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1??2021?新高考全國(guó)I卷

A?MOTHER’S?DAY?SURPRISE

The?twins?were?filled?with?excitement?as?they?thought?of?the?surprise?they?were?planning?for?Mother’s?Day.?How?pleased?and?proud?Mother?would?be?when?they?brought?her?breakfast?in?bed.?They?planned?to?make?French?toast?and?chicken?porridge.?They?had?watched?their?mother?in?the?kitchen.?There?was?nothing?to?it.?Jenna?and?Jeff?knew?exactly?what?to?do.

The?big?day?came?at?last.?The?alarm?rang?at?6?a.m.?The?pair?went?down?the?stairs?quietly?to?the?kitchen.?They?decided?to?boil?the?porridge?first.?They?put?some?rice?into?a?pot?of?water?and?left?it?to?boil?while?they?made?the?French?toast.?Jeff?broke?two?eggs?into?a?plate?and?added?in?some?milk.?Jenna?found?the?bread?and?put?two?slices?into?the?egg?mixture.?Next,?Jeff?turned?on?the?second?stove?burner?to?heat?up?the?frying?pan.?Everything?was?going?smoothly?until?Jeff?started?frying?the?bread.?The?pan?was?too?hot?and?the?bread?turned?black?within?seconds.?Jenna?threw?the?burnt?piece?into?the?sink?and?put?in?the?other?slice?of?bread.?This?time,?she?turned?down?the?fire?so?it?cooked?nicely.

Then?Jeff?noticed?steam?shooting?out?of?the?pot?and?the?lid?starting?to?shake.?The?next?minute,?the?porridge?boiled?over?and?put?out?the?fire.?Jenna?panicked.?Thankfully,?Jeff?stayed?calm?and?turned?off?the?gas?quickly.?But?the?stove?was?a?mess?now.?Jenna?told?Jeff?to?clean?it?up?so?they?could?continue?to?cook?the?rest?of?the?porridge.?But?Jeff’s?hand?touched?the?hot?burner?and?he?gave?a?cry?of?pain.?Jenna?made?him?put?his?hand?in?cold?water.?Then?she?caught?the?smell?of?burning.?Oh?dear!?The?piece?of?bread?in?the?pan?had?turned?black?as?well.

As?the?twins?looked?around?them?in?disappointment,?their?father?appeared.

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The?twins?carried?the?breakfast?upstairs?and?woke?their?mother?up.

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2??參考范文

A?few?minutes?later,?the?bear?headed?back?to?our?camp.?This?time,?however,?he?was?no?longer?trying?to?destroy?the?fence.?Instead,?he?simply?walked?around?it,?and?continued?towards?us.?Elli?and?I?retreated?into?our?tent,?and?the?bear?followed?us.?We?could?hear?him?breathing?heavily?outside.?The?noises?turned?Elli?and?I?pale?with?horror.?Elli?seized?this?opportunity?to?take?some?pictures?of?the?bear.?We?betrayed?our?feelings?by?huddling?together,?shivering?with?fear.

• horror：n. 恐懼
• huddle：v. 蜷縮在一起
• This time，however，sb. was no longer doing sth. Instead，sb. simply did sth.
• 然而這一次，sb.不再做sth.替代的是，sb.只是做sth.
• This time，however,I Tom was no longer trying to apply for the position in the company. Instead, he simply founded his own company.

At?that?very?moment,?the?helicopter?arrived.?Elli?used?pepper?spray?again?to?buy?us?enough?time.?We?had?mixed?feelings?about?leaving?our?encounter?with?the?polar?bear?behind?us,?but?we?also?knew?it?was?the?safest?course?of?action.?

• course of action：—連串動(dòng)作
• buy sb. enough time：爭(zhēng)取足夠的時(shí)間
• sb. have mixed feelings about leavingsth behind sb.：關(guān)于走后留下sth.的復(fù)雜情感

As?we?looked?down?at?the?forest?below?us,?Elli?and?I?knew?we?would?never?forget?the?experience.?We?had?been?fortunate?enough?to?capture?some?amazing?pictures,?but?we?also?had?a?newfound?respect?for?the?dangers?of?the?Arctic?wilderness.?We?had?learned?firsthand?that?sometimes,?the?best?way?to?stay?safe?is?to?keep?your?distance.?But?when?that's?not?possible,?a?good?fence?and?a?can?of?pepper?spray?can?be?a?lifesaver.?(184?words)

• newfound：adj. 新發(fā)現(xiàn)的
• firsthand：adj. 第一手的
• lifesaver：n. 救命稻草
• sb. had been fortunate enough to do sth，but sb. also had a newfound respect for sth.
• sb.（之前）足夠幸運(yùn)做sth.，但（同時(shí)）sb.也對(duì)sth.重新發(fā)現(xiàn)了新的尊重
• Tom had been fortunate enough to be rescued timely，but he also had a newfound respect for living life to the fullest.
• sb. had learned firsthand that sometimes，the best way to stay safe/adj. is todo sth.
• sb.學(xué)到了一手經(jīng)驗(yàn)：有時(shí)候，保持安全/adj、最好的方式就是做sth.
• Yiyinger had learned firsthand that sometimes,the best way to stay active is tocommunicate with our fans directly via live streaming or interactive posts.