小作文整理(地圖題+語料庫整理)
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
單詞積累:now(題目中)=current planned future development(題目中)=proposed layout after redevelpoment farmland(題目中)=farm field traffic/transportion system交通系統(tǒng) extend擴張 add to增加 residential buildings住宅區(qū) relative facilities相關設施 satisfy citizen's need滿足居民需求 be located/situated in the+方位+of +地點 坐落于某個地點的某個方位 revamp改造 make way讓路 (an)advanced road system先進的道路系統(tǒng) reduce size縮小規(guī)模 allow more space for...為......騰出空間 residential constructions住宅建設 句型:The maps illustrate some proposed to+地點+時間. Overall,... It can be seen that... It is noticeable that... sth. can currently be found on the+sp. 連接詞:However...;Besides...;As well asA,B...... The maps illustrate the current industrial area of Norbition,as well as proposed layout after redevelopment.(第一段改寫題目) Overall, it can be seen that the traffic system in the area will extend northward and westward, adding more extensions to the existing system. It is also noticeable that residential buildings with relative facilities will replace the factories to satisfy citizen's need.(總寫變化) 分段:通常一個圖一段 Currently, a number of factories are located in center of Norbiton.In addition,a farm field can currently be found on the north side of a river.There is not any residential constructions on the map.(現(xiàn)在的布局) After revamping, the area expected to make way for facilities including housing, playgrounds, schools, shops and medical centers, which will be connected via an advanced road systems.As well as facilities, the transportation system would be northward to the river, thus reduce the farmland's side and allowing more space.(改造之后,根據(jù)第一幅圖的順序)