要晉級一定是很難的,而且這已經(jīng)是最簡單的方式了。
至于其他人,就算有克萊恩和嘉德麗雅這樣的半神成員帶他們,能幫他們找需要的魔藥材料(雖然很難但不是不可能),他們也幾乎沒有獲取配方的方法。每個序列4及以上的配方都是被嚴密管控著的。他們也不認識各自所屬教會或者組織的圣徒,配方都被那些天使緊緊攥在手里,完全無法接觸到。他們需要獲得的貢獻數(shù)量是如此之龐大,更不用說他們還得證明他們對所屬的組織完全忠心了。這完全不像克萊恩,他的運氣簡直好得有些荒唐,這么容易就見到了一個陷入困境急需幫助的自己途徑的天使。
除了嘉德麗雅,如果塔羅會在兩年甚至更長時間內(nèi)一個其他的半神也沒有,我也不會驚訝。特別是阿爾杰提到,他想要在教會積累一段時間貢獻度,再重新喝一邊序列6和5的魔藥。血族們也不信任埃姆林,奧黛麗目前還毫無貢獻,因為她的序列還很低,戴里克完全沒辦法獲取配方,只能靠克萊恩幫他,佛爾思還只有序列7。不是所有人都能像克萊恩那么變態(tài)的,整天和半神兜來兜去,這增加了他扮演的速度。
(回復樓上)Grandelder
Agreed aside from Cattleya none of the others are even close. Alger at least has a clear path forward although it may take a while. Other than him Fors probably has the clearest path either through her teacher who's a member of the Abraham family or by getting Klein to free mister door. The others are stuck sucking up to organizations. Either that or Klein scries a couple of deities or Angel's to try and get formulas like he did with the sun pathway. After his run in with Zaratul he made it sound like he was planning to try that on him to get more deer formulas, now that hes a demigod it might not be too risky. There's also the blasphemy cards. I guess if they could sneak someone into the twilight hermit order to take a look at the blasphemy slate. The last one would permanently solve all their formula problems but is probably not likely to happen until they don't need them anymore if at all.
Also, it occurs to me that with the quill of alzuhod Adam might have everything he needs to go fo sequence?
其他我都同意,除了“嘉德麗雅之外其他人連半神的邊都沒摸到”。阿爾杰至少清晰地知道接下來路要怎么走,雖然這需要一些時間。除了他之外,佛爾思也許是發(fā)展路線最清晰的,要么通過她那個亞伯拉罕家族的老師,要么等克萊恩把門先生放出來。其他人就只能靠從其他組織吸取力量了。要不就克萊恩去找?guī)讉€神明或者天使蹭一蹭,試著像他之前搞到太陽途徑配方一樣薅出來點配方。在他和查拉圖見過之后,聽起來他似乎是想試著在查拉圖身上再試試,拿到更多的占卜家配方,現(xiàn)在他已經(jīng)是半神了,這事聽起來也就沒那么費縣了。還有褻瀆之牌。我猜如果他們之中如果真的能有人溜進黃昏隱士會,就可以試著偷窺一下褻瀆石板。最后一個方法可以永久解決他們所有的配方問題,但這很有可能是等到他們都不再需要配方之后才會發(fā)生的事情了。
另外,我突然想到,有了阿勒蘇霍德之筆,亞當可能已經(jīng)把成神需要的所有東西都湊齊了。